WOW! This story is so perfect! I adore the ending paragraph.

This was so great! Somehow I've managed to never read this story, so I just read it all the way through and I'm just grinning from ear to ear. As far as this chapter goes, I loved loved loved the final few sentences where Pam "outed" them, reminded me very much of when they first admitted to dating in Fun Run. This was a great read!

P.S. Also, my dad used to call me "bean" which is pretty random but also pretty cool to read it in this story :)

Oh wow I just rediscovered this story and I forgot how much I adore it!! Are you going to update again?

WOW! What a beautiful chapter. Like I'd say at least 3/4ths of your chapters, I've got tears in my eyes with this one. Thank you, thank you, thank you for keeping the strength to continue something so deep and to not be afraid. I hope you continue soon. Thank you!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, and I'm sorry you cried! Is it weird of me if I admit that I've never cried once while writing this?  I think I'd have to put on some sort of emotional block because if I didn't, I don't think I could write this story.  But thank you!

Oh wow I just found this story and it's so good! Are you going to update? I really really hope you do, it's one of my favorites already!!

That was a lovely ending. I just discovered this story today, but I read all the chapters and fell in love with it. I thought the final chapter was a beautiful way to end it.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you found this and especially glad you liked the final scene. Thanks, nandance!

Oh my gosh I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw this was updated!!! And what an awesome update it was! I can't believe all this angst is paying off - that makeout scene was so perfectly heartbreaking and beautiful. I, like Jim, would love to know what Pam is thinking right about now haha. Awesome job!!

Well this is embarassing. I actually cried when I got to the end of this story. Embarassing, I realize. But, it's just, you ended it SO perfectly, and every single chapter as absolutely been wonderful, and I'm just so sad to see it go now. Thank you thank you thank you! I look forward to more of your work!

Oh wow this story is hot! This is pretty awesome, please continue!

Oh my god! This story literally made my breath catch at the end. That was brilliant!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!!!!

Wow. Just....wow. I am so sad to see this story go, but I can honestly say it was one of the most beautifully written, moving, and inspiring stories I have ever read here. Thank you so much for you dedication to keeping in style with the characters and continuity in terms of their actions. It honestly felt like I was watching the episode myself, except with a microscope that could see into their thoughts and hopes and dreams.

I also loved how you continued with your hello, goodbye theme throughout the story, and then finally in the end they were just...ONE. Beautiful!

oh my God!!!! this story is getting so freakin good! I'm so excited you're updating so regularly, everytime I log in here I run to the most recent thread to see if you've updated. Excited to see where this goes, and getting more and more confused about who I want to come out of this unbroken! :)

Oh wow this story is looking so good. I think you've captured Pam's traumatic state really, really well. I got chills when you described her throwing the lamp at the CD player. Sad, but very good. Please continue!

Author's Response: Hehehe. Thanks! The whole throwing lamp thing is probably what I would do at that moment. It's not really violent but its just the thing that tells someone that they're outta control, you know? Throwing stuff just because they can....so, thanks. I hope to have more up soon. Thanks!