Date: March 04, 2010 08:01 pm Title: Three's A Party
Ah ha ha! Clever Pam!
What I love about this story is how realistic it is. It doesn't matter that it's not full of drama. I love reading about Jim and Pam's everyday life.
Date: November 08, 2009 04:37 pm Title: Three's A Party
I love baby Jill! This is so adorable. A lot of people pretty much butcher it when they try to write toddler-speak, but you've got it down! I love the arc of the chapter. I hope you continue for a while after the new baby arrives. Really, you don't have to wind down in a few chapters. We'll keep reading!
Date: November 08, 2009 06:39 am Title: Three's A Party
Smart!!! Jill's gonna be a big sister soon. I mean, she's gonna be a GREAT big sister soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2009 01:32 pm Title: Three's A Party
Aw, lovefool, this was just delicious. First off, I used to read my baby (now 16) Goodnight, Moon every night, without fail, probably until he started school. I have such a soft spot for that book. I love how Jill talks to herself, as kids do, how she's so smart and adorable. Jim and Pam are such loving, fun parents, and so real. Awesome job, you. I'm going to savor these last chaps.
Date: November 06, 2009 10:35 am Title: Three's A Party
:) I have to say this is one of my FAVORITE chapters so far. I don't know what it is about it, maybe it's just this new baby that I'm so excited about that's making me a sucker, but I just LOVE it.. Really great job!
Date: November 06, 2009 07:06 am Title: Three's A Party
Believe it or not, I sat at work yesterday wondering if you were going to update this story anytime soon. I was actually wondering about Jill and how she was dealing with her impending sibling's arrival. So I was a bit giddy when I saw this had been updated today. YAY! This was a lovely chapter. You have created such an amazing little family with these three (soon to be four ;)) and I am sad to read it will be coming to an end soon. Meanwhile, I'll just continue to enjoy this little glimpse into their family life. This is truly a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing.
Date: November 06, 2009 06:33 am Title: Three's A Party
All those years of experience gleaned from managing Michael Scott the manchild are coming in handy for the Halprets. Very cute story and the wet bed scenario should ring true with any exhausted parent. My favorite line was Jim saying that Jill was just as stubborn as her mother. Nice callback to "The Lover" and Michael's statement to Pam. I'm so glad you updated this - is there really any need to end it? *crosses fingers that you forget about that statement*
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2009 05:22 am Title: Three's A Party
One: Who says you can end this fic, like ever?
Two: BABYCAKES – I add cakes to everything and people get so mad at me lol.
Three: Poor Jilly, I’m an awesome baby sister, so I don’t know what it’s like waiting around for your little sister to show up, but my sister hated me – maybe if my parents had thrown her an awesome big sister party =(
Loved this chapter so much. More please, like pronto, k?
Date: November 05, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Three's A Party
Cute! Lots of chuckles :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Three's A Party
"Daddy you can't be a big sistah you're a boy. You gots a penis."
HOLY. MOTHER. EFFING. CRAP!!!!! i laughed so hard. that silent, hysterical laughing that sounds more like wheezing.
so much awesomeness in this chapter. the "three's a party, four's a crowd" campaign, being tucked in like a mummy, the princess unicorn nightgown (holy crap), the conversation between the sippy cup and the spoon... good lord. i'm going to be SO sad to see this go. i can't wait until jill meets her little sister!
Date: November 05, 2009 08:29 pm Title: Three's A Party
Someone needs to help me, I seem to trapped under the biggest pile of cute/awesome ever. Thank god for people like you, since we'll never get to see these things on the show.