10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 06:21 am Title: The Godfather Part I
So great. Once Jim and Pam are married and having a little one (season six or so?) they should just let you write the show. The way you can not only do brilliant Jim-Pam banter but can throw in seemingly virtually every other character perfectly is almost unfair. For some reason my favorite line was "I've got an entire beet farm."
Author's Response: hahaha. You never know what someone's fave will be. I'm glad you enjoyed Dwight's attempt at being impressive! You're always so kind in your reviews Broken, thanks so much!
Date: August 29, 2007 10:00 pm Title: The Godfather Part I
Yay! This was just so good! Seriously, whenever I see that you update, I get all excited! My favorite line had to be: "Yes - a dead baby in a drawer dream." That line just had me rolling. I've always been very impressed at how funny you are. And you'll always have a fan in me. Also! We updated on the same day! Great minds think alike, right. We're kinda like that famous picture of those two masks were one's happy and one's sad. You're like the happy mask because you write very funny stuff, and I'm like the sad mask because. . .well . .
Anyway, awesome job!
Author's Response: ROFL...the comedy and tragedy masks! That's hilarious....but yes, I see your point!!! And right on for us posting the same day - go us! Hmm...let me know when you're about to post again -- maybe I can swing it. :-)
Date: August 29, 2007 09:42 pm Title: The Godfather Part I
I've missed this story so much--this would be a hilarious episode...you should join the writing team for realsies ;o)
Author's Response: Man if only....life would be complete. :-)
Date: August 29, 2007 06:34 pm Title: The Godfather Part I
Brilliant as always! Michael, Andy and Dwight were so amazingly and irritatingly in character, wow. Andy getting irritated with Jill for playing with his tie! Really just wow, but I totally believe it.
Author's Response: :-) Semby your reviews make me smile! Thanks so much for the kind words!
Date: August 29, 2007 03:00 pm Title: The Godfather Part I
About Jillo...I have a dear friend named Jill whose last name starts with an O...and that's what I've always called her :) Good choice.
Author's Response: Oooh! Nice! Glad it was a realistic sounding nick-name!!
Date: August 29, 2007 01:43 pm Title: The Godfather Part I
Poor Toby!! LOL Totally didn't see that coming, but it was well worth it. Very funny. Great job, as always!
Author's Response: Glad I could surprise ya StarryDreamer, as always thank you so much for being such a loyal reader and responder!!! You're awesome!
Date: August 29, 2007 07:15 am Title: The Godfather Part I
What a treat to get an update to this lovely story. It brings back fond memories of the days when my kids were young and I was trying to balance the same tasks of wife, mother, work and school. Crazy.
Love the Dwight/Andy/Michael silliness. Loved the voicemails. Loved the pranking. This story is so much fun to read; always makes me smile. Thanks!
Author's Response: Aw!! Thanks so much EverybodyHurts. I'm glad I could bring some smiles to your day! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 06:35 am Title: The Godfather Part I
Is it wrong that my first thougt was Jill is So cute! And then I realized I was talking about a fictional baby?
And eek, Pam, a dead baby in a drawer is not a good dream at all.
Confused... in the conversation with kelly, Pam thinks 'not going to iron my 9 month old's hair. But at the beginning of the chapter, you state that Jill is almost a year old/twelve months....
Anyway's Kelly kind of reminds me of Rachel's sister on Friends who does a baby makeover... hehe. Or tries (because apparently people don't like to be told their babies are ugly).
"Ok, you're mom just" should be your. Who knew I would learn more grammar from fanfic than 12+ years of school.
Eew, and Andy and Pam baby. Oh that poor child. Actually, more poor pam for doing that with Andy *shivers*
And now Andy wants to be her god father... Angela, why do you mention these things around Andy...
And now Dwight. Its like... choose between two horribles.
And now Michael....
Really, those three... noooo.
Jim is superman!
Such a great chapter :). Toby would be the much better choice.
Author's Response: Good catch EmilyHalpert....the 9 month thing was a typo. I'll go in and change that! Thanks! And yes....Angela really needs to NOT talk to Andy, right? Thanks so much for the feedback!