1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2022 11:42 am Title: Chapter 43
A lovely fluffy read! Looking forward to your next!
Date: April 02, 2022 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 43
"the next day he’d decided that Dolores Garcia’s dolls were better than Pam’s, and that had been the end of that" *sigh* I miss your writing when it's gone.
Betsy and Jim's Marxist-inspired parent-child bickering is amazing. I never want to hear anyone argue against capitalism in any tone but John Krasinski pretending his mom is showing his new girlfriend his baby photos ever again. And ending this on a rimshot was perfect.
I will be *eagerly* awaiting your next project.
Date: April 01, 2022 08:59 am Title: Chapter 43
Delightful way to bring this one to a close. Keeping up with the banter, making nice with Betsy, a little glimpse of little girl Pam on the playground, she and Jim in a really good place. What's not to love.
This whole story was just tons of fun as it progressed. We got to see some really great character development from Pam. A Jim who's at his best, and some fun interactions with other characters as well. And to think all of it was merely set up for that last line. Bravo.
Great job as always my friend.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2022 03:49 am Title: Chapter 43
What a lovely read! Sad to see it end but now I can go and read all 43 chapters, but this time all in one sitting!!
I love this version of Jim and Pam so much, good job :)