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Jim and Pam think they are keeping a secret.9 Great job! This is hilarious.
Who wants to be rich when you can be with Pam? I love this so far and look forward to the rest!
9 Yay for Chapter 3. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review! I'm having a lot of fun writing this story.
Thanks for reading!
10 Great start to this one. You deal with Karen much better than most people. This seemed like a very natural conversation for them to have.
10 Very good exploration of Jim's inner thoughts, especially in regards to his feelings about Karen.
Pam's map? So cute! Your reference section really adds to the story.
Great job!
10 Yay! Go Team Pam! I love how you wrote her in this chapter.
Makes sense that he would have fallen asleep after the day he'd had.
You've really captured their chemistry so well. Great job!
10 "I'm your Pam".
Awwwww. That really got to me. This was a terrific story and I only wish there was more of it. Great job!
8 I sure love to see Ryan eat it.
9 How many more ways can Ryan eat it? I can't wait to find out.
8 Ryan certainly deserves some crap for that stupid e-mail.
8 Title should explain it all.Very, very sweet story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I haven't really written much fluff, but right now, its just so easy!
10 I loved this! Excellent job.
Author's Response: thank you!!
8 Very interesting...
10 Wow. Very good job. This packs a good emotional wallop with so few words.
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
10 I'm in love with this beautifully written story. Excellent job!
Author's Response: thank you!! I'm glad your liking it.
10 I loved that! That was a very realistic, three dimensional depiction of Roy and fits perfectly with what we saw of him in Cocktails and The Negotiation. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you very much. I was a little nervous about writing Roy, but I'm gald you liked it and thought it was realistic. Thanks for the review!
10 You totally rock. That was amazing.
Author's Response: thank you!
10 Amazing conclusion to this wonderful story, although I'm sad to see it end.
This last chapter was fluffy and sexy, the perfect combination. Great job!
10 Yum.
Author's Response: Love monosyllabic comments.
I love it. Jim certainly needed some booty at that point. Glad to see him go get it. Go Jim!
Author's Response: I agree, larrymcg! And from the way I wrote it, Katy needed it too! No boyfriend, Valentine's Day, maybe no good guys in sight, why not have a little fun with Jim? Go, Jim, go Katy!
Great chapter, Kev! There's very little written about Phyllis, so it's nice to see this. Very funny.
Author's Response:
Thanks, larrymcg! It's fun to write about the ancillary characters. They need some love and attention, don't they? I love Phyllis, and love the idea that this plus-sized woman in her 40s found some good lovin' with BVVR.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Yeah, um, this is pretty good stuff. I don't know what else to say.
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I absolutely love the way you wrote Wallace in this story. The little note was a perfect touch. I really liked the Jim/Wallace interactions and hope to see a little bit of that in season 4. Definitely looking forward to seeing how Jim gets the job done.
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What a nice, sweet ending. You did this perfectly. Great job!
10 Ooooh, I'm gonna like this. Great start. Can't wait to see the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it doesn't disappoint!! :-)