Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1
Date: July 22, 2020
Title: Chapter 4: Error
Oh Pam...
“Those texts and calls didn’t really mean anything, unless she wanted them to” Except they do mean something, that’s why she’s feeling guilty - or at the very least conscious - of them.
"High five, obviously.” This is such a lovely moment of levity in an otherwise pretty heavy chapter. Well, that and every mention to Dwight which is just delightful.
“Pam had decided that she liked him better when she could pretend he wasn't there.” Oof. That’s telling. In a way I feel for Roy, his life is unraveling around him and he doesn’t even know it. But, I suppose he only really has himself to blame...
“The savings for the wedding.” He just doesn’t get it. At least he hasn’t spent the savings on Wave-runners yet in this world. Silver lining?
“He was a stranger after all.” But is he, Pam? Is he really?
Another lovely chapter. I think you’re capturing what quarantine life would be like for Pam and Roy to a tee.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Pam is starting to realise how important the presence of Jim is, even if just virtually. He's there, through screens, more than Roy in real life. And that has a lot of meaning for her.
I love Dwight. I always try to write him in, even as a joke, because one of the best things in the whole show is his weird friendship with Pam. Also, he's hilarious.
I actually learned about the wave-runners after writing this chapter, because I've just started listening to The Office Ladies. I know, shame on me. Anyway, yeah, I always imagined him not really thinking about the wedding but more in the lines of "hey, we've got some money"
He's not a stranger, but Miss Beesly is having some trouble really understanding how.
Again, thanks very much!