Reviewer: Small Tuna Signed 
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Date: October 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue
Wow... I'm really not much of a reviewer because I rarely know what to say and "Good job" seems so trite. That being said since this story reached into some long forgotten hollow in my soul and twisted I feel the need to say something. So thank you for awakening parts long forgotten, even the dark scary ones. Few have the ability to draw out raw emotion and you and Neruda seem to be among them.
Author's Response:
Wow - I know about awakening parts, Small Tuna. That's what reading DFW and then writing this story did for me. I'm the same with reviews - sometimes all I can really think to say sounds dumb in my head, but I should know better. Just knowing that someone read a story and enjoyed it is just unbelievable. There's a fine line between writing something emotional that makes someone feel something and manipulating emotions. I think I've always tended to have a heavy hand and I hope I'm learning to refine that. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and thank you so much for letting me know!
What if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam? What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on? What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?