Penname: warrior4 Real name: Eric
Member Since: May 31, 2018

Bio:

Author of the Month March 2020

I've been writing fanfiction for awhile now. Just recently discovered The Office and figured I'd try my hand at that as well.

At first I thought of having all my stories in the same universe, but then I had some AU ideas. So any stories that occur within a common universe will be in a given series.


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Summary: All Pam wants is the perfect Christmas. But can she get it?
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: The Perfect End to an Imperfect Year
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12808 Read Count: 1629 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2023 Updated: December 23, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 22, 2023 Title: Chapter 5: A Christmas Eve Wish

So...an interesting chapter. We'll first focus on Jim here, what little we've seen of him this go around. When last we saw, he was still friendly to Pam, but not so much his girlfriend. Now both Jim and Karen are out sick for two days in a row. However Jim still has the energy to drive to Schrute farms for a prank. Part of me thinks that since the FBI prank the real Jim, Scranton Jim, has started to come out more. Karen fell for Stamford Jim, who was a brokenhearted wreck of his former self. Now that the real Jim is peaking through the mismatch that is Scranton Jim and Karen is becoming a lot more pronounced. Especially with all this attention Jim's been giving Pam. Took him long enough to reply to her message though.

Now to Pam. Some big progress for sure with that letter to Santa. Admitting in black and white her love for Jim and how she wants his love in return. Though her mind still seems to keep going to worst case scenarios. What are Jim and Karen doing together type of stuff. She's driving herself crazy there. Very sweet way for her to try and make nice with Dwight. She is a caring soul after all.

Christmas Eve is a time for wishes to be sure. Something tells me that the fates may be taking that wish smoke up and doing something with it. Looking forward to seeing what exactly. I would give a jelly bean, but I think it's prudent to save one.

Author's Response:

I think Scranton Jim is definitely back in town, which is what is causing some of the issues!!

As Pam doesn't really know what's going on with Jim, especially as he's disappeared with his girlfriend, she's all sorts of confused. She's getting there though

Thanks for the review, we're almost there! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 23, 2023 Title: Chapter 6: A Christmas Miracle

Well, no cabin in the mountains, but that's okay. I'm sure she was all sorts of surprised to see him standing there at her door.

Finally, some good honest communication between the two of them. Kinda figured Jim's headspace was probably just as turned around as Pam's had been the past few days. At least he had the wherewithal to realize he'd been sending her mixed signals. Getting told off from his folks probably helped out a good deal in that regard. Still, the reward of honesty is they get together on Christmas and that's just all sorts of lovely.

Also, loved that Jim came in wearing the red flannel shirt. Now it really is just like a Hallmark movie. Haha, suck it Kelly!

This has all been great fun. A lovely Christmas S3 fix it fic that hit the nail on the head for a whole host of reasons. Thanks for writing and sharing it with all of us.

Happy Christmas!

Author's Response:

The red flannel shirt was all for you! Can't believe I had thought of that, so thank you for the prompt!

So happy you like this one, it's been very dear to my heart!

Thanks for all your wonderful reviews and support this year, it means a lot! 

Summary: A story in which we journey through a few December 23rds with Jim, Pam, and a few of the Halpert clan. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Larissa Halpert
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 1314 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2023 Updated: December 26, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 20, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Dinner for... seven?

Good god! How in the world did Pam not see that huge red flag just billowing in the breeze like that? If it had been the first time, that would have been one thing, but after several years of ditching her in and around Christmas? Holy crap! Roy is just the worst here.

Lovely timing, for once this early in the canon timeline, that Jim and the Halperts were there. Clearly Pam just started to shine as soon as she sat down with them. Taking off her ring like that though is very telling about her state of mind. As we know, she'll get there in the end, but a little melancholy when we fast forward through what we know canon holds for them.

Looking forward to more for sure!

Author's Response: I think Pam learned to put up with a lot from Roy, but it does serve as a handy catalyst in this story! It's interesting to have them come into the story this early, but also gives Pam the realisation that she can be who she wants to be in this new situation - and she knows Jim won't hold her back from being herself, so feels a bit more comfortable. Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 21, 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Are all your family dinners like this?

