Penname: nandance Real name:
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Summary: Jim and Pam are engaged. The office reacts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1916 Read Count: 5629 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods

This was such a good story! I LOVED how in-character everyone was, and especially how cute JAM were in their talking heads. Thanks so much!

Author's Response: The JAM talking heads were definitely the most fun to write so I'm SO glad you enjoyed them! Thanks for the feedback!

Summary: An explination for Jim's scarf. Because you people and your scarf stories finally got to me.
Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 640 Read Count: 2426 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2008 Updated: January 17, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: January 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! This was a fantastic fic. I LOVE your writing style, it's really fluid and you've got a brilliant way of transporting the reader from one scene to another while still making it all seem so real, and so very Office-like. Thank you so much for that, I hope to see more of your work soon!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! It\'s an amazing compliment to be told that something I write is real and Office-y. I should be finishing another fic soon!

Summary: Angela does remember why she doesn't speak to her sister. Angst inspired in part by the song "Brick" by Ben Folds.
Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Angela
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 538 Read Count: 1882 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: January 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a great story! The description of the fic really intrigued me and you definitely did not disappoint. I think you captured Angela's character very well, and it was totally believable. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it. I wasn\'t 100% about it to be honest (I believed in it, but yet... well, hard to explain I guess haha), so I\'m glad you think I captured Angela here. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Summary: An AU jump from the episode The Injury.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9121 Read Count: 14168 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2008 Updated: February 20, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: January 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh cool story!! I'm so excited for you to continue this one :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope I can do my ideas continue to excite you.

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG awesome update!!! I got chills with the line that went something like "he knew he was going to kiss her tonight"... Beautiful!

 

I hope you update again soon, I'm dying here ;) !!!



Author's Response: I have to come up with a topic for my policy paper and then I can work on chapter 5. I do have the Roy/Pam interactions outlined and if I don\'t have angst checked as a category I will have to add it after the next chapter. \r\n\r\nAnd I am glad you liked that line. It was one of my favorites too!

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291553 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, that was amazing. Seriously. Amazing. You're writing both Pam and Jim SO perfectly, and I LOVE how Jim's brothers are turning out. This is seriously one of my favorite stories. I hope you update again soon! :)

Author's Response: Well that review just thrilled me to death.  Seriously -- I say it all the time, but it's worth repeating: Knowing there are actually people (even if it's just a few!) who're enjoying the story (and especially the semi-"original" characters like the brothers) is such a treat.  So thank you for making me smile very early on this Friday morning.  :o)

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!! This is seriously SO awesome. One of the best stories I've ever read, by far. I can't wait to see where our little angsty couple goes from here.

Author's Response:

I somehow neglected to respond to your review -- egregious!  In any case: So, so flattered that you'd say this is one of the best you've read by far (seriously).  I'll be updating soon -- hope you like it! 

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. Just, wow. No words :)

What an awesome chapter. I just love how you use the subtle descriptions of what Jim and Pam are feeling to really fuel the story and give it its soul. It's really a fantastic read, I look forward to your updates every time!

Can't wait to see how the drive home goes :)



Author's Response:

Okay, I'm smiling really big right now, because for some reason, I heard Jim's voice in my head when I read the beginning of your review (the "wow" bit) -- and of course, hearing Jim's voice...?  Always a good thing.  :o)

I'm so glad you're enjoying this -- I'll be updating in an hour or so!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Whew! Another awesome update!! I was so enthralled reading about Roy and Pam's various Valentines day's, and I don't think I've ever been so drawn into their relationship before. You made it realistic without being campy - it was really a fantastic juxtaposition to Jim and Pam's (hopefully!) relationship to come.

I loved this line:

"Only it wasn't for the ways he failed to understand her, rather for the ways he unfailingly did"

Just a beautiful story. I can definitely feel you building to something big (a big Valentines day climax perhaps?!) and I'm VERY excited.

 

Oh P.S. the dog story is too cute! How cool that it's a true story, haha I wish my boyfriend would do that for me :)

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the Valentine's Day flashbacks -- I really wanted to show how their relationship has kind of slowly deteriorated over the years, so much so that Pam almost hasn't noticed.  And you're absolutely right -- I fully intend to contrast Jim & Pam's eventual relationship to her past with Roy, because...can you imagine going from being with a man like Roy to a man like Jim?  Whoa.  :o)

Glad you liked the dog story -- it really was sweet of him.  And of course, I love my doggie, too.  :o)

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: April 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Dead. Just....dead.

Honestly, this is probably my favorite chapter of any fanfic ever. I know that sounds like hyperbole, but I swear it's not. I was just completely drawn in to this chapter by the 1st sentence and just blown away by the whole thing. You literally had me laughing, smiling, and even tearing up (I'm a sap!) throughout. Just so brilliant! I am so looking forward to the next update....in the words of Pam "this IS gonna be amazing!"

Oh, by the way, the whole "4 way stop" confessional by Jim made me burst out laughing. How cute is he?!



Author's Response:

Okay, that review just made my entire week, seriously.  So glad you enjoyed the chapter as much as you did!  I keep saying it, but really -- I write because I love to write; doing so is (as JK once said) a real luxury for me in many ways.  But to then hear what people think about it?  To read someone say something as great as what you said in your review?  Just amazing. 

Glad you liked the 4-way stop comment - it's one of the things I specifically asked my beta about, because I wasn't sure if it would make him come off as though he was making fun of her instead of trying to alleviate the tension, you know? 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: May 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

WOWOWOWOW!!!!

