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This was such a great summary of Pam's 3 months at Pratt and NYC. There are so many aspects of your story that I loved so I'll just pick a couple of them to gush on. First, the proposal was simple but oh so sweet. The fact that they exchanged presents while away from each other was just so them. And of course, how they're all over each other when they see each other, steamy!! Overall, I loved that you addressed so many things about their relationship. Great, great job!

10

This was an absolutely lovely, absolutely wonderful look into that time period that we didn't get to see when they first started dating.

In addition to being sweet, the intimate moment between them was just so steamy and hot as heck!

Thanks for sharing!!

10

The story was so, so sweet and endearing! I loved how you showed Jim and Pam are settling into their relationship and becoming more familiarized with each other. I'm agree that Jim doesn't care what Pam wears because he's just so happy that they're together at last. Great job!

9

I just love this story. I've mentioned before that I really like the way you painted the scenery and background. I liked Jim's thoughts as well, about how far he and Pam had come to this moment, how nothing could be better during the moment in the rain. So beautiful! I loved the title as well. The different sounds of the rain is when it hits different surfaces is just wonderful! Great job!

Author's Response: Wow...going back to what almost seems like an "oldie".  It was hard not to get a bit inspired by that proposal!  Thanks for the kind words.

9

I really like how they're both still are able to be playful with each other in bed. That last paragraph was really good, especially what Jim said at the end. It's both sweet and sexy! I have a suggestion: how about the first time Pam draws Jim naked? Or any scenario where clothing is optional ;o) I'm not picky.

Author's Response: Ooh I really like that idea. I bet he\'d be all shy and Sexy. I may play around with that. Thanks for reviewing my older fics! Means a lot to me Xxx

10

This was a great story. I really loved the way you described how much Jim loves Pam, especially this line, "I found paradise once lost." The fact that he would go to great lengths for her, making sacrifices without being asked, it's just so Jim. Great job!!

We regret to inform you that bkwrm's brain has exploded. :D

Wow...ask and we shall receive. I know I should have something more to say except omgomgomgomgomg....JAM smut. You certainly satisfied my prurient fantasies when it comes to Jim and Pam ;o)

This whole chapter was hot, dirty, wonderful, absolutely worth waiting for! And the need and want that they have for each other is...gah! Great job! Ummm...would it be too much to ask for encores? *puppy eyes and whimpering* I mean, we skipped quite a bit in their relationship :D

Author's Response: Wow, nice use of prurient. :-) So...in answer to your question, yes, there will be at least two more "adult" scenes, but I have to ask: do y'all like 'em sweet or dirty? Because it affects how I'll write certain things. Oh, and not to fear, their first time will be revealed.

10

*squeeee* I get so excited to see the update! Perfect way to start my Monday!!

Very sweet chapter. Love the fact that they're planning their wedding and that little part about Jim reflecting on their relationship from friends to more than that ;o)

I really can't wait for the last chapter. And if there's a part about Jim "mousing" Pam, it'll be even better :D

Author's Response: Would I let you down? ;-)

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Well, this review ain't like being fed pizza by Jim & shower sex, but hopefully it'll satisfy the non-pervy side of you :P

I'm so happy that we finally know what happened that night in the kitchen!! I love the flashbacks and how it filled us in on these little things that I've been wanting to know about these two. So glad they're moving in together!

This chapter made me laughed, sighed, and just plain happy. And that part in the end? Niiiice. /Kevin

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I considered not having them move in, out of respect to Pam's "Chair Model" speech about how she wasn't going to live with someone unless she was engaged, but there was some reason they had to move in... Right, naked Jim asking her to shack up. That's it. Very highbrow, indeed.

So...just read this chapter again (what?!?) and I think after this wonderfully dirty & smutty chapter, I would love to read sweet intimate moments. I'm actually up for anything that you want to give us ;o)

Oh, and I realized how annoying I can be w/ the constant begging for smut so I'll stop. Promise! Girl Scout's honor and all that :D

Author's Response: No, no, it's actually really helps to know what people want. A lot of times I have broad strokes worked out, but not details, so it's good for me to know. However, if you are a Girl Scout, will you send me some cookies?

*happy sigh* That was very, very sweet! I loved how you once again added lines from the show into the stories because that "I'm in love with Italian food" is one of my favorite lines ever!

Also, favorite line from this chapter: "If 'Italian food' comes home pregnant..." LOL.

Oh...I love this chapter but seriously, where's the smut? I'm going through withdrawal here. *twitch, twitch*

Author's Response: Next chapter, I promise! I thought about having them sneak into a dressing room, but I didn't want Joan Beesly to drop dead. And Larissa might have castrated Jim right there.

Nooooooooo!! Pam!!! Why did you run away?? Go back and finish what you started!!

*shakes fist at antheivy* See what you've made me do? Yelling at a fictional character in a fictional story. *sigh*

Another great chapter. I am very much enjoying the way you're writing Jim and Pam's relationship. The way they're navigating through this best-friends-but-feels-like-more thing. And it's becoming apparent their attraction to each other. Also, please get rid of Toby and Karen stat! Stat means now. Do it! 5-4-3-2...

Although this chapter didn't leave me smilin' & satisfy (I blame Pam!), I will keep coming back for more.

Author's Response: Yeah, she didn't really leave Jim smiling and satisfied either. He had to take matters into his own hands.

I KNEW there was only one choice for Jim and that was the right one to stay w/ Pam. This chapter, to me, feels like a significant shift in their relationship. No matter how much Jim thinks he 'loves' Karen, it's not really close to what he feels for Pam (the way you wrote them in this story). And I love how even Karen knows this based on the ultimatum she gave Jim.

I'm going to echo the sentiments of other reviewers and beg you to please let these two get together without anymore roadblocks. I felt like I just finished watching season 3 of TO. It's exhausting and I'm excited to read what's ahead (hopefully some JAM smut *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*)

Author's Response: Pervert. ;-) Hey, you're among friends. Thanks for reading! I appreciate the reviews and hope you'll continue sharing your thoughts.