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oh my god (yes, again) - you are a genius! i totally forgot that this was the second time jim was putting everything on the line with the whole pam situation until i read your description of him sitting in his car at the parking lot. great job, this is so well written. usually i'm not the biggest fan of short chapters, but this is great, i love all the description so much! i can't wait to read the first date chapter, i'm sure you'll include a lot about their looks at one another and ecstatic inner emotions. or at least i think you will... if not there's an idea! what a great story! you really have me thinking here. my latest thought:

the title of the show is the office. most people (and up until 2 minutes ago, myself included) just thought 'oh, they work at an office, that's all'. then i realized now 3 minutes ago that so much of the plot has happened there, and (yes i did already realize this part) the office is how so much of the characters' lives came to be. so i'm not really sure how to explain what finally clicked for me, but all i know it came as a result of your writing. so win-win-win situation. hey, i love quoting them too!

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okay, that was adorable - great job! what a cute idea. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm so happy you think it was adorable, a great job, and a cute idea! I just couldn't get it out of my head.

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oh my goodness, that was incredible! this is so, i don't know, dreamy? magical? romantic? i'm not sure - probably a mix of a lot of those and a whole bunch more, but whatever it was, this story was perfect. great job, unfold! this was amazing! you definitely captured the honeymooner phase perfectly, this was incredible!

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ah, so many cats. i'm curious - why did dwight think that THREE cats was necessary? just wondering... i love this chapter, though. i'm surprised that they kissed, so out of character for dwight - have we ever seen him kiss angela, or anybody before? oh never mind, i think he did in niagara... but what about angela?

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wow. that was really different than i was expecting, angela talking completely in a metaphor - but i really like it! please continue, such a great idea, and i too love the pam/angela moments! keep going, there's a lot you can still do with this idea!

definitely! i loved the episode tonight - finally one that was funny, had the entire cast actively participating, was productive with dunder mifflin, and seriously, was just a good show.

what did you think of murder? anyway, i can't wait to read your next chapter of babytimes!

wow. very... uh... lustful??? lol. i liked this, but to be honest it wasn't my favorite chapter. i guess i just thought something was lacking in it. i think in all the other chapters you show 2 elements of their relationship, just the two of them excited about the baby, and then something representing the baby - so all three of them together. i guess i just thought something was missing there. oh well. i can't wait to read the next chapters!

Author's Response: I like to think that the baby was the biggest part of this chapter, Jim's "lustful" actions were all a part of his excitement and passion for his baby and the woman he was sharing it all with. He's a happy guy these days! =)

oh my goodness, pam stop reading those stories! jeez, the woman is insane. but jim seems like he's going to be a great father.

alright, what am i doing, why on earth am i equivocating this? JUST WRITE MORE ALREADY! thank you and good night.

but really, thanks for adding filler chapters that are following the plot, these are going to be great!

such a great chapter! cute idea with the sheets and playful banter. lovely descriptions. nice work!

oh my god, this was so cute. even though it's a kind of silly idea i love it all the more, great job and i can't wait to keep reading. it just makes me so happy to see them pregnant and married (if only michael would stop dating pam's mom..... then they could be in pure bliss...)!

if you want some help with two i'd love to help - maybe bounce some ideas back and forth or whatever you think could help - let me know if that interests you!

Author's Response: thanks! it makes me happy too; i love that they're having a family. warms my little shipper heart. two is starting to move in a better direction (lol, like it's so serious) but if i need help at some point i'll let you know =) thanks again!

oh my goodness baby, learn how to control yourself. kick when they want you to and then leave your mommy and daddy alone! stop it or you're being creepy!

to you, yanana, nice chapter! very cute at the office!

no, i think this is realistic for jim and pam, just not maybe everyone else. but you're right - they probably would have a sense of humor! great job, and keep up the great work - i think this is realistic for the office, sorry if that wasn't clear before!

Author's Response: no worries! thanks again for the kind words. =)

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oh my god, that was so beautiful, jim is incredible! i want a jim even more now. darn. but still, this was the best chapter yet by far. every line i read make me love this chapter even more - great job! the dialogue was really realistic, too. i can't wait to read more, are you going to go back to earlier days in the pregnancy or have a delivery and post-birth chapters??? just curious, i'm a little kid at heart, i hate waiting to figure out what my presents will be. reminds me, i really need to get back to co-writing my x-mas fic... it's going to me awesome. but back to you, this was amazing!

Author's Response: thanks for both of your reviews! =) i'm glad you're enjoying it. i don't know if i'll do delivery or post-birth stories yet for this one. i've already done narrative so i don't know if i could do another delivery story and make it different enough. but we'll see. as for now, it's just going to be during the pregnancy days, and i'll continue to go back and forth through the first, second, and third trimesters. the next one i'm posting is going to be the second or third trimester, i can't remember which. thanks again. =)