Reviewer: FinerThings Signed
Date: February 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: it knocks me off my feet
Oh that's so sweet! Sending her on a scavenger hunt to all the places he fell in love with her. *happy sigh* Customer service girl sounded really bitchy. lol Oooh the roof!! I hope he's up there!
Author's Response:
One thing I did with this story that I actually like a lot, is that I tried to give the periphery characters some background instead of just having them be one dimensional. It started with Marsha, and then just kind of expanded from there. The idea was to sort of have the reader realize that it takes more than two people to get a couple together, and sometimes that help can come from nice janitors and sometimes it can come from cranky customer service girls, but whatever form it comes in, eventually it all adds up to the couple getting together.
Wow. I did not mean for that explanation to be so long. Anyway, thanks for your review!!!