Jim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.Such a good chapter! I didn't want it to end! Keep going please : )
Author's Response: Very soon. Thanks, NanReg!
You better not take so long to write the next chapter!!!! I'm dying here!
10 Just read it again (and again). You have just so wonderfully captured their personalities--even parts that we haven't been privvy to before (on TV anyway). I can really envision this conversation happening. The dialogue is very believable in my humble opinion. I love how the distance (and wine) has broken down their inhibitions, yet you've still retained the humor. Well done! Keep going, girl!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you, NanReg. I have tried to invent realistic little pieces of history for them, so that not everything references an episode of the show.
9 I'm with officefreak: more, more, more...and SOON!!!! That was awesome ; )
Author's Response: Thank you, NanReg!
It's official: this is my favorite story EVER!!!
10 I SO LOVE THIS STORY!!! I wish this could continue indefinitely : )
10 That was amazing! “So sweet, I’d decide to write you a letter there...I’m not sure what about. Something with a lot of ‘S’s and ‘O’s in it." Unbelieveable. You simply MUST do the sequel describing their real first date. I would rate this 100 if I could!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, NanReg! So many talented people have already tackled the real first date; if I can think of some sort of different twist, I might do it.
10 I HAD to read it again, Annabel, and I had a smile on my face the whole time (haven't stopped smiling from the first reading actually). Loved "I think I saw John Lennon”--so funny! I think that's what I like best--the fact that you are so great at balancing the humor and eroticism (50 center word there which I don't get to use nearly enough). So looking forward to your next creation--whatever it is : )
Author's Response: Thank you again, NanReg! That's a wonderful compliment! I really like the show because it balances the real and the mundane with the quirky and the farcical. I've tried, in a very small way, to duplicate that here.
10 Just re-read it. Sigh. So good : )
The new cleaning lady at Dunder-Mifflin writes home to tell about the zoo she sees every day.
8 I was so happy to see another chapter! You have such a vivid imagination.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see there is a good use for this wild imagination.
9 So good to have Sunny back!
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 Thanks for another great Sunny chapter! Looking forward to the next one. She feels so real!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad she sounds like a real person. (Actually, I am Sunny. I am typing this on Creed's computer from the offices of Dunder-Mifflin bwahah).
Yay! Another chapter! Keep going. That was fun. Should I be embarassed to say that I've seen License to Wed twice? Such a loser... : )
Author's Response: Since I've seen LtW three times, I can hardly call you a loser. Obviously, Sunny and I have different tastes. :) Thanks for reading!
8 Thanks for another fun chapter...and the cookie recipe!
8 Very clever!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm enjoying this very much.
A few fuzzy, fluffy one-shots that form a loosely connected story. Based around the idea of this quote by Germaine Greer:
"The essence of pleasure is spontaneity."
Good one! Woo-hoo!
Author's Response: woo-hoo! Thanks, NanReg!!
8 Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, Nan!
8 Awwwww! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!! One more chapter (or so) to go...
9 I was so excited to see another chapter, and you didn't disappoint. I'm sorry to see it end : )
8 I feel all warm and fuzzy : )
9 dundiefromgod, this is so bizarre...I was just reading this story over the weekend and wondering what happened to it. So nice to see an update! I'm glad you're continuing. When I was 17, my best friend, who was a year older than me, went to Marywood and I have been there! How 'bout that?! So, you're taking me on a little trip down memory lane. Can't say I remember it all that well, since it was many moons ago, but it is a happy memory nonetheless : ) Hoping you'll be inspired to update again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, and for going back and re-reading it, I'd imagine it was a haul. I've actually never been to Scranton unfortunately, so all my knowledge comes from all-mighty Google. I enjoy using real-life landmarks/places it kind of makes it feel more real to me. Again, thank you for your review and support of my story NanReg, I really appreciate it.
10 So beautiful and perfect. My heart was in my throat. Such emotion. Happy that it's not done. More soon, please?
Author's Response: Thank you very much, this was a little bit of a different chapter in that there wasn't that much actions, but more descriptions of the thoughts going on in Pam's mind. So I'm glad that you found the emotional component of it touching, because that was definitely what I was going for. Thanks for the review NanReg.
10 I was so thrilled to see an update to this great story. So happy to have you you back . You kept me on my toes with the argument--my heart was in my throat! Such emotion. Can't wait for more. Happy New Year : )
Author's Response: Happy New Year! I'm glad that you liked the argument, I was hoping that it would seem somewhat real and honest between them. Thanks for your kind words and review NanReg.
Sassy Beesly : ) Another fun chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, she has to become the Pam that stands and tells Karen that she's not sorry about what she said to Jim we see in "The Job" somehow. Devil and Angel will just provide the push. Thanks for the review!