Penname: molly_connelley Real name: Molly
Member Since: September 04, 2006

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Summary:

This is essentially my take on the "unseen" challenge. I've written a couple of these, and I originally thought I'd do one for every episode, but I'm thinking that's too ambitious for me -- especially when someone else has already done it so perfectly. But for what it's worth....

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130778 Read Count: 163008 ePub Downloads: 81
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2006 Updated: September 11, 2006
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

So, I just read this whole this. Yeah, all of it. And can I say...

 wOOt.

 This is incredibly amazing. Incredibly. You captured perfectly how they are involved in this intense emotional affair, and how that can be just as worse, if not more.

 I have a lot to say, since 36 chapters is like whoa, but that would take a lot of time, and space, and mental capacity. So basically... you rock. Lots. This is fantastic, and I loved it. Thanks so much for writing it!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418543 ePub Downloads: 127
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So I just had a really long review of this written out, but I'm dumb and made it go away. Grr. But, my rage aside, this is the most fun and just... YAY fic that I have read in a long time. I can't wait to see what they email next. Thanks so much for writing!

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: September 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh no he DIDN'T. Jim, Jim, JIM. This was a great chapter! I can't wait to read more. It is fantastic!

Summary:

Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Meredith, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109602 Read Count: 338513 ePub Downloads: 39
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: February 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Sexyback

Ok, I think this story is fabulous. And, I felt even more compelled to comment, because I was a little bit freaked out by the fact that you had Jim say that Michael would sing Sexyback... at school each term, we do this showcase thing, and we're going to do the office, and literally three days ago I suggested that Michael sing "DudiesBack" to the tune of Sexyback. So when I read that I was like "Aw, Office Mind-Meld!" Heh. So, tangent. But really, I love this story! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: It must have been Mind-Meld because the whole time Iwas planning on putting London Bridge and then at the very last second 'boom' I put Sexy Back!

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Who Would You Do? Muppets Version

Oh man, I was literally dying waiting for this chapter! I was terrified for Jim! And I couldn't see a way out of it! So, you totally rock for saving our boy from the hell of well... that whole situation. Hehe. This is so great. I'm sorry I don't review as often as I should, but please know that I absolutely love it!

Author's Response: Uh oh. Don't think you're going to like the next chapter. I suggest you stop reading for a couple of days. Maybe visit a zen garden. Be at peace with the universe. Contemplate the mighty oak leaf. Examine your inner being. Stay far far away from all things Muggins related.

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Dwight's Grandma Fetish

Wow. So, Karen's a ho because she's just MEAN. Everyone else is mean because they heard Pam was crying and were like "tra la la next secret please." I only love Jim. And Pam. And Angela. And maybe Phyllis because I know she was distracted. And Dwight and Michael because they are Dwight and Michael.

But everyone else? On my shit list.



Author's Response:

MOLLY! Karen's not a HO! She's just sociable. That's how she got into sales. She's a 'people-person'!!!

Just so you don't worry or anything but only four people were involved in that chat: Phyllis (who was distracted...I just haven't told you why yet. Angela...who obviously wasn't going to go "why was she crying?"  Meredith...who wasn't allowed to type her response. And Kelly...who was totally grossed out that Dwight was talking openly about Pam's period!!! Neither Karen nor Pam has read Angela's email yet.

Now you can't say Toby is on your shit list. That's just not right. And Oscar? What did he do? Stanley? Stanley's the man. So... tra la la... I'm not listening.... next secret, please.  Because you know Phyllis and Meredith still haven't told their PamSecrets!

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - SHE'S LYING

JIM HALPERT IS MY HERO.

That's all I have to say right now. I'm too busy killing Karen, hugging Phyllis, and trying to not JUMP JIM.

Ahem. Have a lovely day! Thanks so much for writing!



Author's Response:

Really Molly! Are you SURE that's the order you want that in... how about

Jumping Jim, hugging Phyllis, and trying NOT to kill Karen.

See then you get....well... Jim. And happy Phyllis. AND no jail sentence. So WIN! WIN! WIN!

 

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Jim...not a good kisser

Poor, silly, stupid Pam. Too damaged by her own hope to realize that for one it isn't going to kick her in the butt. I still think Karen is mean. And can I say I'm a little peeved at Pamela for laughing with Ms. Fillipelli? Not cool, Beesley. Grr.

Love everyone's 'What I like about everyone!' email. Absolutely perfect. I can imagine that Kelly's will have to do with comparing everyone to celebrities, Karen's will actually make me like her (darn you), and Meredith's will be flat out hilarious, if she's allowed to speak.

