Date: January 22, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Confetti
Mmmm, nice nice fluff. I try to resist the happy endings, but I just can't. That was lovely, Moxie!
Date: January 22, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Confetti
Powers that be, are you listening? Moxie, I love this.
9 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Confetti
A new story, and so soon after chapter 12? Excellent. Great alternate ending to the episode...now, if only the writers could take their cue from you.
Date: January 22, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Confetti
wow, moxie. i sit around waiting for day 12 of "my true love" and you double wow me in a 24 hour period with this too. awesome. i am beaming after reading that. and i'm at work. and shouldn't be reading fan fic. and you are evil, like a hobbit. evily addictive. this was great - of course she knows where he is. i've done the very same thing. of course it would not take ME all season to jump the guy! come on pam!
Author's Response: Yes, that's me. The evil, smut-writing hobbit! Glad you liked it! :-)
Date: January 22, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Confetti
This was my cotton candy serving of the day. Sweet, short, fluffy and too damn addicting. Wonderful (AS ALWAYS).
Author's Response:
best of all - does NOT cause cavities!!!!! :-D
and thanks to you, I've decided to start acting like a Diva and expecting the adoration. I hope you're happy now. ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Confetti
That was just so well done. It made my head feel better! Now if the show will just follow your lead...
Author's Response: thanks, Jen! I don't care HOW they do it - as long as they get them together SOON!!! :-)
Date: January 22, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Confetti
amazing. i can see this happening, i absolutely loved it.
Date: January 22, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Confetti
Of course she always knows where he is...it's so telling. What a great way to frame this story. So, so sad and at the end so bittersweet. I seriously got a little choked up when she tentatively puts her arms around him. And then so cute/hopeful - even hot - at the end: Anywhere. How close is your apartment? Oh, yeah.
Author's Response: yeah, believe it or not - sometimes I do like to leave things to the reader's imagination! :-D
Date: January 22, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Confetti
Moxie...I'm in love with you. I'm sorry if that's weird for you to hear, but I needed you to....hear it. ;)
Seriously...once again...brilliant!
Author's Response:
I won't make the same mistake Pam did to those words. ;-)
Thanks!!!!!
Date: January 22, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Confetti
YAY! Love the little changes. Love that they're together - just LOVE. Great job!
FYI - I didn't see your disclaimer - so I went in and wrote a really cheeky one for you (because I was trying to be a good admin) and then found yours in your Story Notes. I don't know if it's just the skin I use but story notes don't show up for me. (Must ask sicokitty about that). Anyway - I just copied your snazzy disclaimer into the Chapter Notes. :) If you're interested mine said that you don't own anything - not even the image of a certain someone engaging in certain activities in the um...shower (or otherwise) :)
Author's Response:
hmm...it sounds like I like your disclaimer better!! ;-)
Thanks again for helping me polish this up!
9 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Confetti
Moxie, are you KIDDING ME? This is so perfect and lovely. It's well-paced and sweet and I could see it happening and I WISH it had happened this way. Great job!
Author's Response: Wow, coming from an official Office scribe, that's high praise indeed! Thanks!! ;-D
Date: January 22, 2007 12:12 pm Title: Confetti
“Yes. Please.” *thud*
I think I am going to lose my mind waiting for the next episode. How about I just pretend this is it? Moxie, you rule.
Author's Response:
I just can't help it. It would be so damn easy for that girl to get things together with him!!!!!!!
Date: January 22, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Confetti
I like the idea that Pam always knows where he is in the office even though she doesn't mean to. That is so true of when you really care about someone like that. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Yeah, the sooner Ms Beesly comes to grips that her life revolves around Mr. Halpert the better we're ALL going to be for it!!
Date: January 22, 2007 11:59 am Title: Confetti
rather nice one, here. i dig it. is there going to be more?
Author's Response:
thanks!
I think this one stands alone for now - we'll see how the next episode runs...