Penname: Clover Real name: Laurie
Member Since: November 28, 2016

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Summary: Okay so she made a wish. It wasn't like she actually expected it to ever come true.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15535 Read Count: 7168 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2019 Updated: May 21, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: April 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: If I Had a Million Dollars

Coley! Your writing is so natural and believable and I can just see them and hear them and BELIEVE that it is all happening! I don't know what you have in store, but I am sure it will be just a real as the room I am sitting in!

So I was not familiar with the Barenakedladies song so I looked up the lyrics (did my research) before reading the story. The next story that's posted has 'treehouse' in the title, but I got a little confused and assumed there would be a treefort. But I like the not-real green dress. And poor Karen is so confused and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

I really adore your writing. All your story notes had me prepared for something weird and a stretch, but so far, it is just . . . I can just hear Pam breathing in and breathing out. And chuckling. And grinning. And I can't wait!

Author's Response: Clover, your words are always so nice and they always make me smile, so thank you for that! Don’t worry, the ‘something weird’ is coming but it’s fun and worth it, I hope!

Kind of Reckless by Coley Rated: MA [Reviews - 32] 47
Summary:

It's the kind of reckless that should send them running, but they know they won't get far.

She's known him most of her life, but this summer Pam sees Jim in a completely different way.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22738 Read Count: 9089 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2019 Updated: May 24, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: September 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: You're dodging the moon and I'm playing it safe

Coley! LOVE THIS! Your writing is so VIVID! I can see Jim so clearly up on that tractor. And every other scene is nearly as alive. That tractor was pretty darn riveting! And I totally agree with Warrior, "She Thinks My Tractor's Sexy" jumped right into my mind too! Not that I'm a huge country western fan (do like me some Dixie Chicks!), but that song and the video are pretty powerful. So much else I could say, and I probably will! Keep it coming, my StoryPainter friend! :)

Summary:

This story started out being a one-shot inspired by the Taylor Swift song Gorgeous, but then it became so much more. Thanks to Coley for reading and giving feedback. 

Pam and Jim meet right before Jim starts at Dunder-Mifflin. Pam develops a crush on Jim and has to figure out what to do about it. 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Katy, Jim/Pam, Katy, Kelly, Larissa Halpert, Pam, Pam/Roy, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16908 Read Count: 5873 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2019 Updated: October 10, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: September 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I like this! And with Pam being single, the trajectory of the story is wide-open! I love being surprised by developments and this certainly has that potential. As stated by several others, your characters are all spot-on! Even Pam being a tiny bit mean rings true as a shield from her own attraction to Jim. Very cute set-up! :)

Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: October 06, 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, I am SOOO enjoying this! Kelly's involvement is giving this such a junior high flavor, coupled with Pam's inexperience with adult flirtation. It really is a totally different experience with Pam having the crush first, but Jim is falling fast too. I am looking forward to Pam owning her feelings, rather than being dashed around in the waves. But this is all so very sweet -- I love it!

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: October 06, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Annnnd, I always love a masterful telling of the same story with two totally different perspectives. Pam running away when it gets a bit too intense and scary for her, and Jim assuming that she's running because she doesn't like him. Great job!

Summary: On the night of Diwali, Jim is woken up to seven missed calls and seven voicemails. When he picks up on the eighth, drunken confessions turn his world on its head.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, In Stamford
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8848 Read Count: 5261 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2019 Updated: September 30, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: September 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Some Need to Hit the Bottom to See They've Got a Problem

Can I nominate this for a Dundee? What's the process? Ohmygosh, this is so incredibly precious! Pam is so adorable. Jim is so gobsmacked and loving. You are an AMAZING writer. Each paragraph I read, the imagery was so vivid, so gorgeous, so imaginative. This is definitely a favorite. I DO love drunk Pam and Jim loving drunk Pam, and drunk Pam being adorably honest. I HATE being a reviewer who cannot even begin to use the English language like you do, in order to adequately heap on the praise you deserve. You milked my heart Agian! You have officially blown me away.

Summary: Companion piece to "This Thing Called Life." Here's the Season 3 angst-fest I mostly skipped over last time. Also inspired by the song "Walk Me Home," by P!nk.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Mark, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Jamie and Morgan
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5855 Read Count: 1723 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2019 Updated: November 19, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: October 20, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, you killed me with that heart! So nice. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Clover. Good to hear from you again. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: October 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

For someone who doesn't like to do angst, you sure do a good job of it! This is an angrier Jim than we ever saw, and a more emotional one. But it plays out in a very believable way. Looking forward to the next chapter Warrior!

Author's Response: Thanks Clover. Yeah we're seeing an angry and emotional Jim right now since Casino Night is so raw. Thanks for the review.

