Reviews For First Times
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Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

the 2nd drabble is perfection. i love that you've linked these stories like this, though - really, really amazing.

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

How the heck did you manage to make Jim/Pam sex incredibly sweet and not at all smutty? Kudos to you.

Reviewer: ficklevillain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

surprisingly insightful! (not surprising that *you* were so insightful, but that *sex* could be so insightful.) really well done.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2006 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Woooo for sexy drabbles!!!!  I liked these!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2006 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed these, especially the last one!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Perfectly done

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2006 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Jim and Pam still giggling even while "in the act" hehe.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2006 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1

This was such a interesting series of short stories.  Ah, Pam and the Jim lokalike.  I'm glad she got the real deal in the end! :)  Very funny when Jim insists she stop laughing when they're naked.  Good job! :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

These were awesome! The first one is so believable of how a 16 year old would feel, with a guy that she really does care about but it's all very awkward and scary. The second is very unexpected but wonderful, that she'd be so desperate for a Jim-replacement, someone to fill the void, since she's so not a one night stand kind of girl. And the last is, of course, swoon-worthy. I love how even among the layers of emotion and meaning, it's fun. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Perfect progression...love how she concluded he would do. Which builds up to the real deal...Because he’s everything. Very effective in so few words. The last one is nice and sexy too, and very them. Love that she's laughing - and what he says about it. Wonderful.

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beautiful.  Thank you for writing it :)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Really awesome. You said so much in so few words. I love the contrast between the first one and the last one.

Reviewer: GirlFriday Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

YES. Just...yes. Wow. I loved this so much!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Huh, so not only does Pam have a one night stand (you go girl!) I'm guessing that "tall with brown hair" is a big old substitute for our boy Jim. Very nice! I like the progression of first time, one-time, and for all time. Nothing wrong with drabbles about sex! Thanks for these P_Jammies!

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

The middle one is a one-night stand for Pam, I thought?

Loved this, all of it.  So much so that I'd just copy and paste the entire thing as my quote.. so I'm not going to point ANYTHING out.  Very constructive there, ey?

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't recognize the woman in the middle part. The guy is Jim, no? I like it that she's...uh...climbing him. Yeah.

Author's Response: Like Lano pointed out, it's Pam and a one night stand. But yeah, I can see how you could get Jim from it.  

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is better than pumpkin pie with real whipped cream: “Seriously, Beesley, now that we’re naked, I insist you stop laughing.” 



Author's Response:

Sorry, I'm too distracted by the mention of pumpkin pie to mention anything else. 

But thanks! :) 

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