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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:31 am Title: Chapter 5

Actually laughed out loud at Pam hitting Roy with the frying pan to stop him from tickling her, in particular in light of the fact that this would almost certainly be Jenna Fischer's reaction.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 09:13 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow.  I just caught up to this and it's like The Office on crack.  I have to admit, though, I totally giggle every time Pam and Karen pull a kitchen prank on Jim.  And Pam & Jim's "scheduled" argument?  Nice.  This is quite funny and weird. 

Watch some of your grammar and wording, though, i.e., I don't know what you're thinking, Jim.  (It's you're, not your -- I noticed this a couple times throughout the story.)  Sometimes these little things can be distracting.  Other than that -- well -- keep up the crazy.  Hee.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 07:06 am Title: Chapter 5

I am confused by this:

“Yeah me too actually. Well… guess we’ll have to do this again some time.” He says smiling at her. In unison, they turn to the camera and say: “Don’t miss us! We’ll be back in six weeks so you can continue to see us avoiding each other! Here on NBC.”

 

I thought this was a story about things that WON'T happen.   And that seems to happen with alarming regularity.  

 As always, thanks for the laugh.....

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