You are freakin amazing!! I think this was just one of the best things I've ever read....honestly. It was perfectly done - tasteful, but totally hot at the same time. I think you've captured exactly what (at least in my mind!) their first time would be like. It's a little awkward, a LOT flirty, and totally loving = just like them. I'm just blown away by this, and I hope you realize how fantastic this was - in my book you had NO reason whatsoever to be nervous. Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

I beg to differ, nandance; YOU are freaking amazing!  Seriously, I know I've said it before, but it is always -- ALWAYS -- nerve-wracking to post a new chapter, so your near-immediate feedback is always such a relief.  So thank you!

I'm glad you found this to be very "them," because as I said in the author's note, I find it difficult to write the smut these days, lol.   That said, I recently wrote a proposal scene (for a story you've already read and reviewed -- of course!), and surprisingly, I was a bit squicked out by writing the proposal.  I think that's related to my studies, though, hee. 

In any case, so glad you enjoyed this chapter -- there's one more to go, and it should be up in a day or so.  Thanks again!

Summary: Past Featured StoryAU Season 2, some undetermined amount of time after Booze Cruise. Roy invites Jim to a house party.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5978 Read Count: 14362 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2008 Updated: February 13, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Whew!!! THAT was awesome. I seriuosly was not expecting that last line....brilliant! I really can't wait for you to continue this

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

WOW. What a fantastic story. This last chapter just about killed me lol. I love how you analyze everything from Jim/Pam's pov plus their views of the cameras. Really, really excellent story, thanks so much!

The Fair by malcolm lake Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 3
Summary:

An AU where Jim never told Pam how he felt.  It's four years later, and the Merger just happened. 


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1406 Read Count: 2341 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2008 Updated: February 17, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: February 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: This way to the great egress

Oh wow. That was heartwrenching. But really, really a beatiful story. I loved the last bit, with the intertwined hands and Pam's whispering to Jim "not in this one". Really really brilliant work!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I'm glad you liked it.  I just wanted to write about that point when you just know that nothing's ever going to happen.  Maybe some folks have been there before.

Breakdown by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 131] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96866 ePub Downloads: 59
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Obbligato

Uh oh. What an AWESOME ending to the chapter! God this is going to be awkward! Can't wait for the update

Summary: Past Featured Story

She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10705 Read Count: 46706 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
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Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Jim Who

Whoa this is cool! I can't wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Jim Who

Ahhh the suspense is going to kill me! I can't wait for you to update! I just love this story, it's got a very "LOST"-like feel to it, and that's so fun. Keep it up!

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: To that place where you can't remember, and you can't forget

WOAH! Cool cool cool ending! Oh my God I'm so excited to see where this goes!

Summary: Another moment of revelation in the early days of Jim & Pam. Rated K
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271 Read Count: 3639 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2008 Updated: March 05, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great. Really nicely done!

Summary: This story takes place after Beach Games, so season 3 spoilers. Please disregard events of Season 4 and also imagine that Ryan is still at Scranton and that Kelly has an older brother. I think that covers it – suspend disbelief now! This is my second attempt at fanfic, I'll post my first story later, if I'm brave enough. Feedback would be lovely, good or bad, I'll take it!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13900 Read Count: 14288 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2008 Updated: May 30, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow this is a great story! I loved the email technique you used. And the bit with Pam imagining her "date" as Jim was really effective and cool. Are you going to continue this, or is it meant as a one-shot type thing?

Author's Response: Thanks nandance - you are officially my first reviewer! I really appreciate you taking the time to respond to my story. I had intended that the story would span three chapters and so Chapter 2 is up now. I hope you like it. Smut ensues and so be warned.

Summary: Point-less smuff. I don't know what got into me, seriously. Set sometime post-The Job, but probably a few months into their relationship. Enjoy!
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1516 Read Count: 3570 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2008 Updated: March 09, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great story! You shouldn't be nervous about this one at all, I thought it was extremely well done, very natural and realistic to how I think (hope!) Jim and Pam would act in their private, day-to-day life. I loved it!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks.  I was nervous because I've never really posted anything steamy like this before.  I'm glad you feel that it came across real and natural though.  That's a wonderful compliment, nandance.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. -K

Summary: The present: A job interview in New York.  Home to Scranton.  The past: Everywhere else.  Rated K

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: David Wallace, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1151 Read Count: 3042 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2008 Updated: March 10, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: slug it out/sick of waiting

Wow, this was so perfectly done! I loved the line "probably something about dreams, and them coming true" ...just awesome. On a sort of random note, "I can Hear the Bells" is my favorite Mike Doughty song, and just for fun, I loaded it up while I read this story. You really can feel the flow of the song in the urgency and the hopefulness of Jim's perspective. Awesome!

Author's Response: i definitely listened to that song about a thousand times while i wrote this.  for me, it's entirely about the urgency - glad you felt it! 

Summary:

 

Your parents seem to really like her, and she blushes when she hears that she's the first girl you've ever brought home. She's adorable when she blushes, and you add it to the ever growing list of things you love about her.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 843 Read Count: 3069 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2008 Updated: March 11, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww!!! What an adorable fic!! I loved everything this piece chose to be; and I think you captured Jim's emotions dead on. Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hee, I love everything your review chooses to be!

Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18424 Read Count: 132895 ePub Downloads: 40
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Not That Guy

GREAT story!! I was so excited to see this one, it's a cool take on the Email Surveillance premise...I love it! I can't wait to read more. Pam better get her butt back in that house ASAP :)

Reviewer: nandance Signed
Date: March 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story just keeps getting better! I really enjoyed how sweet Jim was in these last 2 chapters, and I'm SO looking forward to the steamy stuff :)