Jim, Pam and a weekend in New York - set in the fluffy future. Not a spoiler in sight.
10 oh my god! that was great! this is officially my new favorite story! please continue it!
This is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.10 what happened to bob vance and phyllis? i hope they would've said the restaurant bathroom on v-day! whew, that was awkward. great story by the way, hilarious, and sorry i didn't review the last chapter, it was great, too.
i'm kind of mad at myself now, i just agreed to babysit on thursday night, by being convinced i had no school the next day. but it's the wedding episode! crap. i just might have to break my rule of no tv while babysitting!
10 i love how all the couples spend their time after the show. so cute and it's nice to see how they actually are all in love with each other!
great story, this was really well written and hilarious!
10 ahhhhhhh. sigh. that was great. made me so happy. i think i should find my own jim halpert.......
great job, calliejames! keep going if you find inspiration for another chapter!
I needed some cheering up, so in that vein, here is an incredibly un-angsty little piece of fluff. It's only three parts long and it's almost all done.
Pam and Jim reconnect in the most unlikely of all places...
10 Oh my god. That was incredible! Great job and I know you wrote this AGES ago, but please - if you have the time keep going! I loved this, it was so well written, this is by far awesome with a lot of extra blossom!
wow, that was really good. i love all the detail and how things didn't turn out as planned because that was the way their relationship went. great job!
i loved that! so cute! i love the messenger bag, too. i don't like karen, though. and this proves my point further. win-win-win situation!
26 Begun out of hiatus frustration as an exploration of what we might miss of Jim and Pam's newfound romance, this has grown into something unique and cool, a multi-authored exercise in creativity and obsession.
By the way, we talk about it here if you're interested in saying hi.
that was beautiful. don't want to ruin the happy thoughts going through my head so that's all i'm going to say. i know, i'm greedy. :)
10 oh my goodness. this story has made all my dreams and hopes come true. thank you vampiric blood and the rest for writing such a wonderfully perfect story that has kept me up until 11:40 on a school night even though i finished my homework hours ago. this was incredible. the proposal and jim's day he planned for her was beautiful. i loved pam's reaction to it all. amazing job - i didn't even see it coming!
so well done. i'm really reeling here. amazing! that's all i can really say.
congrats for having the brilliant idea to join up and write this together - i think it really added to the story and all the other characters in their families were great, solid characters. perfectly done story!
10 oh my goodness, vampiric blood again you have captured me with your perfection. i didn't read who write this chapter, but as i scrolled back up to the top i knew for sure who's work this was.
you are such an amazing writer - great job with this - i don't want to depict all the little details of my favorite parts of this chapter, i just want to congratulate you. great work yet again!
10 oh my gosh. this was adorable. i loved these 'postcards'. and especially how this was a chapter. every story needs at least one chapter that doesn't really have the plot move forward but just kind of 'be' you know what i mean? this just shows how much love there is between them. oh-so-beautifully done!
10 that was beautiful. ms. vampiric blood (i hope the respective author of each chapter actually gets to read these reviews) this was my favorite chapter so far. yes, the others were so amazing, too but this one really drew me into the story. i felt like i was pam, watching jim in his 'happy place'. this was so beautifully done. great job! i can't wait to meet jim's mother - and to read the other two chapters you wrote. i've been waiting to read them this whole story!
10 oh my goodness. how does this story keep getting better???? it's amazing one minute and breathtakingly perfect the next. i am so impressed! and i don't mean to be cheesy at all. just honest. i'm serious!
i love how this was so secretive. and especially the trip to the 'lavatory'. so cute and very angela. i liked how they were invited to watch the movie together afterwards - i'm surprised they didn't - more dwight spying time. but, maybe they actually want to be friends now and they don't need to spy and more than necessary.
whatever, that didn't make much sense. on to the next chapter and a schrute/martin wedding in the making!
oh wow. that was great. i loved dwight's food choices. absolutely they did suffice. perfectly done i must say. i love how angela and dwight can be so affectionate yet.. how would angela say it.... appropriate?
beautifully done. for once i don't think i can predict what comes next. so i can't wait!
oh my goodness, single tear, that was absolutely incredible! i loved dwight's proposition SO MUCH. 'please think about it. ok. that's enough time. what is your answer.'
so hilarious - dwight would totally say that. so impressively well done. i loved that so much. think about it. ok, that's enough time. perfect.
can't wait to see pam's reaction at dinner!
darn. that was so cute. 'i never pegged you as someone who owned a picnic basket halpert.' is totally the best line ever.
can't wait to see how this picnic ends (evil laugh...)
um... would WOW be the right word here. i think so...
aww. so completely and utterly perfect. how sweet. and jim waking up... hehe......
oh my god. i loved the first lines: “Sorry. I wasn’t quite ready to let go of that moment yet, ya know?”
Jim, caressing the back of Pam’s arms, her hands still burning into his chest, whispered back, “Yeah, I know.”
He leaned in and softly kissed her again.
so beautiful! this is shaping up to be one of the best stories ever and great job making this a group effort - sometimes a writer can have kind of a blah chapter without someone else taking over. i don't expect to ever find one here. i can't wait to keep reading.
my routine tonight is going a bit like this. do a math problem. read a chapter. do a math problem. read a chapter. it's pretty sweet.
can't wait to finish my math!
wow. what a great chapter - except for jim's last line. arg. as much as i love you jim halpert, that's not very nice.
not meaning i don't like you, sheaheykid, but i don't like jim for saying that. there's a big difference. :)
next chapter... i love this story!
wow. that was amazing. complete perfection. and i must admit, that last line kicked my ass...beesly. lol
that was perfect. jim's observation of the office romance, toby saying 'that's my girlfriend' and especially (getting to the good part) the dundie. i would have never thought of that. so perfect. i seriously need to find a 11 out of 10 rating button...............
what an adorable way to start a story! great job! and thank you so much vampiric blood for existing and having an author's page without you i would have never found this story. which by the way is making my crappy evening a whole lot better. the day was great...until homework took over. oh well. i look forward to reading more of this later!
wow. that was so cute how jim had planned everything and it didn't work. i kind of knew that would happen all along - which i think made it even better. great job, with this chapter. it was perfect. i love this story so much and i can't wait to read the next chapter!
that was absolutely perfect. i love dwight in this chapter. i knew he loved angela - and he still does even in the world of season 6 when he acts like a jerk to all women. he's still not over angela and she's not ever him...
loved jim and pam for waiting. i could tell it wouldn't actually happen in the supply closet, but interesting... i'm reading the next chapter now.