Reviewer: LovesKetchup Signed 10
Date: October 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I know that everyone needs to be alone in a foreign place, at least for a little bit. That’s how you explore yourself.
I cannot even begin to describe how much I connected with the Pam you created in your story. I fancy myself to be somewhat Pam-like - sheltered, shy, hesitant, and living mostly for/with a significant other.
I sit on a bench outside and just close my eyes and think about how I’ve been sort lonely, but it’s a clean kind of loneliness, and I don’t feel alienated or anything. It’s a self-reliance that I’ve never felt before in my life, not even in New York. It’s a good loneliness because it’s just me and my decisions and my selfishness. That’s something that I’ve really never had before, because my whole life has revolved around fulfilling myself with Roy or thinking about Jim.
Last year, I spent 4 weeks backpacking through western Europe by myself because "I wanted to be not here" and you've captured the beauty, thrill, "clean loneliness," and opportunity for personal growth resulting from a trip like that so well and so beautifully. I've been trying to explain to people how the trip made me feel and I've tried to explain my inner evolution to no avail. But now.. now I have your story to direct them to because I would have never been able to epitomize all those emotions and form them into coherent sentences like you have.
Congratulations on your first story here at MTT! I look forward to reading more of your work - I know I'll be reading this one more than once.
Author's Response: Cool, thank you so so much! I\'m really happy you liked it. And I\'ll have more work on here soon (hopefully).