One can just feel the tension bubbling in Pam here. That she knows she loves being part of this big, loud, rowdy, loving family, but yet she can't quite bring herself to tell the truth about her situation. Sadly she has a lot of practice by now in denying the truth about a lot of things. Her feelings about Roy, her feelings for Jim, her feelings about what she wants out of life. I mean we know she'll get there, but it's still a little frustrating to witness.

Still dinner with the Halperts was a lot of fun. They clearly know how to play off each other. I loved the detail that Betsy was one of the ones to teach the Halpert kids how to prank. A lot of times she's come across as the calm storm in the middle of the Halpert hurricane that was the four siblings. To think she was the one instigating a lot of it was a lot of fun to envision. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, and I think here she's seeing how easy it is to be herself when she's not held back by all those things, even if they're niggling at her throughout. I imagined Betsy to be a fun mom who can put them all in place in a heartbeat when needed! She was probably the one to put that clown painting up in the house as a joke, in my head anyway, and I thought Pam would warm to her being so different to her own mom. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 23, 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Make some good bad decisions and eat a lot of food

I mean if you were to take this AU, I certifications wouldn't mind. Clearly a non drunk Pam is feeling a bit more brave and sure of herself. Almost as if she's thriving in the relationship she should be in rather that withering in the relationship she shouldn't be.

You've got things set up either way right now. Courage for Jim and Pam to break off things with Roy and Katy or guilt to send them back. Either ways works for sure. Considering that this Roy stood Pam up and isn't even there to apologize, that we've seen yet at least, shows how poor a partner he is. Actions speak louder than words and there's some pretty loud actions screaming at all parties right now.

Author's Response:

Yes absolutely - it is exactly that, only problem for Pam is she doesn't realise these things just yet! Whether her decisions are wrong or right, it was fun to give her what she wants for just a hot second - and definitely wanted her to be sober for it to give Jim more to reflect on leading up to the Booze Cruise. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 25, 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Gas station wine and chocolate

As much as I was hoping for an AU, especially after that kiss last chapter, I also get it. Really glad to see that Pam and Larissa are still getting on so well. Feels like Pam needs a person like that in her life.

The secret bet is a wonderful bit of writing for sure. Can't wait to see how that all pans out.

Author's Response: Definitely, I think Larisa has enough Jim/Halpert qualities that make Pam feel safe around her and easy to bond with, so trusts her with these little revelations. I was so excited for her little bet and the way it happened kept growing, so it was super fun to write. It was tempting to go AU but I guess I need some drama before a happy ending! Thanks for the review :) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 26, 2023 Title: Chapter 5: The opposite of Larisa's ex-boyfriend

So that was fun. Larissa explaining it all, and winning the bet. Lovely to see how Pam has now grown so much that she's willing to be open about everything. The Pam from the first chapter would have clammed up in red faced embarrassment for sure. However now that she and Jim are fully together and she's grown so much as a person, she can be honest with everything. Loved it.

Tons of great Halpert family banter as well. The silent scheming about how they're all going to prank each other was just a hoot. Even more that Pam's going to be right in the middle of it all. Great stuff for sure.

Thanks for bringing this on in for a landing. Lots of fun moments through it all.

Merry Christmas.

Author's Response: Thank you and hope you've had a lovely Christmas! I am glad you could see Pam's growth here, especially as I didn't write quite as much of her as I had in previous chapters. I wanted the reactions she did have to show her progress and evidence Larisa's decision that Pam hadn't been ready previously to be confronted about her engagement ring. Always fun to write the Halpert family and the dynamics between them all. Thanks for reading along and reviewing! 

Summary: My take on the episode that launched this website. Mostly canon.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Drama, Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Drug Use/Abuse, Mild sexual content, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13003 Read Count: 541 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2023 Updated: December 31, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 25, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First of all, welcome to writing on MTT. Always fun to have a new writer and a new perspective on everything.

Diving right into the deep end of Casino Night with this one. Basically a novelization of the episode complete with internal thoughts. Loved the way you had those thoughts running. How Jim would seemingly give anything to not feel the way he does about Pam, but also that he would never not want to feel how he feels about her as well.

Pam's conflicted as well. Her thinking that the only way for Jim to be at her wedding would be as the groom is HUGELY telling. Considering such thoughts are also well before his declaration and the kiss means she's been having these kinds of thoughts for quite a while. She knows Roy is a dead end. That he really only cares about the before and after of the wedding and what those things usually entail proves it. She's left to do all the hard work while he only gets excited about the fun things.

