1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2023 07:16 am Title: Chapter 2
"Deskmateship" just might be my new favorite thing! Great story, amazing chapterd84;a039;
Author's Response: hehehe the -mate jokes were some of my favorite parts of this fic, so it's super cool to read that you liked them! ah, Jim and Dwight... they'll never change, will they? :)
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah, I love a good script format fic!
VERY good Michael dialogue here. You can juuuuuust see how he's getting there enough that it's not implausible that he would, but it remains ridiculous.
"Given the choice, I think they’d still pick the meeting." Too true. I doubt they'd have veggie hot dogs anyways.
Dwight selling the guy on Christmas is amazing.
Pam and Roy as having literally settled for each other is a nice touch. And love the accidental reveal by Jim here. Sorry, Jimbo, can't walk that one back.
Ah, these talking heads are great. Love Phyllis' in particular.
Ngl, I chuckled at the checkmate joke.
"I haven’t seen anything like it since Jim spiked his coffee with Red Bull back in ‘03." Write THAT fic.
"Costa Rica es bonita en esta ?poca del a?o" Lol
Nice Phyllis-Jim moment!
"I know, I was jumping on a couch, and everything." Your pop culture references are really timely here.
Oooh. Very cool remix of the mixed berry yogurt moment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I was really happy with how the talking heads turned out - but the pop culture references were so difficult hahaha! I was writing Kelly's talking head and desperately trying to think of cute TV couples, but my mind just went blank! What a relief to hear that at least the couch reference landed. :) And I'm glad you liked the mixed-berry yogurt! As soon as I thought of the fic premise I knew exactly how this chapter was going to end. :D
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 11:17 am Title: Chapter 2
At first I was hesitant about the script format for this chapter, but it worked. Tons of S2 vibes for sure. Jim's jokes were spot on as was him messing with Dwight. The fact you captured Dwight and Angela's more unique style of romance so well is something to be proud of.
No wonder Jim has to take those tablets. If he's feeling everything Pam feels, but is only getting friendship back (hopefully for now) no wonder. Though there's some very telling lines from Pam where it seems like she's getting more and more of a clue.
The last bit though with the yogurt? Perfection. Hopefully it helps clear her eyes a bit more as to what's right in front of her.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the script format - I know whenever I read this chapter it can seem pretty long and quite daunting, so thank you for sticking it out and I'm glad you enjoyed it! The yogurt realization was one of my favorite parts to write! I love taking these lovely bits of canon and trying to put a new spin on them. :)
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 09:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Elen s?la l?menn’ omentielvo. :)
Author's Response: hahahahaha it took me a moment, but what a great reply! 😂😆😄😄😄