Penname: nomadshan Real name: Shannon
Member Since: July 09, 2006

Bio:

I'm neck-deep in novel-writing now, hence the lack of fic-age.

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The Poster by Jenintx Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 17
Summary:

This is a little story that takes place a few weeks after 'Casino Night'. It mostly concerns Pam, and contains alot of inner dialogue. Michael has engineered an 'Inspiration Poster' using a photo of Pam, and now she has to deal with fallout. It does bring her to a realization though...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4154 Read Count: 1785 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2006 Updated: September 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow - the poster sounds exactly like something Michael would come up with. Your dialogue for him sounds great, as does your inner monologue for Pam. Congrats on your first fic!

Author's Response: Thankyou! I actually loved trying to figure out Michael's dialogue, he's such a goof. Thanks again. 

A Decisive Moment by karagail Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 6
Summary:

What comes next after the kiss?


Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1607 Read Count: 3034 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2006 Updated: September 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: September 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the moment when Pam asks, "What if I didn't marry him?" It's desperation, but also realization.

Congrats on your first JamFic!

A Jam Poem by bloomsgirl Rated: K [Reviews - 7] 2
Summary: Like the title says. Not new, just thought I'd change some things.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89 Read Count: 1115 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2006 Updated: September 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: September 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Consider adding line breaks that emphasize the "verse" aspect of your fic.

Also, sorry, but I giggled at "could not, would not". It reminded me of Green Eggs and Ham.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, u have no idea how special this makes me feel, and it makes me want to write more on here. No one ever compliments my writing, probably cuz I never share, but this makes me think I might have to start. Much love! :D

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: September 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa, I hope I didn't set a bad precedent with the Green Eggs and Ham comment. That was meant in fun.

Winky, I don't see any signs that bloomsgirl is trying to be Shakespeare specifically. Keep the snark in check, please.

bloomsgirl, I hope you post again soon! Please don't let my remarks or Winky's keep you from writing more.

A Reason by Semby Rated: T [Reviews - 9] 10
Summary: A missing scene from "Booze Cruise". Later, Jim re-breaks-up with Katy, a little more rationally.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Katy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 478 Read Count: 2369 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2006 Updated: September 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Reason

Interesting that his reason was about her and not himself! He's not really making it easier for her, is he?

Congrats on your first Office fic!



Author's Response: I think it was about both of them - her needing to project a certain image and him not being able to relate to her. Thank you!

Summer Weekends by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 19
Summary: On weekends during the summer, she really loves Roy.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1087 Read Count: 1714 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2006 Updated: September 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is beautiful, unfold. Pam and Roy's time together at the lake is golden, sun-kissed, like a snapshot from the 70s. Corny description on my part? I guess, but you know what I mean. It was lovely when they had it good, but life is more than summer.

The image of Roy looking back to her on the jet ski is so vivid, especially. Plays like a memory.

Gorgeous.

The Island of Misfit Toys by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 23] 20
Summary:

Toby smiled. His daughter was clearly a genius.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Toby/Other
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 655 Read Count: 1751 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2006 Updated: September 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, man, unfold! What an awesome idea! Laughed out loud at the jack-in-the-box and the action figure. "This guy is weird." Rock on. Very cool.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!  Except, you know, I'm lis. LOL.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh shit! I was just looking through some of your responses to reviews, and I can't believe I called you by the wrong name! Oops! Sorry :)

Author's Response: Hee. I thought it was funny then, and even funnier now!

Biased by oypoodle Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 11
Summary: I know this has been done by a lot of great writers but I thought I would try. Based off the deleted scene from Booze Cruise.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 537 Read Count: 2689 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2006 Updated: September 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But he wasn’t, and she didn’t.

Very nice, oypoodle! That deleted scene is such a heartbreaker.

Glad to see you post fic here - you should bring Can't Be Held Responsible over from ff.net.



Author's Response: Thanks! :) And I think I might.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But he wasn’t, and she didn’t.

Very nice, oypoodle! That deleted scene is such a heartbreaker.

Glad to see you post fic here - you should bring Can't Be Held Responsible over from ff.net.

In The Dark by im_a_guestage Rated: MA [Reviews - 15] 19
Summary: Jim receives a late night phone call from a certain receptionist after the sexual harassment seminar at the office. Jim’s POV.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5768 Read Count: 7274 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2006 Updated: September 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First? Pre-sex, their dialogue is very in character. Great job with that.

From that point on, the situation and Jim's POV is incredibly hot. And the possibility that Pam was masterbating on the other end of the line pushed it into super hot.

And this?...

