Date: December 11, 2006 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 10, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this so much! It's so cute, and so Phyllis. She's the sweetest, and I'm sure one of their biggest 'shippers. It's so nice all the little things you have her do to help them find their way to each other.
My one teeny thing I noticed: in the line "it was just that she didn’t think Pam was good enough for him", I think you meant he wasn't good enough for Pam, right?
Date: December 09, 2006 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet and so Phyllis-y. ;) I really hope she nudges these two in some way. I'm thinking of using her in a similar way in my Christmas fic - so great minds!!
Wonderful job on your first fic. Write more!
Author's Response: Aww, xoxoxo, that means so much coming from such a great writer as yourself. I can't wait to see what you do with Phyllis (TWSS).
Date: December 09, 2006 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Phyllis was determined to un-stick them.
Awwww, this story is so sweet! And that Allison Krause song always makes me think of Jim and Pam. I hope you keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you Bennie! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: December 09, 2006 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww-I love Phyllis. Great first fic!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much BananaMae. I agree, Phyllis is wonderful!
Date: December 09, 2006 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Can you say, perfection? Allison Krause is amazing and that was such a great choice of song! I really hope Phyllis will be the person to get these two crazy kids together (if they don't do it themselves)! Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Linsey! I'm so glad you liked it! Allison Krause is my favorite country singer so anytime I can incorporate one of her songs into a story, I will try :)
Date: December 08, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww. Very sweet! I do hope Phyllis is instrumental in these two crazy kids getting together.
Author's Response: Thanks ElizabethLynn. I was so happy to see that my first review was a good one and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story :)