1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
"The sad part is that this still qualifies as one of his more productive mornings at Dunder-Mifflin." Too true.
"People wait all their lives for a soulmate, he’s not dumb enough to let her slip through his fingers." oooh, also a canon-compliant line.
Jim being able to reference the Shins lyrics is *thumbs up emoji*. Also him noticing the little details is sweet.
Again, good use of Jim's Philly sports fandom here, and his interior monologue is solid. Very sweet.
EEEEEP. THAT ENDING.
Looking forward to seeing you around here more!
Author's Response: Philly sports, alternate music and Pam Beesly are Jim's three great passions in life. :D I hate that ending, every time I read it I just have to laugh, it's so corny hahahahaha!! But I'm super glad you liked it, it was a definitely lot of fun to write this chapter and a nice way to bring the story to a close. :)
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow I loved this! Not sure I've ever read anything similar before. I love how you write all the characters so perfectly! Really enjoying your work and looking forward to reading more from you :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it! I think this was my first time writing a soulmate AU, and yeah, I'm quite happy with how it turned out. :) And it's so great to read that you had fun with the characters! Thank you for such a lovely comment! :D
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh this was just all sorts of cute!
I said it on your other fic, but your dialogue is amazing. Really, really canon like.
Loved the whole thing, and chapter 2 with the script was awesome.
Loved the ending so much!!
Such a great job with this!!!
Author's Response: ahhhhhh thank you so much!!!! Jim and Pam having their flirting/teasing dialogue is my FAVORITE part of the show so I'm so happy you liked what I was trying to do here. :) :) :) What a lovely review, I'm super glad you enjoyed it!!! <3
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2022 11:28 am Title: Chapter 3
And here's Jim and Pam at their best bantering form. Loved it. Even with the angst going through Jim's mind for most of this chapter about how he loves her and will probably always have to love her from afar. But then he notices the ring is gone. Makes sense that he'd think she's just forgotten it that day. But it seems like Pam's vision has finally cleared. Though her way of expressing her feelings is delightfully JAMMY. A bit of a lighthearted prank so it works.
The image of them just staring across the table smiling at each other was just precious. Great story. Can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: Yesssss Jim/Pam banter is such a delight, I was really happy with the way they ended up teasing each other here so I'm so happy you enjoyed it! So happy you enjoyed the story, love love love!! :D