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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice, Lenore!

Reviewer: travelingviolet Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2006 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww, Merry Christmas to our favorite lovebirds.

This was really sweet. You totally nailed Jim's reluctance based on fear of further rejection conflicting with his undeniable love for Pam.
 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

And when she's there in his arms, she shimmers, and shines, and glitters, like the star on top of a Christmas tree.

What a fantastic summation. This puts me in the holiday spirit! Wonderful.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Such a romantic story - and this line was especially beautiful - "And when she's there in his arms, she shimmers, and shines, and glitters, like the star on top of a Christmas tree"

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was AMAZING. thank you so much for sharing.

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, this was a very sweet story.

My favorite part: She thinks she's dull, like a spoon that's been forgotten in the back of a drawer. But Jim makes her shiny. He makes her bright.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

That was beautiful. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Sweet and funny.  I loved the whole bit with Pam resting her head against the bathroom door -- Hee! and Awwww...  And your spoon simile was really good.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Tis the season and this?  Made me jolly. (twss!) :)

So sweet and lovely.  Thank you!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness, so beautiful. So simple, but so intense and perfect. I love it.

Reviewer: Jonah5 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet!  I hope this moment (minus felt elf costume, of course, for Pam's sake!)  comes soon!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Can't thank you enough for this perfect Christmas gem. Love how she didn't know there'd be so much felt involved, 'the Nog', Jim's trepidation and of course that she ultimately shines with him. I'm a sucker for moments like this - especially when they're done this well. Major sigh.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2006 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww! That put me in a nice Christmas mood! Lovely!! And the idea of them kissing in the office with Karen there...PERFECT. hehehe.

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