Post-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.Okay, if I could steal the shoes right off the screen, I would. Those are the hottest shoes ever! Great chapter too. LOL
Author's Response:
You have no idea how long I looked online before finding those shoes - I seriously want a pair as well!!
Thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed it!
More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!
OMG! That was me as a child LOL! I swear, I hear horror stories from my mom all the time, I used to steal everything. Very Cute, I like how you wrote it entirely from Jim's point of view. He would make a great dad (if he wasn't fictional :P)
A love triangle, from a different perspective.u r very good at capturing the things that might be going on in karens mind. i rarley review, and for me to review a story, it means its really good, atleast by my standards. it took me by surprise how funny it is. i got some funny looks from my mom when i laughed out loud a couple of times, and i found myself arguing with karens thoughts, which is weird, i know :D anyway, its really good, keep it up!
Crossover with "My Name is Earl". Pam is on Earl's list, and it's up to him make things right. Pre-Casino Night.
Okay, you have just combined two of my favorite shows, and I love it! And you captured Earl and Randys voices so well. This is getting interesting, what could Earl have possibly made "Tray" do? I think its a collective vote for you to update quickly. :D
Kelly's determined to bring out Pam's innate hotness, as Jim watches on....
Takes place between Traveling Salesmen and The Return.
Okay this has to be the best stuff I've read all day. In the first chapter I hated you cuz you got Don't Cha stuck in my head. But then you used You're So Damn Hott, like my fave song ever, and then I was fine. Luv ur stories Moxie, always make me smile. Keep up the good work! :D
Dwight in a speedo?!?!?! The mind boogles.......... Awsome story, update soon. :P
Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
Ohhhhhhh! Whats Phyllis gonna pick? If I was her, I would so tell them what was in the e-mails. I'm actually a little afraid of Pam in this story. Keep the good stuff coming! :D
Wow. Okay, Kelly is like in a game of Telephone when you intentionally change the phrase, but you only do it to make it sound more interesting. Wait, did that come out right? Maybe I should ask Kelly........What's gonna happen next? :P
Author's Response:
OKAY, you can totally write Fanfic because that is exactly what I was thinking as I wrote it. I was like "how can Kelly mess this up"? It was surprisingly easy. Here's what Kelly says is going to happen next after using her pink magic 8 ball - "Ask again later."
Could Dwight and Michael be any more awkward? I know its just fiction, but u captured them so perfectly, its just, it boggles the mind. Wow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise on the Hooters scenes but I actually just feel AWFUL about them! This is supposed to be Girly Girl and I felt guilty the whole time I was writing because none of the girls were there. I had to do it! My excuse is that I was forced to by all the Jim fans who were confused about yesterday's chapter. Maybe if I had the Hooters girl do something.... hmm
OH NO! It involves Kevin. I'm really scared. Should u up the rating? LOL! Ah, I trust ya. Make it good. :P
Author's Response:
Be afraid, be very afraid!
Should I up the rating? What does that mean? Do you mean you want to see steamy sex between Kevin and Phyllis? Because now you're making ME very afraid! I don't think I have the muscle control to write that one. I'm pretty sure my fingers would spasmodically fly off the keyboard of their own accord and try to strangle me. Yeah. Pretty sure that's what would happen. They're looking pretty twitchy right now.
I've always loved the secret connection between Phyllis and Jim...she always knows what's going on...I love it! So cute. I've always thought of Phyllis as like Jim and Pam's personal cupid, does that sound weird? Anyways, great little fic, loved it! :D
How can you make Jim die?!?!?!?! A really great story, except for the death of Jim part. It might make me stop reading, but its really good, so I'm conflicted Uhggg! Jim can't die. LOL! I'll be okay, its fiction. :P
Author's Response:
Sorry about that. It is hard. The only reason I wouldn't do Pam is because I can write feminine easier, and like, all of my experience (aka real life, books, reseach) has mainly focused on the loss of a male figure. Therefore, when writing fiction, go with what you know. And what I know is death of a male figure.
Don't worry though, if I do get around to writing more (hopefully tonight) There will eventually be some happy like flashbacks or something. But, yeah, mostly sadness.
Its really hard to write this emotionally. Cause, i swear, last night after I finished, I just felt so drained. I had tears and stuff.
Eight years has passed since Jim and Pam have spoken. Many things have changed in their lives including a little girl that captures their hearts.
I liked this chapter. Heck, I like this story. The next chapter is when Jim and Pm make up, right? Please say so. I liked this chapter, but I love Jammy fluff better. LOL!
This is a very cute story. I love it. Keep the chapters coming. :D
Wow. I teared up myself. LOL! Great chapter, great story, keep 'em coming. (by 'em I mean chapters, just so ya know :P)
I really love this story, and I almost forgot about it since its been so long. I knew like right away that she was pregnant, I was just waiting for you to confirm it. Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I kinda like this story too. Ha. Thanks again for your thoughts and your comment. I hope to keep adding to this story in the next week or so. I'm pumped about the future for this family and let's just hope getting past this little bump in the road will be over with soon. Keep up the reading!
Pam spills her secret, but Karen is listening.
I love it! The twist at the end, so unexpected. I had to go back and read it through a second time, but it was hard by then, cuz I was laughing so much. Awsome!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it held up on the second reading. I was really trying to get their conversation to work either way.
Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.
Oh, definatly add in the songs. Anything that makes me think of our sexy boy Jim. LOL! Great story, I'm really liking how you're writing it, if you know what I mean.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the feedback, bloomsgirl! My hesitation about including the songs was spawned from a few comments (on other boards) indicating that lyrics and/or references to songs are a distraction.
But, in light of your request, I'll definitely include them in the footnotes for the next chapter.
Thanks again for the review - it means a lot, honestly.
I cried when Dwight quit. Thats how much I love him. This story rocks, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
Yay! Really great story. Karen should blow up at Jim like that on the show. What will happen next? Can't wait to find out. :P
Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. Oh, this is too good! Can't wait till the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: thank you, bloomsgirl! I'll try and get chapter 2 up as soon as possible!
SaintSimon> He must have had the transfer in place before he told her, given how quickly he left. At least that's how it would have to be where I work. Nobody just asks for a transfer on Friday and gets one on Monday!
Okay, as soon as I read this, I instantly thought Toby. I, like, yelled it out and scared my mom and dog. LOL! Am I just crazy, or is my crazy mind right? If it is, it would be awsome. Loving this story. (seriously though, don't u think Toby when u read that? I'm just saying....)
How in the world did you find out that his eyes are Asparagus? I just took me five minutes to find that crayon colour, find a picture of JK's eyes, and compare them. You're right, but wow. Awsome story. I like it. I can't wait to see what happens when Jim has to finally tell Pam that he is Squirrel_McPants. Can you say drama? LOL! :)
I caved and wrote a post-Cocktail fic that can be best described by Jim's Talking Head from Season 2 Ep 6:
Fight! Fight! Fight! FIGHT!
Wow, can you say Cat Fight between Kelly and Karen. Jesus, I mean, I know its only fiction, but Karen really has a way of stepping in where she isn't wanted (by us). :P
“For one hundred dollars: Which of the following cheeses is typically used in grilled cheese?”
Now she lets herself cry.
She's moved to a new city with a new life and a new job, but getting over him is going to be harder than she thought.
DUDE! Did anyone else think this was about Karen? Wow, great ending to go with a great story. Wow, I still can't believe it, did not expect that. LOL! Okay, I'll shut it now. I liked it though. :P
Author's Response: =] thanks! glad you liked it! i wrote it intentionally to feel like Karen all up until I used Pam's name. thanks a bunch!
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