He should've been happy that Karen had finally warmed up to his joking ways. He wasn't.Holy mother of...[/jim]. It may not be sex, but it sure was sexy! Really nice chapter :) I don't have time to write more, but trust me, I loved this.
The title explains it all...
Hee. Still cute! I'm not sure what Jim's pleading look to Karen means, though...
Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, the pleading look used to have more with it, but the girl who does my beta-ing suggested that I leave it more open. So I did.
ha! Funny :) Looking forward to the other four times!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Sassy! OMG, that was my FAVORITE magazine EVER at that age! Maybe at any age. The mere mention of it has obviously made me regress to being 15.
The rest of this is wonderful too. All those red flags, all those moments that could have changed everything... Great job!
I missed the boat on Sassy -- I was like nine when it folded -- but I've read some articles online and know enough about it to know how great it was. I love the idea that Pam read it.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
So Jan wants the same number of kids as Michael? It's kismet ;) I love baby!Jan! Great job - looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Yeppers:) It's destiny:D Thanks for the review:)
On a toasty day in May, after the lunchtime rush, a short, colorfully dressed Indian woman is carefully organizing racks of faux purses.
Completely AU Kelly fic inspired by Breakfast at Tiffany's...kind of.
And oh, was it fun to read! What a cute little flight of fancy :)
Oh. Dear lord. If this is what the loony bin is like, then lock me away! I think I laughed, out loud, from beginning to end, and I will definitely have to go back and re-read to see what I missed. Fun, fun stuff moxie!!!!
Sometimes Ryan and Kelly talk about babies. Okay... a lot of times. No, YOU'RE adorable! I totally love this. Especially that last line. And please, write aaaalllll the Ryan/Kelly and Ryan/anyone and Kelly anything that you can! I will read it all :)
Author's Response: Heee, thank you! And don't worry, I'm sure there will be much more Ryan/Kelly, Ryan/everyone to come, muahaha.
5 chapters tell 50 Ways that Pam seduces Jim.
10 AWESOME. You really are so, so funny! I just wanted to leave you a review to let you know that :)
hee! This is so cute, so clever. Bless Pam's (well, ok, your) devious little heart...
“Oh good! That means I don’t have to go naked..." Rock ON with your bad self, Pam/Muggins! Mind if I use that line next time I have a surprise, last minute date? Once again with the funny...
HEE! LOVE it. My favorite, you ask? The one about Pam in the morning. :)
This is absolutely beautiful. Just gorgeous prose. And of course a lovely sentiment and happy, happy pictures. Love like laughter... wonderful. I'm gonna hang on to that phrase :)
Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.
I just found this story (recced on TWoP), and I'm so glad. This is absolutely incredible - beautiful, knowing, real, detailed, insightful, and so much more... You're breaking my heart and I love you for it. There's no easy way out, is there?
Author's Response: lol I'm finding that as I keep writing. I def didn't plan for this fic to exceed 10 chapters, but it has a mind of its own. Glad you found it and thanks for reading! Keep reviewing please!
I have no words to tell you how amazingly gorgeous this story is. Every line is so, so beautiful, and the depth of emotion and insight and detail are just stunning. Each chapter leaves me breathless. I can see both of them so clearly moving through this, especially the way you described Jim confessing - so exactly yes! Anyway, seriously amazing. I never want it to end!
Author's Response: lol thanks. it feels like it's never going to, but I'm sure eventually I'll be content with where they are and it'll end itself. Thanks for the compliments, I'm so glad you're enjoying each chapter.
ah. sigh. wonderful smuff... Can't wait for more, as always!
Author's Response: thank you ;-) trying to get it together for the next chapter, but I'm a little bit distracted by the actual JAM we have going on right now lol
I don't care about exciting. This is REAL. Oh, Pam. And oh, Jim, for making it normal and Tuesday :) Oh. I don't have many words other than that. But once again, wonderful wonderful wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much. I've had this feeling that she's having and it's a tough one to capture. I'm glad you liked it ;-)
Oh, Pam. I want to give her a hug... Poor thing, self-destructing like that.
Oh WOW. Guh. And wow again. So achingly beautiful! I liked the old chapter because it was messy and real even though it was a huge step back for Pam, but I LOVED this, for obvious reasons. I like how you've redone it, moved things forward for them in a way that is still true to the story you've been telling and the way you've shaped their characters. Just amazing :)
This? Is gorgeous. This is spiritual. I love it like... all those things you said Pam loved Jim like. Oh, and them breaking the ethereal love making for banter? THAT's what makes it Pam and Jim, and not just some beautiful description of two people going at it... And just, oh, everything else. Seriously, seriously lovely and amazing at every poetic turn of phrase. I am awed. And sorry this is over!
Author's Response: wow I can't believe I didn't respond to this review yet. I vividly remember when you left it, so...not sure why I didn't react then, but thank you so much. I'm so touched that you were so moved! Hopefully the rest of my stuff lives up to this sort of epic story I started with, lol.
In the interest of honesty, I humbly propose some new warnings and disclaimers for rated MA fanfic.
ROUND ROBIN: any writer can add a chapter! What do YOU think our readers should be warned about? Oh, and remember to put your name on your chapter so we can offer you appropriate adulation.
More funny! I can't come up with enough synonyms for "funny" right now, so I guess I'll fall back on quoting you to you: WARNING: Keep left finger above the ‘ESC’ button at all times. and the cars warning???? And The public restroom is not a sanitary sex haven. Hahahahahahahahahahaha.
Here are two more disclaimers for ya:
POA - the Pam Orgasm Addendum: Women often need some "manual aid" to reach climax.
WARNING: "Wet and ready" does not usually occur in nature. You may want to keep a lubricating agent handy, or not freak out if your partner licks his/her fingers.
OH Maybe Once, this is hilarious! I enjoyed the discussion on TWoP, and this had me laughing all the way through! I loved them all, but this one has to be my favorite: WARNING: While "standing against the wall" sex may sound pretty hot, be warned that it can actually be very very dangerous... Because you try it, can't quite get it to work, and still, when ya read it in fanfic, it's like hmmm, maybe I'm missing out...
No matter how much this couple is perfect for each other, they are bound to have flaws. Jim and Pam head to marriage counseling, and learn to deal with their issues in a semi adult manner.
Yeah, I too see trouble for them because of their communication issues and tendency to get defensive and shut down on both sides. Hits a little too close to home! I'd love to see how this goes...
Author's Response:
Thanks! And that's why I think they would need to go to counseling, they are sooo good for each other, but they each have traits about them that have them hide their feelings or they communicate the wrong way. I hope you continue enjoying this story!
Oh. Mygod. OMG! HOW is your Michael voice so perfect? And his inane actions that make PERFECT sense to him... well done, you! Can't wait for more!
This is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.funny! very much enjoying. It's late and i'm incoherent, but I like this a lot :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Nothing wrong with being incoherent, I'm that way most of the time.
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