Date: April 06, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Pieces
"She had fancy new pieces in her fancy new life. Pam still had faith that she’d find the glue to put them back together."
Wow. Beautiful sentence in a really great story.
Date: March 27, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Pieces
Hooray for her not stopping; she'd better find some fancy new glue and quick. Oh, why does this give me an ominous feeling?
Date: November 28, 2006 01:10 pm Title: Pieces
Damn it, Pam - just drive to Jim's, okay???
You do capture her shifting pain well, though. Which is probably why it irritates me to read it. ;-)
Author's Response: She just needs a little encouragement. And she'll get it soon. Really.
Date: November 22, 2006 09:08 am Title: Pieces
And whose going to supply the glue?? I think we know the answer to that. I already feel Pam's pain... but, imagining her in this scenario just crystallizes it beautifully. So glad she's feeling fancy enough not to go backwards...now if only Jim could stop hurtling forward enough to notice! Loved this one. Lots.
Author's Response: Aha! The answer to that takes much more than 100 words, but then again, as you said, we already know who it will be. Really. We do. And he WILL take notice. Thanks my dear!