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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I love that song - nice use of it here :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Perfectly done. Phyllis needs to get moving on the show.

Reviewer: kate Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1

too sweet

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I love this so much! It's so cute, and so Phyllis. She's the sweetest, and I'm sure one of their biggest 'shippers. It's so nice all the little things you have her do to help them find their way to each other.

My one teeny thing I noticed: in the line "it was just that she didn’t think Pam was good enough for him", I think you meant he wasn't good enough for Pam, right? 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2006 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great first fic!  Yay Phyllis and her matchmaking to such a beautiful song. 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww,  Phyllis! Mrs. Vance!

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I got all teary at the end.  I love meddling Phyllis.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, you've got Phyllis down pat! Very nice first story!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1

This was so sweet and so Phyllis-y. ;)  I really hope she nudges these two in some way.  I'm thinking of using her in a similar way in my Christmas fic - so great minds!!

Wonderful job on your first fic.  Write more!   



Author's Response: Aww, xoxoxo, that means so much coming from such a great writer as yourself.  I can't wait to see what you do with Phyllis (TWSS).

Reviewer: Bennie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Phyllis was determined to un-stick them.

Awwww, this story is so sweet!  And that Allison Krause song always makes me think of Jim and Pam.  I hope you keep writing! 



Author's Response: Thank you Bennie!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: BananaMae Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww-I love Phyllis. Great first fic!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much BananaMae.  I agree, Phyllis is wonderful!

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I've never had fanfic make me cry, until now. Bravo (or Brava)!


Author's Response: Thanks Ami17han.  I never thought I would get the tear effect :).  So glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Can you say, perfection? Allison Krause is amazing and that was such a great choice of song! I really hope Phyllis will be the person to get these two crazy kids together (if they don't do it themselves)! Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Linsey!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Allison Krause is my favorite country singer so anytime I can incorporate one of her songs into a story, I will try :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww.  Very sweet!  I do hope Phyllis is instrumental in these two crazy kids getting together.

Author's Response: Thanks ElizabethLynn.  I was so happy to see that my first review was a good one and I'm so glad  you enjoyed the story :)

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