Date: March 02, 2010 08:41 pm Title: Jim, Pam, and Jill
These letters are breaking me. I can't wait to see what you have next. If your plan is to wait until Thursday night to post them, I'm going to hate you a little, but the wait will be worth it, I'm sure.
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2010 05:35 pm Title: Jim, Pam, and Jill
Wow, that was sweet and just beautifully written. Great job and I can't wait for #31! P.S. At the beginning (sorry to not be more specific then that, I can't remember!) there was one sentence where you mixed up the order of the last two words. That's the only typo, though, nice work!
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2010 09:43 am Title: Jim, Pam, and Jill
Oh my. This was fantastic, LoveFool. You had me at "mama." I was a sucker for that, too. It takes me to a very specific place--when my teenager was Jill's age. *sigh* And these letters? *sob* Fantastic, I tell ya.
Date: March 02, 2010 06:29 am Title: Jim, Pam, and Jill
You're the only person whose managed to write a story that I want to read again--and it's not even finished yet!
The way you write these characters continues to amaze me--and honestly, their letters hit close to home. My Mom and Dad wrote me letters when I was growing up :) It's beautiful to look back on them as a 22 year old girl and it really just makes me so happy to hear this in a story..
Thank you so much for this story, I'm going to be sad to see it end.
Date: March 02, 2010 05:16 am Title: Jim, Pam, and Jill
Honestly, I could read this for hours - just Jim and Pam talking. You capture the cadence and the dialogue between them perfectly. When I come to the end of one of these chapters I'm sad because I want them to go on for at least a couple more hours. If the "real" Jim and Pam are half this cute with their kid, I may die of "Awwww." Well done, as always. I'm looking forward to seeing how this next part goes down.