10 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2009 06:47 am Title: The Halperts
Just wanted you to know that this is pretty much my favorite thing I've read on this website. It's the first thing I'm rating a 10. I guess I just love Jim and Pam still being in Love all those years later. I had an idea for a series about a girl who lives near the Halperts and becomes friends with them, but after reading this I think you've kind of covered that angle.
Date: May 24, 2009 08:55 am Title: The Halperts
Haha, this reminds me sort of babysitting for my neighbors, because I feel slightly stalkerish. I look through their photo ablums (with the baby, she loves it), and read the notes on their calender.... and they aren't as cute as The Halperts, but definite resemblance.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2009 09:39 pm Title: The Halperts
Awww that was great, I seriously love Jill... and her telling Lauren she wasa good girl lmao, I've so had a kid do that to me lol
Date: May 21, 2009 05:21 pm Title: The Halperts
i'm not going to sit here and copy and paste all of the lines i loved from this story. i just have to say i have NEVER related to a story or a chapter as much as i have for this one. i mean my god, i think i spend the majority of my life trying to decide whether i want to be adopted by the couples i admire or whether i just plain want to be them. i felt like this story was one of those thing on the internet where you can like cartoon-ize yourself to see how you'd look in the cartoon world. i've just been fanfic-ized? and i absolutely adored this chapter. fantastic idea, great writing, and i have no more words to say how relatable and honest it was.
laksdjlaksjd thank you for letting me know i'm not the only one who does this to admirable couples!
9 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2009 10:49 pm Title: The Halperts
They are totally hateable aren't they? :D
I love the Baby Talk series but what a great little twist you've put on it here. Jim, Pam and Jill viewed from the outside. Your narrator is fabulously fleshed out and very real, I like her a lot.
Jim, Pam and Jill. LOVE them! As always, stellar work! Thanks for sharing it.
Date: May 20, 2009 08:26 am Title: The Halperts
This is such a great idea written from a teenager's POV. And you've captured the teenager's voice perfectly. She admires their relationship and thinks the kid is cute, but also has the hots for Jim -classic. Wonderfully done.
Date: May 19, 2009 06:27 pm Title: The Halperts
I have adored this story from the first chapter and this chapter just makes it even better. I love how you have shifted the perspective.
I, like Lauren, cannot get enough of the Halpert family!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 03:59 pm Title: The Halperts
So this might be my favorite chapter yet. I loved seeing the Halperts through the eyes of Lauren-Elisabeth (love that name, by the way!). It was interesting to see them through the eyes of someone who didn't know their story inside and out like all of us fangirls do. It was a fresh perspective, and it was funny and sweet. Well done! I always look forward to updates on this story, so keep 'em coming!
Date: May 18, 2009 02:43 pm Title: The Halperts
I really liked this chapter and the different perspective of this young, starry-eyed teenager ... with her crush on the whole Halpert family. Very sweet!
Date: May 18, 2009 01:32 pm Title: The Halperts
I tried to read a romance novel that didn't quite compete with Jim and Pam.
so true :)
beautiful
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 01:12 pm Title: The Halperts
I have been following this story from day one and I love every chapter but I have to say this is the best thing I have ever read. I smiled just about the whole time. It was just amazing! I really loved this part and I actually laughed outloud!
""Here's the deal," Pam rambled on quietly to me. "I'll get to the front door and he still won't even have his shoes on...that's the way it goes...so the longer I stand here and talk to you the higher the likelihood that he'll actually be ready to go.""
Kinda reminds me of my boyfriend! lol It was really great seeing into their lives from the teenage girls P.O.V. and of COURSE she'd have a crush on Jim ;)
Just AWESOME
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 12:42 pm Title: The Halperts
Ahh, It's so nice to be getting regular doses of baby Jill. That was even more fun the second time around. What a great peek inside the family. So many adorable moments in this one. "...and I'm not a slut"...Jill's definition of a date...the post-date banter between Jim and Pam. Good times.
Date: May 18, 2009 11:56 am Title: The Halperts
LoveFool, this is just about my favorite type of story, one told from the observer's point of view. This was such fun to read--especially since this is my niece, Lauren Elizabeth's b-day :) It really warms my heart to envision this happy home that you described so well.