Loved the way she just caught on with the prank on Dwight. How even with Roy standing there, she's more in tune with Jim. I mean really could there be any bigger signs?

The heartbreak of Jim telling her his feelings and the bittersweetness of the kiss was very well written. How we saw that this night was killing them both.

Like I said, great job for your first posting. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Are we going AU or are we headed down the path of canon and into the season of angst? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

hi thanks so much for your welcome and kind words! i love a novelization :) 

 i think things will probably stay mostly canon, but who knows! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: January 01, 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oof, full on self destruction mode for Jim here. Not that I really blame him. He just had his heart trampled on and his mind and body are way to keyed up to to anything. This feels like full on run away as fast as possible panic. Considering he hasn't even changed clothes shows just how far his mental state has gone. Same with physically punishing himself every time he thinks about Pam. The wound is deep and fresh, but he's unconsciously making it deeper. Like I said he's not really in his right mind right now, so I get it. I do kinda wish he'd had the foresight to talk to someone like Larissa or family, but again that would call for rational thought which he seems to be lacking.

You really set the stage for turbulence ahead, and not just the airborne kind.

Summary: For the 2023 Holiday Fic Challenge. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Mose, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1992 Read Count: 194 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2023 Updated: December 30, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 30, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Twixtmas

This was all very cute. Well done on getting all those elements into this one. The images of Jim and Pam curled up by the fire was delightful, especially with the implication of later activities. Same when they wake up next to each other on Christmas. It's always fun peaking in on them as they wake up in each other's arms. Dwight just showing up out of the blue though was very unexpected. At the same time it was a heartwarming moment because of the Dwight/Pam friendship. Also good on Jim for not messing with Dwight when he's in the middle of a minor sort of crisis and on Christmas. Shows that Jim is a good guy.

Delightful story to be sure. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks Warrior! I hope it was just that bit silly but with plenty of JAM romance.

Fireworks by MrsKHalpert Rated: MA [Reviews - 5] 12
Summary: A Jammy (and smutty) NYE's follow up to The Bucket List

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: The Perfect End to an Imperfect Year
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6484 Read Count: 600 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2023 Updated: December 31, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: December 31, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Fireworks

Holy crap that was hot. The teasing they did on the couch setting up the bucket list. Pam's solo portion of the trip to the mall. The preamble to NYE and then just going for it when he got back. Glad Gerald is ok by the way. But then they just throw themselves at each other and it was amazing. Even some fun banter to finish things with. Great job with this one.

Author's Response:

Haha well thank you! And thank you for the push to write it!

Glad you enjoyed this! A very happy new year to you! 

One by One by onedaymore Rated: K+ [Reviews - 3] 5
Summary:

In a series of unaired interviews from Dunder Mifflin Infinity, it’s revealed that nearly all of the office knew about Jim and Pam all along.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Creed, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Meredith, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Pam, Phyllis, Stanley
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1330 Read Count: 289 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2023 Updated: December 31, 2023
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: January 01, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was fun. Jim and Pam thinking they're being sneaky, but everyone already had their number. Makes a lot of sense really. Nice job.

An NY Trip by MrsKHalpert Rated: M [Reviews - 6] 12
Summary: Jim and Pam end 2023 on a high
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Isabel Poreba, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: Drug Use/Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4319 Read Count: 241 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2024 Updated: January 01, 2024
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: January 01, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: An NY Trip

See, now you're giving me flashbacks of various calls I've been on. People about Jim and Pam's age in the story who did exactly what they did. Wanted to try gummies or other such things, didn't think they were working so kept eating them, then when all that THC kicked in, called 911 because they were "freaking out." No, you're just high and need to sleep it off. No? You want to go to the ER? Sure, I'll even be nice and start an IV to give you fluids you can't throw up then the nurses and I will roll our eyes and have a little laugh when we walk out of the room.

An interesting take on Jim and Pam's New Year's for sure.

Author's Response: So sorry about that! Something different, but back to my normal scheduled fics now!

Summary:

The gradual reinvention of Pam Beesly, over a few month period— physically, emotionally and artistically.

Title from ‘Express Yourself’ by the Black Eyed Peas. From the Bratz Movie soundtrack, because it’s an unironically good song.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8952 Read Count: 352 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2024 Updated: January 08, 2024
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: January 09, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, this is just all sorts of amazing. I love this post S3 summer of amazing you've got Pam going through here. All the growth she went through for the past year comes to blossom in this story. Being more confident in herself, being more open with Jim, realizing her own worth, it's all great. She's taken the best parts of herself and improved them while shedding aspects that were only holding her back.

