Date: September 19, 2009 08:22 pm Title: The Shower
Love, love, love, love this story all the time. This chapter was great. I love how well you nail all of the characters in the office.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 08:15 pm Title: The Shower
I'm still fairly new to Office fic, but this is one of my favorites, so I was so excited to see an update :) This chapter was hilariously in-character and also very sweet. I'm excited to see the Halperts with their new baby, and I loved Pam's description of "what it feels like" at the end. Fantastic work!
Also, I was on Yahoo today, and this for some reason reminded me of Jim and Jill:
http://sports.yahoo.com/mlb/blog/big_league_stew/post/ModernTube-Young-Phillies-fan-rejects-dad-s-fou?urn=mlb,189941
Date: September 15, 2009 09:55 am Title: The Shower
So excited to see this updated. I keep hoping we'll see a baby shower this season. :)
Author's Response: Here's hoping we get a baby shower! With as many times as we had to put up with them rerunning "Baby Shower" we should at least be paid off with a JAM shower! lol
Date: September 14, 2009 08:51 am Title: The Shower
Cute! I can't wait until Thursday!
Author's Response: Me neither! ME NEITHER!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2009 10:48 pm Title: The Shower
sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, i decided to choose reading them all and no reviewing, versus reviews on all, and not finishing.
anyway, i love how we're really seeing jill grow up, and what great parents jim and pam are. i especially liked reading the chapter about lauren-elisabeth, it was so creative to do something from her point of view.
and lastly, as always, your writing is so fluid and seamless, it's delightful to just read what's going on in your idea of their life.
great job lovefool, and i must admit i was singing that song for about half and hour today! update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much Pamelamorganhalpert. Thank you for taking the time to read for so long and now reviewing as well, it means a lot to me. Jim and Pam and their little family has been such an exciting thing for me to write. I'm glad I could entertain you.
Date: September 13, 2009 02:08 pm Title: The Shower
This was one of my favorite chapters - and that's saying a lot. It's uncanny how you captured each character - and that last bit was perfect. So funny and spot on, and in so few words.
Early in this series, I remember thinking: we'll never see scenes of them married, preg, with a baby, etc....so thank god for Lovefool! Little do those writers on the show know what a tough act they have to follow ;-)
Author's Response: Aw, Miss C I'm so happy you thought so highly of this chapter! It was definitely some of the most fun I've had writing. I can NOT wait to see what happens this season!
Date: September 13, 2009 10:25 am Title: The Shower
LMAO Malia and Sasha, Jim and Pam being racists, Angela upset her cat's have been left out. That was a really funny chapter - just sad to Jill was in it, but it's ok, you made it up to us :)
Author's Response: Yeah I think this might be the first chapter that Jill wasn't in! I can't believe it either...I'm happy you thought I made up for it though!
Date: September 13, 2009 06:38 am Title: The Shower
:)
Author's Response: Glad I could make you smile!
Date: September 13, 2009 04:56 am Title: The Shower
Please don't have them name the baby Malia. Or have a 'wet' shower. But, Michael's pretty sweet, if not weird!
Author's Response: LMAO...no worries, the baby's name will not be Malia. They might have a wet shower next time though- ROFL
Date: September 13, 2009 04:11 am Title: The Shower
Okay. I'm officially freaked out.
I was honestly just re-reading this story randomly of my own accord, finished writing my review, making some kind of half joking comment about you possibly updating and BAM here it is. Psychic much? Woah. One of us must have magic powers. I'm thinking maybe you...?
Anyway, this has to be the most heart warming description of pregnancy I've ever read:
"Ok, well um...just...imagine you get to carry your mom or Holly around with you all day long and they just always stay with you all the time...really close...so close that they don't even feel separate from you at all, but just like - another part of you...but a part that makes you feel so warm inside...and full...That's what it feels like."
Made me almost want to be pregnant. Almost. ;)
And then you finish in style:
"I think I do kind of like Malia actually."
"No you don't," Pam said.
"No, I don't."
Nice work, LoveFool, nice work :)
Author's Response: Hahah! That is totally freaky right? That I updated right when you were asking when I would update...CRAZY. So glad I could get it done so quickly for ya! ha. I've never been pregnant, so I'm happy that description rang true for you.