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Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Salt

it's the most perfect view, ever. Jewel blue water, blinding white sand and Jim.

No kidding! 

 

Loved his "dinosaurs" remark.

But I'm still waiting for that coconut oil scene....

The last line is So. Damn. Hot. Thank you! 



Author's Response: You will be pleased to know I am writing an epilogue, just for you, titled "Coconut Oil".

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Sand

Amazing. That place is absolutely beautiful! I wanna go. I wanna go with Jim!!

Author's Response: Ha ha! Don't we all! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 03:44 pm Title: Salt

This is so cute! And I'm loving the little details, like the iguanas. Really gives a sense of atmosphere.


Author's Response: Thanks, Semby, that's exactly what I was going for.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Salt

Sigh.  Just lovely and delicious.  So much fun imagining them this in love and most of all happy.  Can't wait to see what else you have in store!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 01:58 pm Title: Salt

Hmm, which is sexier, Jim pulling the strings, so to speak, or Jim with a wedding band.  Oh, the hotness.

And puhleeeeze don't let them wear the same outfits that Pamela Anderson and Kid Rock wore for their St. Tropez wedding!  Ew!



Author's Response: After your comment, I had to google the wedding that you mentioned. Yikes! No, the bikini thing was just a joke. I picked out a very cute dress for Pam, not to worry.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 01:50 pm Title: Salt

How happy am I for encouraging you to write this? The bikini strings, Jim, the piggy back ride, Jim, the shower, Jim....it's all so good. And it's not even the wedding night yet. Thanks for another little tropical vacation...can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Gee, Colette, did you like the parts with Jim? I can't tell. Hee. And while I can't take any credit for Jim's appeal, I will say thanks for the other stuff. I'm happy you suggested I write this, too. It's a lot of fun hanging out on the beach with these two.

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 10:18 am Title: Island

HEE!!!!!!!!

thx.
cheers.
--Lex

Author's Response: Hee!

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 06:55 am Title: Island

Oh it already reminds me of my trip!  At least Pam and Jim didn't try to rent a car, like I did. What a beautiful scene at the end with the gazebo.  I can't wait for them to get married!

Author's Response: I am so, so sorry that you rented a car. Ha. I was way too scared of mean locals to try driving (not that the cabbies were super pleasant). Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 06:43 am Title: Island

Thanks Paper Jam for the lovely vision. Thanks for getting them out of Scranton and away from everything holding them back and to a place with color and splash and SAND. Just....thanks!

Author's Response: You are very welcome!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Island

This is so romantic, I'm ready to fly off and marry Jim myself (shocking, huh?) Love when he says: 'Or...you could help.' And how funny when Pam embarasses him at check-in...embarassed is a particularly delicious flavor of Jim. (Do you need a time out?' Really gave me a laugh.) Really loving this.

Author's Response: Hee, I was going for the romantic laid back island vibe for this story, so I'm glad it's coming across. Also, who wouldn't want to marry Jim on a tropical island? Thanks, Colette!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Island

MORE PLEASE!!!! ^_^

Author's Response: Will do!

Reviewer: LoveFool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Island

::sigh::: what a picture you've painted here. And thank you so much for including the link to the hotel. SO BEAUTIFUL! I love imagining my JAM there! And the gazebo at sunset....what a perfect wedding spot. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I know, it's a really lovely spot. I'm glad the link was helpful! Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Island

This sounds like paradise. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Coming soon! Yay! A ribbon! Thanks, MA!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Island

(Insert Kelly-like squeal of delight here).  And yes, I would expect nothing less than Frenchman's Reef for our lovebirds.  Although, how Jim was able to talk Pam back out of that room I will never know. 

Ok, then get them back to that room -- or the wedding night or something!!



Author's Response: Please, sister. I could not get them out of that room if I tried, not to worry. Hahaha! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Island

Awww...I love me some fluff.  =)


Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Sand

So loving this!  Tropical breezes, fruity drinks with umbrellas, JAM on the SAND!!!  More, please...:)

Author's Response: Margaritas TBA! Thanks!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Island

aww...that was so sweet!  I feel like Kelly writting this review but I can't help it! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Sand

never enough fluff, that's what I say!  Love this and I can't wait to see even more fluff during the ceremony!  Squee!!

Author's Response: Yay for fluff! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JamGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Sand

Squee, can not wait for the ceremony!!!


Author's Response: Me neither! Thanks!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Sand

Oo!! Tropical wedding! Honeymoon on a desert island! Do we even have to ask what movies they'll bring? And I want a scene involving Jim, Pam, and a bottle of coconut oil! Please?

Thanks for this lovely distraction from the angst of last week. 



Author's Response: Hey, good to see you! Coconut oil? Wow, good one. I'm going to have to work that in somewhere, if I can. Thanks for stopping by. Next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Sand

haha!  We clearly have sunny beaches on the brain!

Continue!!!! 



Author's Response: Haha! Jinx!

Reviewer: monkeybear Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 02:56 pm Title: Sand

Oh, happiness.  I like the angst as much as the next person, but sometimes fluff is really just the best thing.

 So much fun so far... can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response: Thanks, monkeybear!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Sand

Yes, yes, fluff!!!  We need fluff!  (Be the sand).   Sorry, couldn't resist.  Love this idea, that Pam would be resistant to planning another wedding.  And naked Jam banter is delicious.

Author's Response: Yeah, the sand reference is one big shout out to the Hussies. (The name of the document on my hard drive is actually Be The Sand, because it makes me laugh.) I can't really claim credit for the elopement idea, since it came from a discussion on TWoP. Thanks for reading! More fluff on the way!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Sand

I totally needed this fluff tonight!  This is all kinds of lovely, and I am totally one who thinks Pam would never want to plan a wedding ever again.  Yay for elopement and Beach Jim & Pam!

Author's Response: Thanks, Morning Angel! I'm glad I could fill your need for fluff!

Reviewer: Mandy Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Sand

This story is so cute!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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