Penname: larrymcg Real name: Larry McGillicuddy
Member Since: May 28, 2007

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Summary: With every break-up comes the awkward ritual of returning of each other's things. Here's a glimpse into those awkward moments.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3111 Read Count: 18788 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2007 Updated: July 29, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: A Favor

Amazing! You made all worthwhile. And You did this all in such in authentic way. Botht he pain of breaking up and th ejoy of getting back together felt completely real. Wonderful story. Thanks for this!

Summary: The documentary about life in Dunder Mifflin Scranton is on the air and fast approaching the second season series finale. The Powers That Be (TPTB) have a great idea to boost the ratings (and hopefully paper sales).
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15924 Read Count: 21131 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2007 Updated: September 05, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Behind Closed Doors

Yay, it's another Moxie story. Go, Moxie, go!

Moxie. Moxini. The Moxinator. Moxarama. Moxalicious.

Really can't wait to see how this one plays out. I do wish there were some, uh, visual aids for the story, though.



Author's Response:

You have spent too much time watching old SNL episodes, my friend.  ;-)

and I do wish I could supply visuals, but Jenna won't return my calls. 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Let's Get It On

Can't wait to see how this one turns out. Keep em coming! (TWSS)



Author's Response: thanks, I'm working on it.....

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Hot Child in the City

Ha! Love the awkward scene with Toby. This is great. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Yeah, I expect we'll see some envious glances from toby headed Jim's way in s4!  ;-)

Summary: Jim bombards Pam with a series of questions before their date... and let's just say it drives Pam a little batty. ;)

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1853 Read Count: 3295 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2007 Updated: July 25, 2007
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Date: July 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Questions on Casual Friday

I had a feeling it was leading in that direction, but the journey was still a delight!

The Real Deal by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 45] 30
Summary: Past Featured Story

A first fight and a bowl of make-up spaghetti. (No spoilers.)

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2405 Read Count: 7577 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: July 26, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was amazing. It was hot, but even more importantly, it felt real and in character for both of them. Great job.

Author's Response: Real and in character...the best praise of all. Thank you so much, larrymcg. And, being featured in your story? An honor ;-)

Summary: As the title says.  (Karen/Pam/Jim)
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Slash
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1584 Read Count: 1354 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2007 Updated: July 27, 2007
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Date: July 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You did a good job on this. I really like the presentation and the way the story progressed.

Summary:

AU Jim/Pam.  Alternate ending to A Benihana Christmas.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 904 Read Count: 3662 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2007 Updated: July 29, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short and sweet. I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Appreciate it:)

Summary: The other Dunder Mifflin receptionist recounts the events of "The Job".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Other
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: All About a Peripheral Character
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4235 Read Count: 8775 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Amazing Grace

I love that David calls her a nickname, too. Builds nicely on his parallels with Michael that we saw in his hatred of the HR guy.

Also, you did a great job of describing Jan's character arc throughout the run of the series.

"40 Year Old Virgin" - Cute.

She's very perceptive. The analysis of Karen is spot on. Can't wait to read what she thinks of the other events.

Now I want you to write a fic about Purdeep.



Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you picked up on that. David seems so much cooler, but I think he is more like Michael than he wants to let on (there's got to be some reason DM doesn't fire Michael, right?).  Thank you for calling Grace "perceptive"- that's a great compliment for a character I'm growing to love just a little. A Purdeep follow-up? Hmmmm, we'll have to see... (Thanks again!)

Summary: Past Featured Story

This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8782 Read Count: 69442 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008
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Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy

All of these are great! Keep it up!

Chips by Wendy Blue Rated: K [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Jim does Karen a favor. My response to the 55 word fic challenge.

Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56 Read Count: 1655 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2007 Updated: August 03, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: August 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chips

Good job! I liked this one.

Author's Response: Thanks Larry! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A glimpse into the instant messaging history of Jim and Pam. Written with the intention of expanding on what we see on the show, as well as to tie up some loose ends. There will be a conversation for each episode through Season 3.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Larissa Halpert, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Instant Messaging
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16909 Read Count: 315271 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: December 27, 2016
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: August 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Basketball

Really enjoying this one. Can't wait to read more!

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56279 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Changes

I love the Kelly dialogue in this chapter. Great start!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Interruption

Yikes. What a nightmarish (and hilarious) thing to happen on their first date!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Axis

I love Michael's note, complete with a hilarious misspelling. I'm loving this story!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Practice

That was very hot, indeed. Excellent work!

Dry by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 5
Summary:

Pam had learned two things from her years with Roy. Speculative for season 4, unspoiled.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54 Read Count: 2847 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2007 Updated: August 07, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ouch! This hurts so much. What an incredibly written story with so few words.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Do you need a band-aid? Some Advil? (Sorry about the ouchies!)

Summary: Wow, my first smut fic. Pam wants to do something with Jim...;]
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 580 Read Count: 6123 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2007 Updated: August 07, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: August 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Love

Can't wait to read more. Please continue!

Coal Walk by EmilyHalpert Rated: K [Reviews - 7] 2
Summary: 55 words about the coal walk.

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1528 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2007 Updated: August 09, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Coal Walk

Good exploration of Pam's mind in Beach Games. I really liked this.

Author's Response: Thanks. My life was kinda topsy turvy yesterday, and so it was fun exploring it with Pam in mind

Summary:

Jim and Pam after a long long day of work.

After The Job.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2480 Read Count: 8055 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought this was supposed to be lolcats smut!

Seriously, this is extremely hot and should keep me antsy at work for the day.



Author's Response:

The lolcats smut is later silly!

Thanks Larry so glad you liked it, don't re-read it at work though, could drag down productivity. :) 

Summary: A different take on the first date and its aftermath

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1457 Read Count: 3150 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I lost my fluff stick while writing In Her Arms, so no worries.

This is really beautifully written. It perfectly captres the sadness and regret of a past relationship. I'm glad you decided to post it.



Author's Response: Thanks so much Larry! I really appreciate you reading it!

Summary: Andy answers the Proust Questionnairre.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: Proust Questionnaire
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 435 Read Count: 2247 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2007 Updated: September 20, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, this was perfect! Love the subtle Kandy shout out with "Usher". His favorite color is "stripes". Ha!

Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  And yay, you caught the Kandy connection!  Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Squirrel returns! Jim's got the girl, but what's the price? Set at season 4 progresses, with episode overlaps. The IRC chatters are back, too. :-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14883 Read Count: 22528 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The face of all the world is changed, I think

What a wonderful start. I love you, Moxie! I just needed you to know that. Once.

Author's Response:

aww...thanks, Larry.  Just for that I don't think I'm going to marry that idiot I've been engaged to for 3 years.  ;-)

 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The face of all the world is changed, I think

Another great chapter. I loved it! Keep it up, Moxie. You rock!

Author's Response: Thanks, Larry - I'm assuming you aren't just saying that to get a free ride to Scranton.  ;-)

Birch Moon by susanita Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 8
Summary: Some nights are too pretty to sleep through.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2029 Read Count: 2652 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2008 Updated: January 23, 2008
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: January 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Night in Scranton

Oh Susan, this was just plain wonderful. It's a very sweet story.

Why don't you write more often, you dork?

 



Author's Response: Because I'm just dorky, you dork. :-P   Thanks for reading. I know you're a super busy dorky dude. :D