1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2024 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I think the build-up to them kissing under the mistletoe could have been slower, but I really enjoyed Pam's longing POV and regrets in the first and middle parts. Nice job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
eeeeee I love it!!!! i was in such suspense until the end!! :)
Date: September 01, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
eeeeee I love it!!!! i was in such suspense until the end!! :)
Date: December 04, 2006 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
"...and for the first time in her days at Dunder Mifflin, she contemplated leaving all together."
Okay. Well, I find that kinda hard to believe, considering the fact that a few episodes ago she described her quitting fantasy during a talking head. Also, 'cause...you know. Michael.
Other than this, which I found a little distracting, I think this story is going nicely. I look forward to reading more.
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2006 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was soo good! I just love a happy ending. And Christmas and mistletoe, and FNB and of course, sweet, fluffy JAM.
8 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2006 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
wonderful fic. you should continue it.
Date: December 04, 2006 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! You've struck a lovely balance between cautious, angsty Pam and FNB here -- this sums it up for me: In a way, she needed to remind him of all the things he had loved about her.
And there are two words that should never go together -- sexy and falsetto. But there they are now, thanks to this show. Scary.
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2006 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
What a nice thing to wake up and read on a dreary Monday morning. Your description of what Pam must have felt that first night in the parking lot was spot on and so sad. And how sweet when they kiss - I like how you end it with them simply saying each other's names, like total recognition. Very nice.
Date: December 03, 2006 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a nice, sweet story. Was she going to give him back to teapot? Thanks for sharing and welcome back to fanfic!
Date: December 03, 2006 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wait, go on! There must be more! Don't leave me hanging.