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7 authors. 21 songs. The most shameless smut this site has ever seen.
Ok, let's start with the garden tub. How romantic is that? The scene in the tub was amazing. Sweet, sexy and intimate. I loved that they made out in the elevator, and the scene on the boat. Your words create pictures that have so much depth. You don't just set the scene, you overlay it with emotion and beauty. Honestly I don't even have the right words to describe how great your words are.
I really like this idea for this song. I could imagine a map with all the spots on it and a string with little pins connecting them all.
Author's Response:
Sorry I’m just seeing this! It was under the first chapter but I assume it was meant for mine since you are referencing a garden tub! ;)
Thank you so, so much! I love the idea of stringing the pins together and could totally see Pam doing that. Thank you, friend!
That phone call was perfect! This has so many layers. The song lyrics, and the canon dialogue. The angst and the hope. Oh and also this:
"He didn’t bother with his underwear (boxer briefs, just like she’d pictured), just shoved them down enough to put himself on display." Wow. Now that's a visual!
And I love that she tried pulling the fire alarm! This was so, so good.
I love this story! This song was one of my favourites from day 1 and you just made it even better. Plus the video...so good. Thank you for this.
"Her knees fall open again when she hears him using his nickname for her. She’s going to need to work on that."
This was just one of many incredible, legendary lines in this story. Coley...wow. This was angry sex like no other. I like the lead up with Isabel, and you gotta know that Jim went to the cabin thinking...hoping he was getting lucky.
You write them so well. I like that you write them as adults, with flaws and issues and baggage. This was fabulous, and honestly I wouldn't be mad to read a follow up.
AG, this was so good. This was so classic for you. So much sweetness and romance, and oh my God Jim is the perfect boyfriend, and then the hot sex. In the car, in broad daylight, on the side of the road. So good.
I like the way he's gotten to know what she needs for space in the relationship, and I like the way she's letting her guard down and realizing that this is nothing like her relationship with Roy.
I liked how Jim kept up the story of their song even when things were getting...heated.
I have to confess, I don't even know this Taylor Swift song, but I'm putting it on the playlist.
This chapter unfolded in my mind's eye like a movie. I love the settings, and the characters are so true to form. I kind of died a little when we found out that she was still engaged, but that didn't last long. Then Jim asked her about Paris, and I was like, "Ooh, we're going to Paris!" and then it ended. That was the saddest part! I would love to see another chapter with that dinner in Paris.
There were so many perfect lines in this story. I'd start listing them here but it would fill the entire review. You have such a way with words. It's magic.
Author's Response:
Oh Sprinkles, I love that you felt like it was a movie playing out in your mind because that is EXACTLY how I see things in my mind as I write. Yes, I wouldn't mind seeing that fourth date either. Paris is terribly romantic and only about two hours by train. I'm just saying...;)
Thank you so much!
1 This is a great story. Steamy and sweet. I really like this moment:
"He turned back to the kitchen island and looked her in the eye before continuing, “And we can’t sleep in the same bed.” He said in a low tone. Pam felt a heat radiate inside her at his words. She swallowed hard before responding, “Right.”
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I love the implied 'we can't but I really want to' vibe. One of my favorite things to write :) Glad you are enjoying!
1 This was so good! Exactly what could have happened that night. Their dialogue is spot on and there are so many good lines, like this one: "He should stop, but it was her, in his bedroom, kissing him first. There was not enough self restraint in the world."
I like the way you ended it. Very true to the characters.
Author's Response: Sprinkles! Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it. :)
This is a CHAPTER! Wow! We've got Dwight and Oscar - love the oversize chicken description- and then steamy bathtub romance. And then - another body! Lady, this was excellent.
1 Ooooooh girl! This is good. So good. I love a historical romance, and the added mystery here is a huge bonus. Your descriptions are perfect - I actually felt warmer just reading your words. I love the creative descriptions of the guests as well. Cannot wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm so happy and honored to hear what kind of response you had. I hope you keep liking it and it says giving you warm feelings!
1 Ooh this is so good! The scene on the porch was hot - thank you for bringing wet Jim into things. I love how the mystery is unfolding with Packer and Michael and Roy. Great set up.
Author's Response: Is it too controversial to say that wet Jim is the best Jim? Hmm...maybe my next AU will be a mermaid story so that we can have wet Jim all the time, lol!
1 Ooh, the plot thickens. Why was Pam roaming around in the night, cold and damp? And the fact that she knocked on Jim's door and asked to sleep with him in his bed? Wow. I love how you're drawing out the tension here.
First of all, I agree with DJC, we need a series of Dwight and Jim, bickering detectives. That was so perfectly done. Exactly how difficult Dwight would be in that situation.
This chapter had a lot of big scenes and I could totally imagine all of them thanks to your descriptions.
I love that Jim and Pam are sleeping together without really talking about it. They're just there to comfort each other which is so beautiful.
Love the steamy moments with Jim and Pam. Dwight continues to be perfect, and the suspense is ratcheting up!
This is getting so suspenseful and you're going to leave us hanging? This description was excellent, and Dwight's demeanor about Angela was perfect. I can't wait for more!
I love how Jim and Pam have become each other's person so quickly in this story. Like, snuggling to sleep? I love it.
We hadn't seen much of Roy till now, but boy did he come into the spotlight here. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Wow. That was intense! Toby is incredibly annoying in this scene. Poor Erin! And what was in that glass?? And now Pam's single. Great chapter.
I'm so behind with this review, my apologies.
This story just keeps better and better. The Pam of this story is so mysterious. We know she likes Jim, but we really don't know much more about her. So this most recent chapter makes things extra juicy. I'm on the edge of my seat for what happens next.
OMG!!! This chapter was intense, and that ending was NOT what I expected. I love how you've woven this story together. I expect the next chapter will be just as shocking. Can't wait!
1 This is really great. So much angst and emotion in a one shot. And the kiss was very hot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love me a little (or a lot) of angst from time to time.
Fancy New Beesly crashes a party.
1 This was a perfect new years story. A big party, high hopes, a touch of angst, and romance. The kiss! The champagne! The hoodie! Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Aww, thank YOU, Sprinkles! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :)
1 This is so great! I love the idea of "old tech" where people emailed and wifi was too expensive to use and weird things happened with email. It's angsty and fluffy and it's so easy to imagine how desperate Jim feels. I really enjoyed this story.
1 Wow! This was so good! "Don't threaten me with a good time". Girl, this was a perfect gift.
This is what happens when you watch approximately 17,000 Hallmark-y Christmas movies...
It's a Season 3 Christmas with one tiny difference: The Merger has not taken place.
1 This is so good. I completely feel the lethargy and sadness that Pam is experiencing. I love how the whole office is concerned about her. There are so many excellent bits of dialogue. I really, really hope we get part 2.
Author's Response: Thanks Sprinkles! Part 2 is very much on the way!
1 This is so good! I started noting lines I wanted to comment on, but there were too many. This is such a great story. And now, with Michael? Three chapters doesn't seem like enough.
Author's Response:
Too many lines to comment on is such high praise. Thank you Sprinkles!
