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Reviewer: norsk_heksen Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2009 08:41 am Title: Chasing Butterflies

I just found this story, and it is awesome! This is totally how I imagine Jim and Pam to be as parents! :) I see you haven't updated in a while, I hope you do because I'll be really excited to read more about little Jill!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2008 04:30 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

I know the horror of not seeing a child. I work at a day care center and am constantly counting heads. And just today, I was taking the kids outside, and one of them turned the corner before they were supposed to. My heart rate sped up to dangerous levels. I was terrified. He had been there a second ago, I look down to grab another childs hand, and then he was gone. Thankfully, I saw him the next second, and he got an earful about why that was so so wrong. But thats the part I connected with. Because that fright is constant with me. The blink and they are gone.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2008 09:11 am Title: Chasing Butterflies

Jim swears that when she asks where babies come from, he's going to tell her that we found her in the woods. 

I had absolutely no doubt this is how your baby Jill was going to turn into toddler Jill.  A little wood nymph and a sprite with no fear.  Really sweet moment for our little family in Baby Talk-ville, even though it's a little bittersweet for Pam.  Nice.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2008 06:35 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

That was SO beautiful. I hope you continue.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

This made me a little ferklempt - seeing yourself in your kids is a scary and awesome thing, and you really captured that here, as well as how mind blowing it is when you begin seeing all the ways they're not you. And I LOVED Jim's journal entry - perfect. This was a delish little amuse bouche for tonight's episode...not that they're about to reproduce, but at least we know it's somewhere on the horizon now. For realsies ;-)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2008 03:07 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

Welcome back Baby Jill! We've {me} missed you! Thanks for updating, this chapter is awesome, as the rest.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2008 09:26 am Title: Chasing Butterflies

I literally GASPED when I saw that you had updated this story! Great timing too because I had just been reading a couple of my favorite chapters from this story just yesterday. I love everything that you write, please don't ever stop (especially with this story) :)

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2008 11:22 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

Wow, a new chapter of this! I should tell you, I discovered it not that long ago and fell directly in love with the Halpert family as you've written them. This latest part was sweet, and not a little sad. I don't yet know what it's like to watch your children grow from babies into little people, but I feel like this gives me a good sense of what it would be like. Great job, and I hope you just keep on updating this whenever you're inspired.

Reviewer: chipsnclips Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2008 11:14 pm Title: Chasing Butterflies

I love your stories! Especially this one. Coincidentally, I have been listening to that song almost non-stop since 2 days ago so I think I squealed a bit when I started reading this chapter lol.

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