Pam gets a taste of what her life could be like. AUOooh I have to tell you I loved so much about what this chapter chose to be. So much beautifully FILLING fluff! First off, those kids are delicious. There was something about Jim just depositing his mini-me into her lap and saying "here's this" lol that made me laugh and so sweet when she had to put sunscreen on his pudgy arms. UGH. I can't wiat for the next chapter. I NEED to know why Pam doesn't remember!
Author's Response: I know you reviewed a long time ago, but even after this long I STILL appreciate it. So thanks! That was one of my favorite parts.
Ok...as sad as I am that none of that actually happened for her, I'm happy that something caused her to literally and figuratively WAKE UP. So now can you write the sequal where everything before actually happens?? huh? Can you? Please?! :-) Lovely work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll consider the sequel/prequel thing. That could be interesting and I've been needing a challenge.
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
OMG!!!! Pam come back! I need to know what happens like NOW! Oh man you've got a seriously addicting story on your hands here. I hope you're happy. ;-) That was some HOT stuff going on in the kitchen, and Jim....it's a total green light - just go for it. LOVE THIS STORY.
love, love, LOVE. I feel like the way you dealt with what had just happened with Roy was so BELIEVABLE. After something like that, it's so easy to slip into melodrama in the aftermath and you totally didn't do that. Excellent work. And it's SO nice hearing her say she was in love with him FIRST. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I'm sad it's coming to an end.
Author's Response:
yes thanks! I always marvel how after something so emotionally jarring happens in real life people just move on...keep doing what they do. At least sometimes it happens that way ;-) Wanted to put that on paper. And thanks for the review and reading!!
dayum! wow. Roy's a tool. Glad he's gone, gone, gone. Now Pam is free and clear to be guiltfree about her relationship with Jim. I did not mind the "darkness" of this chapter at all, it seemed as if a weight needed to be lifted and this did it. Great chapter.
Author's Response: oh good! Thank you. Exactly, we can't let Pam have her way with Jim if she still has Roy's shadow hanging over her head. ;-)
THAT was so unbelievably hot. Possibly the hottest thing I've read here and they didn't even "do" anything. Just him following her outside and attacking her like that....that slow burn with him touching the hem of the hoodie when he was at the table.........OH MAN!!!! More please!!!
Author's Response: ;-) I'm working on it. glad you enjoyed it
ok, the sexual tension you've got going here is AMAZING. Seriously, you're like the master at creating that. So glad you updated so quickly, but now it's like a drug...and I need more. :-)
I hope DESPERATELY that muse visits you soon! You have such a beautiful way with words. There was something you said and I'm SURE I'm not going to quote you right...but it was something to the effect of "what she usually saved for the stars ears"....My God - sheer poetry. Just really really beautiful.
The Holy Grail........Oh Stablegirl I do SO enjoy this. I think my favorite part was hearing Jim's inner monologue while standing in front of that damnable refrigerator contemplating clanking beer bottles and such and pissed that he would have to back to acting like a GIRL around her tomorrow. I LOVE THIS STORY. Keep it coming please! And Pam...come on - you can figure out what the holy grail means! ;-)
Author's Response: lol I love when reviewers resort to writing in caps. ;-) Thank you!! I'm glad you love it and I'll try to keep it going. And...yeah...Pam totally knows what it means...
oooh this is gonna be soooo good. The inspiration for this - Boys and Girls - has always been one of my favorite episodes for this thread alone. I always wondered HOW on earth after THAT giant juxtaposition between the man she was engaged to and Jim...how could she stay with Roy....:::sigh:: I'm so glad you decided to tackle this!
Author's Response: me too ;-)
oooooooh man this is good. Beautifully romantic...totally my kind of stuff to read. Can't wait for the next chapter.
unfold and I were talking and it lead to this, somehow.
Jim/Pam Smutcake.
This smutcake was the most delicious smutcakes of all the smutcakes. <Roy>
WOW. Thank you Alannis Morrisette. As soon as I read the post-it I thought of that song where she talks about this ::ahem:: scenario. WOW
You know what I loved most about this was that, their voices were so THEM. Even though you were concentrated on the smut , they were still very much in character.