The rewards are amazing to witness. The way she improves on her relationship with Jim. Bringing new sides of herself out in her appearance and art. It's all a joy to read and witness.

Outstanding job with this one.

Author's Response:

thank you so much!! this is so kind of you!

i stayed up stupidly late to finish this one but it was definitely worth it, i love exploring Pam’s development because i love seeing her become a more confident person in season 4, mostly thanks to jim, but also i think because she learns to take more risks in life after realising she’s free to do so.

 Thank you for reading!!! 

Summary: Jim and Pam know that Michael celebrates Groundhog Day privately. But how?
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10451 Read Count: 640 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2024 Updated: February 02, 2024
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 02, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday, January 31st 2006

Ok so this is fun. Of course there's still a little tension considering it's S2 and everything that entails. But regardless, I love that Jim is using his pranking prowess for good here. Or at least nothing disruptive or destructive. Pam initially hesitant but then jumping on board fits her so well right now too. Great JAM banter throughout as well. Onwards to more!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Jam banter! Love keeping these two playful, if yet a little cautious at this point still!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 02, 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Wednesday, 1st February 2006

Michael re-enacting the movie fits him so well. My guess is that he's seen that film so many times he's got it memorized. I mean, why wouldn't he if he's also coming all the way to Punxsutawney. Also loved the back and forth between Michael and Dwight in his office there. You can see how much Dwight wants to please Michael and how annoyed but also flattered Michael is at all of Dwight's attention.

Lots of fun JAM banter too. Look at Jim being the gentleman and making sure to book two rooms. I get the feeling that anything else would have strayed into territory rife with landmines at this point. So good on him.

However we're getting some really interesting revelations from Pam. She's admitting that her life with Roy is just the same old same old. I really find that interesting considering the timing of this story. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but we're past the Booze Cruise so the date of the wedding has been set. Pam seemed really excited and at least had a bit of a flare up of her affection for Roy right around that time. Yet here we are not a few weeks later, and she's back to talking about what she's annoyed with concerning Roy. This is also, in the canon timeline at least, after her and Roy's trip to the Poconos and would also be when everything with the internship went down. I just mention this all because in the show it seems like a fairly critical time for the JAM relationship. The start of the fracture that we saw through S3. However, here, there's a different take. Jim is still being as supportive as he can and Pam seems to have forgotten all her previous zeal for her upcoming wedding. Really looking to see what happens in future chapters.

Author's Response:

That's what I like to think about Michael too! He's seen it and then is convinced he can get stuck too

I was going to go with the one room (oh no it's fanfic there's only 1 room left!) but thought it best for them to have one each!

I do think Pam was initially excited about the wedding, but we know there's always more excitement around the corner with Jim! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 02, 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Thursday, 2nd February 2006

Well, that's one heck of a way to start things off! Then of course hilarity ensues with following Michael around everywhere. The idea that he'd recreating the entire movie 100% tracks with him. Lots of fun to see it from Jim and Pam's point of view.


Ooh more revelations from the two of them. That they'd each want to be in each others time loop. Especially from Pam who makes no mention of Roy. That's huge!

Now the bar and an interesting drink order. And now we come to the 'oh holy crap!' moment. Wow, Jim being bold there. Forget everything I said in my last review about the timeline of this fic. Big shock to Pam there of course. To just hear it said loud and clear like that would of course be a lot. I don't blame her for wanting to get some space. Makes Jim a little despondent though.

However, we get to the park. Looks like Pam did a lot of soul searching in a very little bit of time. Though, maybe with reflection it wasn't as hard for her as she might have thought. Loved all the references to things like the teapot and when she first realized she liked him. Great use of all that backstory material. Then she goes ahead and has her own surprise for Jim. It really is amazing what something like 10 seconds of insane courage can do. Jim had his own moment in the bar. It then strengthens Pam to realize and also go for what she really wants. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Haha last review forgotten. Poof!

Glad you like this all - the comedy and the revelations!