"Pam, I-Oh, God...Pam!" he groaned between clenched teeth,...

SCORCHING.

So, welcome to MTT!  What's your next story?



Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome. Next story looks to be Pam's POV of the conversation.

Paper cuts and Thunderstorms by Jenintx Rated: K [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary:

A fluffy bit of silliness. Inspired by two challanges: Injury and Rain. It's not really tied to any particular episode, but I feel it takes place not long before 'Casino Night'.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Rain, Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2111 Read Count: 2558 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2006 Updated: September 18, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet. You should link this to the Injury and Rain challenges, since you said they were an inspiration. Just click on each challenge, then on "respond to this challenge", then select your story and submit.

Author's Response: Oh duh. Didn't even think of that. Thanx for the suggestion!

Infinity by nqllisi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 26] 21
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn the eternity between The Kiss and what comes next lay infinite possibilities.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 354 Read Count: 2110 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2006 Updated: September 18, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: September 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In that moment, for one last moment, he had hope.

Amazing line.

Fantastic! As I read this, I had a fast montage of images flashing, as though Jim's future were flashing before his eyes. What a great tribute to the stories that have made up our summer. Thank you, Lis!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that line, because I meant it as a not-so-subtle shout-out to my favorite story of the summer. *ahem*

Thank you for the inspiration!

A Grand Gesture by Peskipiksi Rated: T [Reviews - 31] 42
Summary: Pam finally realizes that if she wants something more, she's going to have to reach out and take it.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3568 Read Count: 18114 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2006 Updated: September 20, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding

Still love that first line. I wasn't sure how you would break this into chapters, but this is a great choice. Again, nicely agitated Pam POV!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: The Arrival

Very nice, Peskipiksi :)  Their reunion is perfect.

Kindergarten Babies by McGigi Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 12
Summary: Jim and Pam have met before, long ago.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: None
Genres: Childhood
Warnings: None
Challenges: Prior Meeting
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 841 Read Count: 2093 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2006 Updated: September 20, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As someone who's childfree, I can't relate to much of the sentiment here, but you got me with twist that the kindergarteners weren't Jim and Pam. I said, "Who's Jeffy?!" And then, "Ooooooh, I get it!"



Author's Response: Yeah, I'm child free too, but I can imagine how weird it must be to leave your kid at school for the first time. I hope it wasn't too schmaltzy. It lurks in the realm of complete and utter fluff.
Thanks for reviewing!

Depends Who's Looking by Semby Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 20
Summary: Jim needs a ride; he's feeling drunk and honest.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1826 Read Count: 3106 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2006 Updated: September 20, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man, this made me all kinds of warm inside. Yay, HonestJim.  Nice characterizations :)

Author's Response: Warm feelings are good. :) Thank you!

Codename: Chicken Plate by Willow Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 11
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe one missing piece to a fantastic episode.  Missing scene for "Gay Witch Hunt".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128 Read Count: 2828 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2006 Updated: September 21, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Pam voice!

Wishful Thinking by girl7 Rated: T [Reviews - 18] 16
Summary:

I had to write this based on what I was convinced was really happening/would happen on last night's episode.  In the light of day, it's probably off base, but....

Oh, and obviously, parts of this are spoiler-ish from last night's episode.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1478 Read Count: 3043 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2006 Updated: September 22, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, let's hear it for wishful thinking! I like your take on this, girl7 ;)

Big Body Pillow by agd300 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 6] 6
Summary: Post Ep "Gay Witch Hunt".  Pam is in her apartment, after her work day, painting.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 525 Read Count: 2613 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2006 Updated: September 22, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice Pam POV here :)

Adjusting by agd300 Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 12
Summary:

Post Ep "Gay Witch Hunt".  Pam and Jim adusting to their new lives.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 939 Read Count: 1862 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2006 Updated: September 22, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good insight into their decisions and relationship, and nice use of the flashback!

The Things We Missed by Willow Rated: MA [Reviews - 90] 76
Summary: Past Featured Story

I have decided to expand on the idea of Codename: Chicken Plate.  This will be my take on the emails, phone calls and conversations we missed over the summer and for the first part of Season 3 (until Pam and Jim actually communicate themselves)  My idea is that Jim knows exactly what happened between Pam and Roy and knows exactly what is going on in Pam's life right now even if WE don't see it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: In Stamford, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9879 Read Count: 28975 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice :)  I like fics that fill in the moments we "missed". Looking forward to your updates!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Their phone conversation and nervousness is just spot-on. Nice!

Another chapter, perhaps?  ;)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Perfectly hot. And I love the last line.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very realistic.  I like what you're doing here :)