Reviewer: bebitched Signed
Date: May 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: sure of my lines, no one is there
Oh my. How do you do that? Manage to convey both sadness and hope all in one paragraph. All the details are dead on: Pam finding a friendship plus flirting with a guy at school, picking a fight with Jim over Karen (When Pam realizes Karen has been ogling her bare left hand, she shivers like the ghosts of years past. *dies*) and that final scene, where Pam just goes "fuck it, I'm tired of waiting for other people to make me happy" and proposes to him. Just... love this so much. Probably THE best post-finale fics I've read thus far.
Author's Response:
bebitched, i love that you got it! bebitched ftw! as long as you're spotting details, i made multiple references to pam's hands (in a nod to the lack of ring) and i made sure pam was super focused on her work (ex. local ad). wow i feel like lostpedia now or something.
aw shucks. you're the best. thank you for the feedback :)