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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13899 Read Count: 82872 ePub Downloads: 6
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 25: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
His hand’s between her shoulder blades and it makes her want to tell him that she’s so incredibly lonely all the time, that she woke up on Christmas morning and when she moved her leg over, the sheets were like ice and she isn’t sure how she’s kept breathing.
This line is just so incredibly heartbreaking. I'm so glad you added this for this episode because personally, I feel like Pam was a bigger person than I could ever be for what she said to Jim in the breakroom.
And I'm so glad you wrote that Jim noticed she'd been crying, because I'd hate for Pam to have to cry and not have Jim try to comfort her. What you've written here is just perfect.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Josh Porter, Karen, Kelly, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Toby
Genres: Angst, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16105 Read Count: 13555 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: December 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Darryl
I seriously love you for writing a Daryl chapter. This was really good, seeing his perspective on the Pam/Roy thing because I really do believe he was with Roy while the whole thing unfolded. I like how he's doing the typical guy thing by sticking up for his friend, but he's doing it respectfully and I like that Pam was willing to listen and understand.
This is such a great series so far and I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response:
Thanks 69 cups! (Heh, heh! "69"....) We haven't seen Darryl in a while and I missed him! Also wanted to address the fact that Roy needs to move on. Maybe we'll see Roy try to make a grand gesture towards Pam tonight?!
Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9161 Read Count: 15222 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: December 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
This is so adorable. I just read the entire thing and I loved it! I love how Jane has qualities from both Jim and Pam and Kurt seems pretty normal.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it!
I couldn't decide at first how far to go w/Kurt - and decided that his quirk would be that he's got all the normal traits from his parents.
And Jane - well...with parents like hers - I couldn't resist. ;)
Pam isn't ok.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1639 Read Count: 2159 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh this was beautiful! i absolutely loved the last two sentences. every girl needs a jim.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like those sentences too :)
...I know I wish I had a Jim...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2718 Read Count: 5635 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day Back
ahh...the way it should be. if only pam had actually spoken up like that, if only she'd just taken a chance. i liked this.
Author's Response: I know! C'mon Pam!
I'm sad. Pam's sad. Jim's sad. Karen's waiting for him at Coopers.
Something had to be done.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2038 Read Count: 5025 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Remembering....
perfect! the parking lot scene was incredibly good.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!!! (and LOL at your screen name! - that's great!) :)
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4477 Read Count: 3592 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh my god. amazing.
More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96586 Read Count: 204511 ePub Downloads: 12
Date: January 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Labor Relations
Ohhh I LOVED this! So perfectly sweet. Jim would be the best daddy. I see this isn't completed...I really hope you do more soon, I absolutely adore it!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Creed, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 979 Read Count: 13559 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Thanksgiving II
This is beautiful...very montage-esque. Thanks for making me cry with the Toby part! And Roy is so wounded, I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks 69 cups! I love Toby but sorry to make you sad. And Roy? I think he had it coming... ;)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1068 Read Count: 1526 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It’s four and half, the half for the time she cried in the parking lot because she was sure she wouldn’t be able to make it to the bathroom and she felt like all of the air had been let out of her and she wondered if Bob Vance had that sort of air pump.
I thought this was so beautiful and sad. The whole thing was, actually. It was so real.
A matched set of Thanksgiving drabbles.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 213 Read Count: 2983 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: November 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Such a beautiful boy. Capable of love with rare depth. She wonders how anyone could turn down that gift.
I've often wondered this myself! And the last line...I was so thankful for that too!
Author's Response: I think we've all been wondering. Thanks alot!
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ryan
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 466 Read Count: 995 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You know what...when Ryan said that whole "can't explain it" thing on the show, I didn't quite understand. But after reading this I really think I get what he means now. I really liked this and I think you captured Ryan perfectly.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Karen, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3270 Read Count: 6953 ePub Downloads: 12
Date: December 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Okay, Chapter 1 was great but Chapter 2 is even better. You describe Jim to a "T" with this: Jim didn’t come off as innocent, he did have a warmth about him – an easy, unaffected manner that clearly indicated the fact that he apparently had no idea how attractive he was.
And I like seeing things from Karen's point of view, and you've sort of nailed the fact that she's so confident yet she finds someone like Jim so intriguing because I think we've seen that in her since GWH. More, soon, please!