Hehe this story makes me soooooo happy - hard to tell, right, when I'm threatening to murder your characters, hmm? Seriously, though. Thanks so much for writing it! I absolutely love it.



Author's Response:

Pamela's laughing..probably going to bite her in the butt. So...not cool. But still. She had her reasons. See reviews below.

I'm writing Kelly, Meredith, and Pam's "what I like about everyone" emails right now and can I just say...I ♥ EVERYONE! I just don't know who my favorite is. I'm loving this so much that I want to do it for Dwight, Creed, Ryan, and well, EVERYONE!  I've already finished Karen's. (and yes..I am darned!)

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Rapid Tail Action occurs in Smitten State

Oh. My. Lord. I think this is my favorite chapter ever. So, be prepared for a long review, mmk? Mmmk.

First of all, Jim calling his mother about underwear? Priceless. Although he should have feigned innocence and asked her about condoms. Next, of COURSE Angela would pick a swan as her animal. Hehe. And I love Kelly’s response: “I’m telling Ryan that you want to murder me!”  Okay, now this is just great, that you think Angela was in the ballet. We just did showcase at school (like a talent show, but with a theme to pull it together), and I wrote it and we did the Office. I had a line where Angela said she was a ballet dancer in her youth, but she quit when the instructor costumed them in outfits fit for tiny prostitutes. So that made me laugh that other people think she’s so the typical tiny blonde ballerina, too. Hehe. Moving on… QUESTION: Do you have a moat? Hehehe best line ever. And, I love love LOVE that Angela would get rid of Firefly, simply because you know Dwight makes her watch it all the time. Oh, so funny. I love Angela. Thank you so much for writing. I absolutely love this story, and can’t wait until Jim and Pam just mack on each other in front of all the girls. Maybe not Karen, cause that’s mean, but everyone else. Oh, and sorry I am so incredibly ADHD today. And… yes, that is all. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Please tell me that you are kidding about the condoms? How painful would that be?  "Hey Mom, I'm going to play a prank on Dwight at work. Do you know where I can buy these things called condoms?"  YIKES!!! 

Did you do a video of the showcase you did at school? Can you put it on YouTube? I would looooove to see it! Angela the uptight little ballerina, I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! Tiny prostitutes!!!

I had a boyfriend whose ex-girlfriend (highly Christian) broke up with him because of FIREFLY! True Story! She said "it's either me or Firefly!" I'm sure she meant "It's either God or SATAN!"

I can't wait for them to mack on each other either! Let me tell you I've had a little sit down with each of them and said "Listen people! We need some serious kissing! And PRONTO!" They acted like they didn't know what I was talking about.... sometimes they just drive me nuts.

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Pam's best first date

Okay, first? Definitely kidding about the condoms. Absolutely, positively. Second, I am not sure about the video, but I will definitely check into it. If you wish, I would be happy to email you the script. I did end up having my Michael sing SexyBack (with Dwight singing the ‘yeah’ and ‘take it to the chorus’… and dancing), I got in a ‘that’s what she said’ joke, and Dwight made many jokes about his beet farm. Of course, I took a lot of it straight from the show, since I had to fill 45 minutes. Anyway. Let me know! On to your awesome writing!

 How incredibly cute are Jim and Pam? Cute isn’t even the right word. They’re like… I don’t know, but I can’t even stand it that’s how… whatever they are. Precious. Too freakin’ adorable for words. Oh, and the ladies of the office? Love them. Why can’t they give us interaction like this on the show? I love how Angela thinks Meredith is a total heathen… it’s too great. “That was not a date, Meredith. That was a sin. My date was very considerate and brought me a corsage and had a nice, firm handshake. Your “date” left twenty dollars on your nightstand.” Oh man, so, so funny! Although I have a theory that maybe Angela found God in her later years and was something of a rebel in her youth… just for the unexpected reveal of Meredith finding a picture of Angela with black hair, a leather mini-skit, a dog collar, and a nose ring. Moving on. The Pam/Jim first date? Quite possibly one of my favorite scenes ever. Then they had to go screw it up with drama. So thank YOU for making it not that way. Hehe I can’t wait to see what Jim is going to do. Hehe yay. Thanks so much for writing!

Author's Response:

Absolutely, positively glad you were joking, Molly, because holy smokes!

SEXYBACK!!! Oh I have got to see this! I can so see Dwight...oh god. cringe!!! 