Summary:

After the events of Casino Night, Pam is adrift and Jim is anchored. 

A spin on early Season 3 that relies far too heavily on nautical imagery and references to Titanic... 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24362 Read Count: 15092 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2019 Updated: February 16, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: November 26, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, I am also loving this set-up. I'm so excited to see this come together! Great job Jenna! Woohoo! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review, Clover! I really appreciate it a86;a039; Hopefully it lives up to your excitement! 

Summary: Jim gets a little help from the Doc crew early to help with a present for his and Pam's first Christmas together.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Challenges: 12 Days of Christmas
Series: Hope in the Dark
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16860 Read Count: 14062 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2019 Updated: December 25, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: December 13, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this Warrior! So creative and surprising (I LOVE surprising!)and just glowing with warmth and love. My needs are quite simple and you fulfill them in this chapter. Keep 'em coming!

Warrior, I don't think I've ever told you how impressed I am with your prolific-ness! And everything you do is so rich with detail and always the Pam and Jim that we love --- totally in-character! That hits all the marks for me! Thank you!

Author's Response: Awww Clover, you're welcome. Since we didn't get to see how Jim and Pam spent their first Christmas together it makes it ripe for a new story. Glad you're liking this so far. The rest should be just as fun. Thanks for the words of encouragement. It's always a wonderful thing to get a review from you. 

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: December 18, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ohmygosh, the mental image of Jim, Dwight, Phyllis and Stanley staring down Todd Packer is such a delight! I'm just giggling as I watch him slither away with Michael! Great scene Warrior! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Clover. I've been wanting to write a scene like that for a while. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Summary: Christmas morning, set Season 2 after the Christmas Party episode. Pam and Jim overthink their Christmas gifts. Romance, mild angst, mild language and innuendo.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3984 Read Count: 1581 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2019 Updated: December 22, 2019
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: December 23, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this is excellent Donnamour! Please DO continue on! Please DO go AU! I love it! Your details on the bonus gifts are great --- especially the Boggle tournament. Love it all! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And your wish is my command! I've written an AU sequel called "New Year's Eve." I'd love for you to check it out.

Summary:

It's 1995 and 16 year old Pam thinks she has everything figured out. All she wants is to be an artist, find a nice boy to fall in love with, and continue to think that everything happens for a reason.

The summer after her 16th birthday everything comes crashing down. Pam's life as she knew it begins to change. The perfect cocoon of a life she had originally had begins to crumble.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Other, Pam/Roy
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Another Decade
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21168 Read Count: 26007 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2020 Updated: June 09, 2023
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: February 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Thursday, August 10, 1995

Love this! I have a similar story to tell too. My first date with my now-husband was in high school. He offered to give me a ride to a play our class was going to --- I assumed that it would be a car full of classmates. I happily said yes. But about a week before the outing he said "where do you want to go for dinner before the play?" I did a double-take and said, "dinner? Aren't there going to be others in the car?" He just grinned. I was truly shocked. But then I grinned too, and that was the beginning!

Really enjoying this Beth! :)

Author's Response: AW! That is so sweet! I love that, thank you for sharing! Thank you for reading! :)

Summary:

He's scared to face his future. She's struggling with her past. Two brokenhearted strangers. One night in New York City.

Inspired by Before We Go

cover of Centricity by NobleLandMermaid


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drama, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3353 Read Count: 2014 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2020 Updated: March 24, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: March 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

NLM, all of your writing so completely sucks me in! Toward the end of this chapter I had to remind myself, sadly, that there isn't another chapter yet. But oh, how I love this! Your interactions between them are so true and sweet and totally in character --- what a treat! I sure hope you are bored silly right now and can bless us with another chapter soon. But I know that your pefection takes time. I'll try to be patient. :)

Virtus by boredhswf Rated: MA [Reviews - 143] 135
Summary:

"It's not about ideologies anymore or what we wish the world was. It just isn’t. You have to decide what matters and then do whatever you can to keep it. Sometimes that means making impossible decisions; choices that take a piece of you.” 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Cece Halpert, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Meredith, Other, Phillip Halpert, Phillip Schrute, Toby
Genres: Drama, Married
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death, Violence/Injury
Series: The Virtus Series
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78565 Read Count: 19553 ePub Downloads: 63
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2020 Updated: November 12, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: April 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: If Pain Must Come, May it Come Quickly

Love, love, LOVE this, but is there any way to make the font bigger?

Author's Response: Thank you! I have NO IDEA why the font does that. It drives me nuts! No matter how I copy and paste it, it looks like that. Is there some secret recipe that makes it normal? Help!

