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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2022 11:23 am Title: Chapter 3

Ok, so maybe not too off canon regardless. Nice to get some fill in what the cameras didn't catch there. And Angela didn't saying anything about her kissing Jim either. Still Pam feels feisty right now. Let's go with the more feisty option this time around.

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2022 06:52 am Title: Chapter 3

Very clever way to make "Do you think I should break up with Roy?" exactly what was going through her mind in canon.

"You don’t quite know how to feel about the silence that responds, but the nice thing about silence is that it doesn’t demand very much of you."

Ooh, I loved this line.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2022 04:52 am Title: Chapter 3

Aight. Take two, let's ask the question Pam *really* wanted to ask.

Or not. Nice touch working in her canon backing down. Makes a lot of sense. Oh, Pam.

“Goodnight, Pam. Feel better.” ANGELA. Scandalous!

"You don’t quite know how to feel about the silence that responds, but the nice thing about silence is that it doesn’t demand very much of you." Well. Damn.

Hmmm. I feel like Pam has maybe used up her derring-do for the night. Soooooooooooo.

#2

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2022 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

*Roy’s truck is nowhere in sight, but you’re not surprised. You call his name anyway as you walk into the house. You don’t quite know how to feel about the silence that responds, but the nice thing about silence is that it doesn’t demand very much of you.*

Excuse me. That last part. Ma'am.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2022 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ah, here we are in canon. The question though is, do we stay canon, or diverge? Hmmmmmm.........

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