Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed
Date: November 09, 2020
Title: Chapter 20: everything has changed
Is there a word count limit on reviews?! I think we’re about to find out! Watch me paste at least the entire thing in here as I read...
“He didn't dare magnify the details of his life too closely; the surface scored and etched with some cracks running painfully deep” Oh. Okay. So you’re going to emotionally destroy me. That’s fun.
Also, give me slightly destructive BFF Danny any day of the week!
“The blonde went home with you” So, so good. This is perfect Jim, quippy and fun.
“As her eyes lingered, he couldn't help but feel the flickering of something profound and his head ached a little less.” And just like that I am invested and I will go down with this ship.
“He leaned against the high wall next to her desk” OH. Well, that’s an image plucked right from the heavens/canon and I am so here for it.
“He shifted, putting his hands in his pockets for lack of a better thing to do with them” My god. Stop. London Jim is perfection. I can see him so clearly.
"She seems a little...dorky.” Bored. Girl. The way you take canon and twist it for your own purposes is so damn masterful.
“He fought valiantly but failed against the same stupid grin that seemed to appear in her presence” This is the cutest thing.
Ugh. Could Mia not?
“he looked at her pointedly with a lift of his brow, holding his breath, hoping to God she could see he meant it.” Quickly smitten Jim is a whole mood. I love him.
Protective Jim is something else. Holy god.
"Yeah, I mind." Oh. My. God. Right in the feels.
“It was his eyes, his lopsided grin, the way he smelled like male and fabric softener and home.” Dying. I’m dying. I know I say this every time, but the way you string words together is just something else.
“when she came up for air nine years later, she hardly recognized herself.” Yes. This is the perfect description of Pam and Roy.
"We didn't dance." Help. I have been attacked.
“the way he said her last name felt comfortable and strangely intimate, tendrils of warmth beginning to wind their way up from deep inside” god this is beautiful.
“He reached down for her fingers, pulling them silently into his, those cracks he never wanted to examine in his life filling in with her.” I’m running out of ways to say that this is my new favorite sentence of all time, but like, this is my new favorite sentence of all time.
“and the universal anomaly of time slowing to a standstill” Who do I commission to turn this into a rom-com? It’s playing out like a film and I adore it.
“His meager words paltry in description and he knew it.” Me, trying to review this fic. I feel SO seen.
I —
BORED.
Bored. B O R E D.
I didn’t think it was possible for “I can’t” to be more gut wrenching, but here we are.
“it is more than that” How?! How are you managing to take everything significant from canon and completely make it your own?! I am so in awe.
“She let the current of him sweep her out to sea” Well, that’s just about the most beautiful thing I’ve ever read.
Umm. Don’t leave us hanging on date number 4 in Paris. How about we make chapter 21 part 2 of London Jim? Deal? Deal.
Author's Response: I love, love, love hearing all your favorite parts SO MUCH. I love that you appreciated all my little injections of canon. I was afraid it was too heavy handed so I'm glad it doesn't seem to be. Your reviews are always so epic and adore them.