Big Office flan. HUGE JAM flan.
The road to perfection isn't paved in gold.I just love this whole story. I'm hooked! Keep writing, please!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
I loved reading this. It was very poetic. I couldn't tell if it took place when Pam was still with Roy..If so, it's so sad! If not, then it's very hopeful! Either way, I loved it!
Author's Response: Hi Abigail! I actually left the context of Roy and Karen totally out of the story on purpose. I didn't want outside stuff influencing the inside stuff, if that makes sense. Glad you enjoyed :)
It's never too late to celebrate the people you love.Awe Moxie! That was so sweet and fluffy..just what I needed today! Little JAM moments like these will hold me until S4 begins! Thanks!
Author's Response:
I'm glad it cheered up your day, Abigail - it always lifts my spirits to write fluff like that. I just hope we see stuff like that in s4!
Thanks for the review!
Jim and Pam's first date, using the constraints of the 55 word challenge.
10 This was a-may-zing! Please write more!
A year or two before the cameras arrived, Michael takes the staff to the Poconos for a camaraderie event. Much unresolved sexual tension and angst ensues (uh, between Jim & Pam, not the entire staff).
Loved the ending! You wrapped it up so neatly and it all makes sense! I'm excited to read the AU endings, but this was just awesome. Well done!
Author's Response: It's great to hear you say that you think this makes sense -- I was so nervous about posting it! (I worried that it'd be a bit anticlimactic or disappointing.) I really appreciate the feedback -- thanks!
You are just plain cruel!! :) I will be climbing the walls waiting for the next installment! You are very good at building tension. It's torture! (But in a good way!)
Author's Response: You're so sweet! (Seriously, it's always a shock to hear that people actually care when I update, no kidding.) Thanks so much for the review!
You did it again! You left us hanging! My nerves are shot-please post chapter 14 soon!! This is too much to handle! I think I know how Jim must be feeling right now! :) Pam!!! WAKE UP!!! This chapter was simply delicious!
Author's Response:
You know, I swear I don't do the cliffhangers to be cruel; it's just that when I see something that would be a good break in the action, I go for it (otherwise my chapters would be painfully long, trust me, hee).
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Seriously, I don't know how I'm going to be able to wait until this weekend for the next chapter! I'm reeling. I'm shaking. I need to know what happens next. Girl7, you've got the magic touch! C'mon, don't torture us! Post! Post! Post! :)
Author's Response:
You are so sweet! This story has sort of taken hold of me again (I know it's bad when I'm driving to work in the morning working out dialogue in my head...in spite of my best efforts to focus on other things, LOL), so the updates should be coming a little more quickly -- providing "real life" doesn't get in the way too much.
Thanks so much for the review!
"Because they sell cologne at French whorehouses...?" This whole exchange made me laugh out loud! The steam and tension factor is getting to me though. Throw us a bone--please! :) Excellent chapter by the way. Very visual.
Author's Response:
LOL -- I'll be throwing you a bone verrrry soon. (And uh...yeah, that is so totally what she said.)
Thanks so much for the review!
I love this! I want to read more like this one with scenarios of what happened immediately after "..then it's a date." I wrote one for the 55 word challenge, but I'm not brave enought to write more yet! Great job!
I was thinking the same things that Jim was thinking in this. You did a great job capturing what was probably going on in his head. Please write more!
The little things were threatening to drive him insane.... a few 55-word chapters on learning to live with the one you love.
Another winner Moxie!
Author's Response: Thanks, Abigail!!
Office Enema! I love it. I love these "if things had gone differently" scenarios. This was great!
Very cute! Just like Pam's Dorky Dancing :-)
8 This is sooo cute, I want to give it a big hug <3!
8 That was amazing! You absolutely got inside Jim and Pam's heads. Especially with Beach Games and The Job. You put into words exactly what I was thinking!
I am a sucker for JAM First Date stories and this one was just terrific! I loved that the camera crew was there. I hope that's how S4 starts. We just have to see the first date!
A first fight and a bowl of make-up spaghetti. (No spoilers.)
9 OMG That was just....WOW! It's hard to believe how sexy that was, but yet I could still picture Jim and Pam as Jim and Pam. You are an amazing writer!
Author's Response: Saying you could picture them is the best thing I could hear. Thanks so much, Abigail!
This was really good. I love stories about what happened in The Job and afterwards.
Loved it! This story should help tide me over until 9/27!
10 This was absolutely beautiful! Your writing style is so natural and totally true to Jim. I loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. Originally I had written what is now Part Two, but ElizabethLynn suggested I think about a 3-part story so I thought it would be fun to think about how the relationship between Jim and Pam actually started and then about where it eventually led them.
This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.
This was a great chapter. I could totally picture Jim and Pam having this conversation "Such a hussy..." I love it!
I feel like I'm being extorted for reviews! :P I like your writing style a lot, but I honestly can't see Pam or Jim behaving this way. But poetic license, right? Please make it happy! I can't take them fighting like this. Oh my fragile JAM psyche!
Author's Response:
You are, of course! I needed good reviews to take on vacation with me ;). Don't worry, I'll update Tuesday!
I know it's a little OOC for them, but I really needed Jim to be stubborn, and I can imagine he is a lot. I also needed Pam to be strong, but delicate, and vulnerable. I'm sorry it if irks you, but I couldn't get to that any other way! :)
A series of stories based around the lyrics to my favorite John Mayer songs.
This was so sweet. I love thinking of Jim and Pam as homebodies. It warms my heart! <3
Author's Response: I like that thought to. Just hanging out, watching the tube, reading books, eating frozen dinners, ordering in.....junk like that. After all, they do put up with camera crews all day and a little R&R is needed. Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it. Now, go tell someone about this fic!
9 That was wonderful! You must follow this chapter up with what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! There will be more on the way....thanks agian.