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Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
Date: February 15, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
This made my wee heart happy.
Reviewer: Crystal Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2006 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
Date: November 25, 2006 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
This is why fanfic was invented. So lovely and sweet and the way things COULD be if only! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 
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Date: November 25, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
Author's Response: hehe - you are right! I'll try to adjust it. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1: Mid-November
Coat in her hand, Pam's smile said she knew how tired and frustrated he was.
The tiniest of criticisms: the structure of this line makes it sound like Pam's smile has the coat.
Author's Response: hehe - you are right! I'll try to adjust it. Thanks!