Date: September 17, 2007 07:15 pm Title: The Godfather Part II
You have no idea how happy I was to see an update! Glad they were able to patch things up...I was expecting the Toby question to kind of come up in the angst, but I guess it will just remain buried for poor Toby.
Can't wait for more!
Date: September 17, 2007 04:34 pm Title: The Godfather Part II
aaaww... nice save! i was about to bite my nails off with the angst after last night's emmys. brilliant as usual, even though you almost had me in tears. :-P
Date: September 17, 2007 04:05 pm Title: The Godfather Part II
Oh, no...can we expect Sofia Coppola to appear in Part III? The bit of tension in the middle of this part only makes it more delectable - love how simply Jim makes it all better at the end (him thinking how beautiful she is in the morning? Awww.) And soothing teething Jill? And teaching her to type? Makes me want to leap ahead a couple of seasons so they can reproduce, stat! Also - the Dwight warm blanket thing was surprisingly touching (like the show) and you nailed the Michael-ness of Michael. So satisfying....
Date: September 17, 2007 01:39 pm Title: The Godfather Part II
Oh Michael! And Jim and Pam are adorable as always. All the voices - so perfectly in character. Such a treat to get a new chapter. I'm greedy though. Hurry up w/more. :)
Date: September 17, 2007 08:25 am Title: The Godfather Part II
Adorable: She nodded silently, but nestled in under his chin. That wasn't a good sign. Whenever she burrowed it basically meant she was 2 seconds away from hibernation.
Note to Jim: Don't pick a fight with a woman who's child is teething. Neither of them is very happy.
Date: September 17, 2007 04:37 am Title: The Godfather Part II
That little bit of angst in the middle is perfect! Poor Pam! She's got a lot going on and it wouldn't be real if she didn't lose it a little. I love how you've written Michael in this story, too.
"Anyway," Michael said finally. "I'm just finishing up my bacon...wondering if there's anything I can do for you guys since I'm up? Need me to pick Jill up? Take her to school?"
Brava!