Date: March 16, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Labor Relations
I just devoured all nine chapters....so well done, so sweet, so made me smile, so relieved my season 3 blues. The vision you have created of them as a couple is so believable and charming.
Date: March 16, 2007 09:28 am Title: Labor Relations
I love this whole series. You really have the Jim and Pam dialog nailed down. I love reading this series because I can really imagine that their lives would be like this in the future. It also reminds me of when my husband and I had our first baby - thank you for that!!
Date: March 16, 2007 01:16 am Title: Labor Relations
Oh. My. Gosh. The "Cooey" part had me rolling! Your Halpert trio is exactly how I'd picture them if Jim and Pam would finally get their act together! So adorable!
Date: March 09, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Labor Relations
There is so much awesome, I don't even know where to start, but I loathe Renee with her six-pack and her insecurity and her hating on Jael. And I don't think Pam would like her either.
Author's Response: oooh so annoying. I haven't seen it since the first episode that I watched at a friend's house...I'm gonna have to catch it again to see if she's still being a tool. lol. Thanks for the feedback!!!!
Date: February 20, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Labor Relations
In a dark world where angst, and sketchy, not-very-well-written attempts at fluff prevail the fanfiction side of the fandom, this fic is absolute brilliance and just the right bit of tonic, except of course it tastes good.
Adorable little conversations, awesome banter, and JimtheDad or SlightlyMad!Jim never fails to make me feel a little light-headed.
Wow. Love this, to bits, seriously. Keep writing - goodness knows we need more of it!
Author's Response:
AW!! Thank you so much! Is it wierd that I heard the movie announcer guy during your first paragraph there? I love it! You make me want to write more RIGHT NOW....if only I had an idea...lol. THANKS SO MUCH. You're awesome!
Date: February 19, 2007 05:32 am Title: Labor Relations
I LOVE your Jim and Pam. I mean you really have them down perfectly. I adore this series.
Author's Response: I adore your feedback! Thank you so much!!!
Date: February 05, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Labor Relations
*sigh* I love this series. You really do have their characterizations down perfectly. I could totally see them living their lives together exactly how you've created it.
Also..you make the most normal parts of their lives such a joy to read about. Really, I love this series!
Date: February 05, 2007 03:47 am Title: Labor Relations
This is SUCH a great series...I was so happy to see it updated. It manages to be incredibly sweet without being soupy and the dialogue is them to a T. And you do realize you've created a bit of a cliffhanger? She'll be back later, the 6-week, ahem, waiting period is over, Jim is especially irresistable...just saying. Seriously, wherever you go next, I'll be here to read it.
Author's Response: haha...you and firework are on the same page here!!! Jim thanks you for that, I'm sure. :-) We'll see...not sure I'm up to it, but you all are FREE to imagine it in your minds! I encourage that. lol
Date: January 15, 2007 01:54 am Title: Labor Relations
Uh, whoops, that previous anonymous comment was me. Apparently I don't know how to work this feature. Duh. Also? You are awesome.
9 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Labor Relations
Ohhh I LOVED this! So perfectly sweet. Jim would be the best daddy. I see this isn't completed...I really hope you do more soon, I absolutely adore it!
Date: January 11, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Labor Relations
You have their banter down so perfectly. And then sweet, pathetic Michael at the end. Just really, really nice.
Date: January 11, 2007 06:44 am Title: Labor Relations
I couldn't begin to tell you how much I loved this story-- so glad you wrote another chapter! Please keep writing JamFamily stories!!!
Date: January 06, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Labor Relations
This is the first Office fic I've ever read and it was a great way to start. You've got everyone's voices down so well. I loved how you captured the cringe-inducing awkwardness and then balanced it with sweetness, especially at the end. That's Michael...you want to smack him one minute, but then goes and does something that proves just how lonely and sweet he is. Wonderful fic.
Author's Response: Thanks a ton! That's SO true about Michael! You never know how you're going to feel about him from minute to minute.
