Reviewer: beth9501 Signed
Date: April 17, 2020
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Idea
This story...when I tell you I look forward to updates, it's an understatement. I LOVE this universe you're creating so much!
When he suggests they move away together I "awwww'd" out loud. Then you broke my heart a little when she had to whisper "I love you" because it's forbidden.
This is like a unique awesome version of Romeo and Juliet, but instead of their parents saying they can't be together, it's society.
I'm with everyone else here, I can't wait to see what happens to them if people find out (if you even go that route) or how Roy and Karen take the news. It's definitely a risk, but I'm so excited to read. Amazing job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so so much!! I also hate that they have to hide, even though I'm the one making them have to hide lol. Hopefully something happens to change that eventually (: Thank you for reviewing!!