It COULD go either way, couldn't it? Uptight, little Angela dropping out of ballet class so she won't look like a tiny prostitute or Angela in a leather miniskirt & dog collar. Both totally feasible.

Pam/Jim cute factor - two puppies cuddling in a field of daisies. They're that freakin' cute.

I agree about the interaction. Can Greg Daniels just admit that Ryan is not a main actor and bring the ladies up in the credit line? Thank you!!!  Really though, I think Meredith & Angela should have their own show. Of course, it would have to be on Showtime...because of the R rating.

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Jim the Lumberjack

Sorry... this reviewer has temporarily died due to thoughts of John Krasinski dressed up as a lumberjack... *thinks of Fabio* mmk, better. Oh, this chapter was great. The Jim/Pam of it all? Fantabulous. Especially the 'halfsies' bit. So so funny! And I love that Jim has eclipsed Ryan as hottest in the office in Michael's eyes. I know, he's just Michael's 'best friend ever!' but of course, it comes off so Ho!Yay. Hehe thanks for writing! This is so great.

Author's Response: Fabio. Brrrrr....that guy is just funny shaped. Like cartoon man. Definitely, definitely Ho!Yay! What are you going to do with Michael Scott. He needs love, he needs love ALL the time!

Roses by NeverEnoughJam Rated: K+ [Reviews - 34] 24
Summary: Past Featured StoryThere's a reason Meredith gets drunk on Valentine's Day, and it's not the obvious one. Spoilers through "Phyllis' Wedding".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Meredith
Genres: Holiday, Inner Monologue
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1696 Read Count: 3233 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2007 Updated: February 12, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: February 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Roses

Wow. I just... Wow. This is incredible. God. So so moving. The outsider's perspective on Jim/Pam, and the different take on Meredith's life... perfect. Absolutely stunning. Thank you so umch for writing this. Seriously... wow.

Author's Response: Seriously...thanks!

Breakthrough by shan21 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 28] 20
Summary:

Jim and Pam fight. Pam finally has her breakthrough.

Spoilers through Business School


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3712 Read Count: 6579 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2007 Updated: February 18, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: February 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is brilliant. This is... this is perfection. This is exactly what Jim and Pam need, what they deserve. They deserve to get pissed, have it out... thanks for writing this. I loved it. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I totally agree that Jim and Pam deserve to get pissed. I like that you used the word deserved. They've earned a moment of unbridled honesty, you know? Lay everything out on the table, even if it isn't pretty.

Summary: Pam's trying to deal with the aftermath of Cocktails (so spoilers through Cocktails of course).  Hopefully, through all the fear they will find each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12314 Read Count: 68879 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2007 Updated: March 19, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Dwight, What is Going On?

Oh, now that's just mean to leave it there! But the two chapters (two! wow!) were both fantastic. I just want to give Dwight a hug, but he would go into a rant about how the man is supposed to initiate the hug and that his girlfriend would be most upset. Oh well. *bear hugs Dwight* Thanks so much for the great, very large, update. I'm loving this story!

Author's Response: I can totally hear Dwight saying that!  I love having Jim interact with Dwight and I love see his softer side.  Thanks for the review!

Summary: Pam has friends in many interesting places. And who ever imagined Dwight as Cupid? Spoilers through Cocktails
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3675 Read Count: 5825 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, this is totally the wrong word, with wrong connotations... but god... PRECIOUS. Seriously, this was just... precious. I sound like my grandma, I know, but this was seriously fantastic. I love your Dwight. So much. He's just so perfect... this will restore balance to the force... hehe. Thanks so much for writing this. It is amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, molly!  I wrote this because I do think that there's a special bond between Dwight and Pam that we never see except briefly like when he had the concussion and when he found her in the hall crying.  And I do believe that Dwight has good intentions, no matter how weirdly they might come out....  Thanks for the review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryYup, it’s a post-Cocktails fic! With a bit of a twist. Karen does a bad thing, and Jim is about to suffer the consequences…
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy
Genres: Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31515 Read Count: 137849 ePub Downloads: 43
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Collision

Roy needs a good swift kick in the groin. Perhaps a few kidney shots as well. This story is so freaking fantastic. Thanks so much for writing! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Agreed. Or in this case, maybe he just needs to fall on his hand again. Thanks for your kind comments! I'm glad you like it!

Summary:

A visit from Sasha, a secret code, and some tummyweather. Slightly angsty, but ends with the promise of fluff. Some spoilers for "Business School".