Inspired by a quote from my first story, Labor Relations (the one that everyone was set to hate ;-). The quote was: "Would you freak out if I wanted to make a baby"...."Yes, because I really only had a craving for spaghetti tonight - nothing that exotic." This is just a little fluff piece about the night they decided to start "making babies".
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2427 Read Count: 5805 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: DVD Saturday
I loved this! I loved that Jim still calls her "Beesly". And your Jim was perfect. I could actually hear his voice saying these things.
Author's Response: hehehe, I can't imagine him not calling her that. Maybe the next time I write something she or he will have to mention that....hmmm....Thanks so much for the feedback.
A series of related drabbles that begin prior to The Merger and continue on from there.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Andy, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Pam, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14640 Read Count: 70494 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 63: Karen - I Like You Most
You know, I didn't really notice this before, but I like how Karen notices Pam being distracted. I like that even though we all have certain feelings about Karen one way or another, the fact is that she's not dumb and she's rather perceptive. Like, she knows it was Pam that convinced Jim to relent about the apartment and she has no problem thanking her for it. I love this chapter!
Author's Response: That's Karen, she is forthright and perceptive and DOOMED.
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 68: Jim - Aside
This is so, so perfect. The Jim/Michael dialogue is something I could actually hear in my mind, and picture happening. I love so much that Michael compares Pam to Jan, saying that Jim needs Pam to make him whole, in his own Michael way.
Oh, yeah, and I can't wait for Traveling Salesmen! :)
Author's Response: Then Traveling Salesmen you shall have. :)
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 67: Pam - A Mess To Be Made
Oh, Pam and Toby! Like I said before, I love the way you write them, it's just so understandable that they find comfort in each other. I like that Toby edges on being fatherly towards Pam (not in a creepy way), and that he takes care of her and loves her and gets her.
Just...so much love for this chapter!
Author's Response: Hahaha, now I want to see someone write a story wherein Toby gets all creepydad on Pam. I'm so weird.
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 65: Jim - Tiny Vessels
This chapter is just GUH.
His breathing isn't slowing, rather, with every repetition of her name in his head he can feel everything speeding up around him. Pam Pam Pam Pam Pam Pam, until he catches himself and feels right again.
Wow, that line is just so powerful. And Tiny Vessels is just so perfect for this chapter!
Author's Response: It's so sad, I was driving to work the other day and Tiny Vessels came on, and I found myself thinking of Jim and Karen doing it. Kajimbang. Therefore, this chapter was born.
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 59: Toby - Crosses
Oh, I just love your Pam and Toby, how they're just so sweet and understanding of each other, and how they say so much with so few words. I really feel their connection, and it's so sad and lovely.
Author's Response: You know what I love? YOUR Pam and Toby. That's right, I'm turning this review around on you. :)
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 51: Jim - Possession
Okay, I was going to wait until I was done reading all of these to review, but this chapter has my heart in my throat.
(Those dreams are not as bad as the ones that could actually happen, however, sleeping in together on a Sunday morning, laughing; her coming down to breakfast wearing his favorite shirt with her curly hair everywhere.)
Beautiful.
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 58: Pam - I Wish You Love
I can't get enough of these, Bennie. Every detail is so perfect and dead-on.
Date: December 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 35: Pam - Small Figures In A Vast Expanse
Wow. I could honestly go on reading this forever. It's so beautiful and emotional yet so subtle. Please keep going, I'm definitely hooked!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I will keep going, depending on how the Christmas episode goes...but as of now, I'm planning on 100 sections total.
Date: January 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 48: Jim - 9 Crimes
Oh, Bennie...these just break my heart more and more. They're just so beautiful and honest and raw. I'm so glad you're keeping with them because I absolutely love reading them! I like that you include Toby. He makes me sad in the most wonderful way.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I have the hugest crush on sad little Toby, so I had to include him. :)
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 53: Jim - Second Star To The Left, Go Until Dawn
My plan on reviewing this when I'm done reading is shot. You listen to Copeland? I think I love you.
But seriously, the way you've written Jim in this chapter, smiling over her message and then erasing it...God. Just...exactly where Jim would be at that moment.
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 56: Jim - Melt Your Heart
Perfect, perfect dialogue in this chapter. And Jim being alone on New Year's just makes everything.