Reviewer: Blind Assassin Signed
Date: August 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: A Wonderful Life
Another great chapter, VB and it’s a thought-provoking one at that. I can see where Pam is coming from; I too think Jim would have cared more about her future career that his own. It was clear from early on in the show that Jim didn’t consider that he had a career; paper sales were simply a means to an end. Consequently, (this not being the only reason however), I think the potential existed for him to have only invested in her future, thereby paying little or no attention to his own ambitions and dreams until a few years down the line. If this did turn out to be the case, I don’t think he would look upon Pam’s achievements in a negative way, rather her success would cast light on his lack of ambition and/or achievements and that can be very hard to cope with, for all sorts of reasons. As we know, Jim is a smart guy and in season 4 of the show, we see that when he wants something badly enough, he pushes himself forward. Maybe that’s what would have happened if they had got together on Casino Night? Maybe he would have pushed himself to be more than a paper salesman, for her, for them. Or maybe he would have sat back and given every ounce of himself to her as he did day after day until the night she kissed him back and then told him she was still going to marry Roy. I guess we’ll never know! Am anxiously awaiting chapter 5 and am hoping you will post before I leave for a week’s holiday on Friday evening…hint, hint! BAx
Author's Response:
Hi, BAx!
Yep, what she said! (VB says while pointing at BAx.) I think the potential was definitely there for Pam & Jim to end up in a pretty unbalanced relationship, which is never good in the long run.
I'll try to get chapter 5 up tonight. You're 4 hours ahead of me, so if I don't get it finished in the next couple of hours, I won't make your deadline. I hope you have a good holiday! (Or "vacation" as we call it here in the States ... just in case you need it for your story. Here in the States, "holidays" are the 10 national holidays that are scattered throughout the year. New Years Day, Martin Luther King Day, Presidents' Day, Independence Day ... Jim wouldn't "go on holiday", he'd "go on vacation" to return to see Pamela in London. A sequel to On London Time, perhaps??)