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: April 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: This is Home Now

Yay! You fixed it! Or someone fixed it! Thank you! :)

Author's Response: Yay! I might have figured it out. *fingers crossed*

Summary:

"When you're a kid, you assume your parents are soulmates. My kids are gonna be right about that." 

Pam on soulmates and finding her person. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1765 Read Count: 1357 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2020 Updated: April 09, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: April 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Jenna, I DO like this! Beautifully written. I like the imagery of Roy's fading pink.

Author's Response: Thanks Clover! It’s so lovely to hear that you liked it! 

Summary: No one is allowed to love. It’s illegal, end of story. So, what happens when two people who can’t help their feelings decide it’s worth the risk if it means they can be together? 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26726 Read Count: 6608 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2020 Updated: May 29, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: April 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: When They Met

Love this premise. Forbidden love, in a different landscape. Can't wait to see how this progresses!

Aeternum by boredhswf Rated: M [Reviews - 213] 193
Summary: Feature

He was never meant to end up here, to meet her, and to have his life changed forever.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Aeternum Series
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88869 Read Count: 26055 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2020 Updated: April 18, 2023
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: November 11, 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Wayfaring Stranger

I cannot believe I've never written a review on this story. I think it's because I'm always overwhelmed after reading a chapter. But I have two words: EXQUISITE! and PRECIOUS! Oh, and two other words . . . amazing research! I love this SO VERY MUCH. This Jim and Pam are tucked away in a very precious corner of my heart and I'm always excited when I get to revisit them when another chapter comes out. Please, please do not make us wait so long for the next chapter. Please. Love this!

Author's Response: I have to say, this review made me smile SO much. Thank you for sharing your excitement with me. Knowing there are people out there enjoying this so much makes all the time and energy worth it. :) Thanks! 

Summary:

AU from “Negotiations”; Roy isn’t in the mood for closure. Pam suffers the consequences and rises from the ashes, while Jim tries to find his way back to her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7474 Read Count: 11680 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2020 Updated: October 25, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: June 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Hope from the ashes

No pressing charges against Roy??? That would be a huge mistake on Dunder Mifflin's part. What if he does something in the future and it turns out that they pressured her not to press charges? That could be a huge liability for them!

Or maybe that's exactly what you have in mind Oncelet! Hmmmm.

Great story Oncelet! Obviously, I am completely wrapped up in it! Proceed. :)

Summary:

“What was the point of secrets anymore, for three years he had kept this inside hoping it would fade but could only feel it getting stronger. Pam would reject him, Jim knew that, but at least he could say he was honest.” An alternate take on Casino Night.



Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Danny Cordray, Isabel Poreba, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drama, In Stamford, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10939 Read Count: 7797 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2020 Updated: July 11, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: June 26, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Will we burn in heaven like we do down here

Okay, I am hate, hate, hating where you left this! (You know that I dive deep into these stories, right?) I'm so happy to hear "part 2 will be here soon" because I am definitely miserable and holding my breath!

Author's Response: I will try to put you out of your misery soon! Wait that doesn’t sound right ... but you know what I mean ;-) 

Summary: Set in season 3; what if Pam met someone (and not Roy) sometime around Phyllis' wedding? How would Jim react? How would this affect the Jim/Pam dynamic? Just adding a bit more angst to the already existing angst fest that is season 3!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21434 Read Count: 7518 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2020 Updated: July 25, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: July 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: being fancy sucks

Oh, I am loving this, even though it is TORTURE!

Author's Response: haha thank you so much for reading! Glad you like it :)

Summary: Set in S3, Jim and Pam are forced to interact as an office outing at Poor Richards
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Drug Use/Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1730 Read Count: 1216 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2020 Updated: July 23, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: July 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Shots of Karaoke

Oh yes, we need more! 😊. Please. 😊

Reviewer: Clover Signed
Date: July 31, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Shots of Karaoke

Oh yes, we need more! 😊. Please. 😊

Summary: Jim is at home sick with a virus (not THE virus...), and sick Jim seems confused about stuff. Which might explain how it comes to be that Pam is in his apartment looking after him, and Karen is selling paper...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47288 Read Count: 12604 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2020 Updated: November 16, 2020
Reviewer: Clover Signed 1
Date: August 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Early in my relationship with my now-husband, we went to Spain with a school group. While on this trip, he got sick and was running a fever. He did not hallucinate, but it did affect him. He got really, really lovey-dovey and affectionate. He kept trying to pull me into the bed with him in his hotel room, but he had two roommates who could have walked in at any time, so it was a bit of a tug of war. But he was so adorable and wouldn't stop talking and being silly and cute and lovable.

This story reminds me so much of that time. It is a very fond memory!

Can't wait to see what happens next Sam!

Author's Response:

That's a lovely story, Clover! Sick boyfriend/now husband sounds really cute.

Thanks for your review.