Author's Response: Thanks! Keeping them Jim and Pam is actually something I strive for...even during really pervy smut.
You REALLY have their voices down! Way to go. This is such a fun idea. Can't wait for the rest, and of course the Jamminess.
This is just so in character! You've got all of their voices - and I do mean all - down pat completely. And just a lot of fun. Their prank was great and i loved seeing them in a bar later, being all flirty even in front of their co-workers.
25 Oh man! Foiled again! And would you look at Pam getting all amorous in the cornfield. lol. Hmm...if she were to get pregnant out there they could call their kids children of the corn....I know - lamest joke ever.
Author's Response: LOL - that is almost too scary to consider. But funny! Thanks for reading, LoveFool!! I love all the fluff you write. :-)
oh INDEED the perfect time. Moxie how BEAUTIFUL was this!!! Ugh, suddenly I want it to be winter! lol. What a magical setting for them to finally get engaged in. THEIR parking lot of doom, turned into a winter wonderland....Pam catching snowflakes on her tongue. I could just SEE the entire moment played out. This was such a fun story! Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Yay - I'm so glad you thought the payoff was worth the 4 chapters of torture... :-) And I SOOO want to see this played out on tv - say maybe the end of season 6? or 8?
UGH!!!!!!!!! Damn it Pam,would you please let the boy shave if he wants! lol. Oh man I'm getting frustrated FOR him!!!! Ok....but here it comes right? Yay...
Author's Response:
haha - I know! The one time Pam decides to do something a little unlike herself, and the consequences are disasterous!
Lucky he loves her so much, hmm? :-)
OMG, poor JIM!!! I'm feeling so bad for this guy! Now freaking electricity is against him! Oy....ok, moving on to the next chapter. Sometimes it pays off to miss a day around here, because you're rewarded with multiple chapters! Yay!!!
Author's Response: Jim seems to be the modern day Job (as opposed to Gob from AD!) in this story, but it just proves that he really does want to marry her, right?? Thanks for reviewing, LoveFool!
awwww....damn it Benjamin! LMAO. Not for real, Jim will get his chance and it wil be perfect I know. Keep it coming Moxie!
Author's Response: More on the way, LoveFool - thanks for reading!!!
oh that was a PERFECT way for her to tell him she loved him. And I could see it happening that way. With her newfound confidence especially after a great date with him....perfect.
A collection of loosely-related moments (more like a bunch of one shots than a WIP. So jump in and out as you like.) Unapologetic smuff.‘That's kind of sweet.'
‘...which means it would be over in about three minutes.'
‘Never mind about that then,' she immediately retracts. ‘I'm fatherless.'
‘Great...uh, I mean...how sad.'
‘My mom will be happy to see you though,' she teases, still giggling.
‘Now you're talking. I am so there.'
EEEEXCELLENT - Simpsons <Michael> This was a little slice of heaven. I was missing these vignettes! So happy they are back and you've got something else up your sleeve. You have no idea how happy I was to read that!
'I'm fatherless' came to me at the last second...but it made me guffaw (do you ever amuse yourself just a little too much while writing? LOL.) So happy you noticed it!
I do have some more bits and pieces, but nothing coherent yet - never know when something will gel though. Meanwhile, I've got a more 'serious' fic cooking too, so doodling these little smuffers is kind of a nice break. Thanks so much LoveFool (ps: I actually thought of you a little while writing the banter in this chapter, cause you're so good at that.)
More "serious" fic huh? Oh man, I am equally as excited for that! And your p.s. about thinking about me during the banter...that's so nice of you to say. You're the awesomest of everything that is awesome! Again, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's just a moody little S3 Jim pov one-shot, that's been festering since I wrote the Karen/Jim part of Snip. Hopefully, it will come together soon. Thanks for popping back in...looking forward to reading something (anything, lol) from you soon too ;-)
Colette!!!! I was so so happy to see something from you and even happier after I read it. Just my kind of smuff. Although my roommates are out of town and now I'm feeling a bit pissed that I don't have a Jim of my own to come over and distract me from things that go bump in the night......so unfair.
Anyway, good stuff! Moving on to the next chapter.