Reviews For Dancing Around the Competition
Reviewer: annonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Hey! point me into the direction of a beta and i will gladly get them to look over it!
Date: January 09, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have some grammar issues in some spots and missing punctuations. Try a beta, it'll help the flow better.
I'm really interested to see what happens. Don't wait too long before the next post!
Author's Response: Hey! point me into the direction of a beta and i will gladly get them to look over it!