Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 8
Date: December 20, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Let's Break Up
i have to admit that i found this really interesting. booze cruise could be said to be one of jim's lowest points, taking him to a really dark place. i like the idea of seeing what he would do with that. i can't say i can see the developed character of jim that we know murdering katy, and being aroused by it. i can actually see him more likely killing himself than someone else. but this story is really well written, and i'll definately keep reading. now don't get me wrong, i adore fluff with all my heart, but it's kind of refreshing to read jim as something new, not just the near-perfect boy we always see him as. you are really examining the dark part of his mind. ok, i don't think i'm making much sense here, so yeah. i think i got out what i was trying to say haha.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much - yes, you did make sense. I agree, The Jim that we have seen would definitely not do this. I couldn't even see him killing himself, but hey, here I have him murdering people.
The arousal piece was the one that creeped my out the most, in writing it. I really questioned putting it in, but I feel I will build on it later, and if not I will go back and take it out.
Anyways, I really appreciate you taking the time out to read this dark little ditty and telling me what you thought.