Thanks so much for the review! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 02, 2024 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue - Friday, 3rd February 2006

Awww, that's a delightful way to wrap this up. Jim still being the gentleman and walking her to her door. But the courage from earlier is still in full effect and so Pam shows up. Feels like they had a very nice evening together. To think it all happened because they wanted to see the crazy antics of Michael. They clearly got a lot more than they bargained for in all the right ways.

Outstanding job and also thank you for posting it all at once. Those would have been some mean cliffhangers if you had spread the chapters out posting them one by one.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat and Happy Groundhog's Day!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this! And Happy Groundhog Day to you too!

Summary:

Set in the same world as my earlier fic December 23rd, Pam phones someone else after Jim tells her he's in love with her.

Another fix it, another interpretation.  


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4069 Read Count: 480 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2024 Updated: February 03, 2024
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 03, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great bit of introspection there at the start. Pam is obviously reeling from what Jim just told her. You really got the whole head spinning in a thousand different directions feel of things.

Good for her to take an honest look at her relationships with the two men in her life. How she's better apart from Roy than with him, and that she's really only still there due to familiarity and length of relationship. Same for how Jim fills up her day.

I really like that she calls Larissa. You gave Larissa just enough moxie to give Pam the kick in the pants she needed. At the same time Larissa was a great sounding board for all the thoughts going through Pam's mind. I've said for a long time that if Jim and Pam had just gotten some more perspective on things, they would avoided all the drama and angst of S3. Really glad we got that here.

The kiss and aftermath were so much easier this time around. Great use of the canon lines but with different context. Jim can easily walk away this time knowing there's something there to wait for. The reward there at the end just proves that. I also really like that Pam took some time for herself before jumping in with Jim. Good for her. Take time to heal from what was a big part of her life.

Great job with this fixit. I enjoyed it all.

Author's Response: Thank you! I did think if Pam maybe had someone else to talk to, maybe someone who also kind of got Jim a bit better, then she would work through her feelings a bit better - especially at a point where her world just got spun in another direction out of nowhere. 

Summary: A look at Jim and Pam's Valentine's Days through the history of communication
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2794 Read Count: 1306 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2024 Updated: February 14, 2024
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 9: S9 2013: Whatsapp

Yeah, this one stings a bit. They're just kind of going through the motions at this point, which hurts. Especially there at the end when she's still trying to connect and can't. Granted we know it works out, but going though it was still rough.

Tons of fun with all of these. I'm sure it was quite interesting looking up all those methods of communication. Even if some didn't work they way you wanted, they all still came across well from my viewpoint. Great job.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! So glad you liked them, I had a lot of fun! Thanks for all the lovely reviews as always!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 7: S7 1997: AIM

Tons of fun with a good old drunk IM session. Loved the discussion when they got back online too. They get funny when they're drunk and that played out really well here. See you in 9 months Phil!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 8: S8 2006: Facebook

Oh now you're taking me back to the good days of Facebook. Back when there was so much more of this kind of thing and so many less ads or clickbait. Jim's comment on her public wall raised a grin and an eyebrow. Then again this was right around when Cathy was hitting on him so maybe he's saying that to ensure everyone knows there was no way he'd be unfaithful.

Author's Response: I was thinking of having Pam and Cathy become Facebook friends, but I just didn't want her anywhere near the fic!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 6: S6 1972: Morse Code

Speaking from another writer who has put Morse Code into his story, I see you and I feel you. I imagine there was a lot of going back and forth between a diagram of the code and your writing document.

Lovely bit of banter. I also liked how you put in the mistakes. Show's that they're still learning and occasionally get things wrong. Delightfully realistic in that regard.

Author's Response:

Yes! It's very hard!! I checked it SO many times!

The mistakes were my favourite part, I have to say! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 3: S3 1931: Telephone

One can just feel the awkwardness between them here. Yes they're in relationships, but not with who they're in love with. S3 just always hits hard like that. Big difference between the two men here. Roy's idea is just a diner. Jim's a fancy dinner.

The last two lines though just tug at all the heartstrings.

Author's Response: Definitely a very hard time here. And yes those last two, but I had to put them in there!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 15, 2024 Title: Chapter 4: S4 1947: Newspaper

This feels like they're pranking each other a bit. Which really fits since they're finally together. Great fun with that perspective. They're back to being the fun loving couple they always are.

Also thanks for the bit of sports history.

Author's Response: Yeah I thought a nice little prank on their first Valentine's Day together would be kinda fun!