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3247 Read Count: 3081 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2007 Updated: March 01, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Word

Oh. My. God. Seriously just... oh. my. GOD.

 This is my absolute favorite piece of fanfiction ever. In any fandom. EVER. I am grinning like a fool... I feel like a second-grader. God I just want to miniaturize Sasha and like... keep her in my purse like a puppy. Is that strange? :-p Seriously though... this could not be any better. GOD. Thank you for writing this.

You. Rock. My. Socks.



Author's Response: no, *you* rock *my* socks. :0) you crazy-review like me. i *love* that. i'm soooo glad you liked it. and yeah, i totally get that. i just want to bottle her and keep her in my pantry for the lean winter. lol.

Summary: Three-part series detailing three times Pam stayed over at Karen's and realized something new.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Karen, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5600 Read Count: 9025 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Renovations

Wow. This is really great so far. I can't wait to read about the other two times. Your characterization is dead on, and I loved the little interjections from Michael and Dwight. So funny! Keep up the great work!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 289043 ePub Downloads: 115
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Sweet. Karen is effing crazy. Although, I must admit that I would feel a bit... slighted as well... don't think I would charge sexual harassment... then I am not crazy.

I looooove this story. And am terrified of your Karen. Yikes. If we were afraid for Jim of Roy... watch out Pam, Karen's armed and fabulously dangerous.  Thanks so much for writing this story! It is fantastical.

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: For I have known them all already, known them all

Oh now this is just BRUTAL. I come back from vacation and get myself updated only to have to end it THERE?! Hehe. This is soooo good. I love the balance of the chat room and real life... so perfect! Yay. Thanks so much for writing... this is awesome!

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Oh, God. Squirrel McPants? This is quickly going to become a classic. I can just feel it. Thanks so much for writing!

Author's Response: Haha!  I hope I can live up to the hype I've seemed to start with chapter 1!  Thanks for reading and reviewing - chapter 2 should be up soon!

The Mole by sharky Rated: K+ [Reviews - 67] 16
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe documentary company needs a little help to finalize a distribution deal, so the head of the camera crew decides to recruit a mole.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Documentary Crew
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7812 Read Count: 23444 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2007 Updated: March 23, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10
Date: March 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Thursday

I heart Phyllis. Yaaaay Phyllis. I can't wait until the dinner date... and how adorable is it when Phyllis calls her husband Bob Vance? It makes me all mushy inside. So... thanks for the mushy feelings... because it is so well-written and in-character, and I love it!

Author's Response: I love the fact that she totally would call him that too.

Summary: Jim has a secret... what could it be?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Mark, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10925 Read Count: 68684 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 30, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Author's Note

Computers are evil whores. I'm so sorry about your evil whore of a computer, and I hope that it is happy and healthy soon - not for the sake of fic, but for the sake of your sanity, cause I know how that goes. So, hey, good luck. If things don't work out, you and I can have an Office Space moment in a field somewhere where we beat our computers senseless with baseball bats.

Er... I didn't mean it! It was a joke. Out of love... now I'm screwed.



Author's Response:

i would agree to that plan, but i can get a free computer if it keeps screwing up. not that i want it to keep screwing up.

i live off of my computer - and even worse, about 90% of my school work is via computers... eek.

right now it is behaving, but, with this computer, i don't trust it.  

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Package

I had to start with this: I don't think I've mentioned before that the thought of John Krasinski (or Jim) with a camera taking pictures is just HOT. Okay, done being vapid and shallow. This is great. Incredibly well-written. The fact that they have something in common with the art... perfect. Thank you so much for writing!



Author's Response:

wow, i forgot to reply to this. anyways. does jim/jk really need a camera to look sexy? i mean, i admit it, photographers are always sexy, but its just like, i mean, it is just added amazingly to the glory that is JK. (yeah, just a tad bit in love, i can live in my fantasy a bit longer).

thanks for the review 

Again by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 48] 28
Summary:

Post "Ben Franklin," pre "Phyllis's Wedding."  AU in the sense that...well, things go differently here between Jim and Pam than they went on the show.

This is what I'd wish for. 

Also - this is a completed story.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2897 Read Count: 25298 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2007 Updated: March 19, 2007
Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Um... wow. This is the most brilliant post-Casino Night Season 3 fic I've read. The way you handled Pam talking to Jim... direct but still scared... perfect! Yay. Thanks for writing this - it was excellent.

Author's Response: Man, that is quite the compliment!  (There are so many amazingly talented authors out there that it never fails to surprise me.) So glad you liked it - thanks for taking the time to review!