10 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2006 04:18 pm Title: Labor Relations
Wow. Just. Freakin' wow. That was so cute and adorable and amazing. You have the characters spot on, especially with the little moments between Jim and Pam. I love how you had random people from the Office come in. This was brilliantly beautiful. I loved every second. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your kinds words Jade! It was so much fun! What's not to love about a JAM baby I ask you? hehe
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 02:21 pm Title: Labor Relations
Michael stayed! Wow, that really made me tear up. I love this. Fluff makes me very happy.
And yes, labor is very scary.
Thanks for sharing.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: My goal is making people happy when real life is dreary! Glad I could help out!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:56 pm Title: Labor Relations
So well done.
Funny and touching. Others have mentioned baby stories are tough sometimes. This story is a perfect example of the perfect way to do it.
Loved the end. I am a sap for a good Michael Scott emotional moment.
Author's Response: I second that...I am a sap for Michael too I must admit. He has fully accomplished having people "fear how much they love him" I think!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 03:02 pm Title: Labor Relations
I'm not usually a fan of fics with babies (I'm not in a very maternal place right now), but this was just so well written and fun. The banter was well executed...and I loved your Kelly.
Author's Response: I'm glad this could be an exception for you! Also...Kelly is so much fun to write!!! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:21 am Title: Labor Relations
This rocked my world. Perfectly charming and always in character - what a lovely, suprising story!
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:18 am Title: Labor Relations
This rocked my world. Perfectly charming and always in character - what a lovely, suprising story!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rose! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Labor Relations
so good!! made mefell so much better after last weeks epsiode. i especially loved the line: ‘Would you freak if I wanted to make a baby?’…and I said ‘Yes, because I really just had a craving for spaghetti tonight…nothing that exotic,’ and then you socked me in the stomach.”
this line literally made me laugh out loud.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rebecca....unfortunately you're in the minority - everybody else thought that line sucked. ;-) Just kidding. Thanks again!
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 09:45 am Title: Labor Relations
Very sweet, especially Michael, and very funny, Michael/Dwight. Not usually a babyfic fan, (even though I hypocritically wrote one myself!) but Jim would just be such a wonderful dad, they're irresistable!
Author's Response: Wouldn't he though? I just keep thinking about him with Kevin's fiancee's daughter that time and how great he was....and now with those sexiest man of the year quotes from JK, it makes you want to see Jim as a dad even more. Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 09:19 am Title: Labor Relations
Oh my god, this was great. I've been reading it with this stupid grin on my face the whole time - guh, it is so Jim and Pam, all the way through! And ending it with a sweet Michael moment was just the icing on the cake. Great job here!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Girl7!!! I have to say I love your stuff, so knowing that you had such a good time reading Labor Relations makes me smile! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:54 am Title: Labor Relations
This was so fantabulously awesome! I love all the cute and funny dialogue before the labor gets too hard, and then you really got into the heart of the matter and how worried Jim was for her, how scary and confusing that was. And the end was adorable - Michael's scene had me tearing up.
Author's Response: Thanks Semby!!! So glad you enjoyed it! It's an interesting balance trying to keep Jim funny, but showing him really worried about her too. It was fun!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:39 am Title: Labor Relations
Oooooh, I love it! Of course, I'm a sucker for babyfic (don't tell), but you really got all the voices, and Pam and Jim were just so funny - of COURSE they'll be just like this!
By the way, this? Made me laugh out loud: ‘Would you freak if I wanted to make a baby?’…and I said ‘Yes, because I really just had a craving for spaghetti tonight…nothing that exotic,’
Author's Response: I hear you...don't worry I'm a sucker for just "happy endings" period. Any bit of fluff - I'm so there. Thanks for the feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 06:18 am Title: Labor Relations
‘Would you freak if I wanted to make a baby?’…and I said ‘Yes, because I really just had a craving for spaghetti tonight…nothing that exotic,’ and then you socked me in the stomach
This banter is PERFECT. I officially love this story!
Author's Response: Wow that seems to be everyone's favorite line. So cool. Thanks!