I'm a more recent Office fan, but a fan nonetheless!
I like to write a lot of AU fics or focus on what happened after season 9.
He was never meant to end up here, to meet her, and to have his life changed forever.
1 This is amazing! You are quite a talented writer. This was a story I didn't even know I needed!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Beth! I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)
1 I must say, both your stories are complete perfection. They take you away to a different place and time. I was quite excited to see this updated and it did not disappoint. That cliff hanger was cruel, but I bet will be oh so worth it! Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: You are too kind, Beth! Thank you. :)
1 I can't complement you enough for your writing. It paints such a picture. I didn't want this to end and then when it did, it was a cliffhanger! It was so great though, that I had a smile on my face by the end of it. Roy is the worst and Jim is like a knight in shining armor in this saving Pam from Roy.
Author's Response: Beth you are so kind, thank you! Roy is definitely the worst. :)
1 I love this story so much. The descriptions are creating such an amazing visual. James is gentle and kind here while Pam is so sweet. The ending with them in bed together is heartwarming. They're so nervous and James is protecting her. Ugh, adorable all around and a lot of build up. I've been on my toes waiting for this update and it was well worth it!
Author's Response: Thank you, Beth! It's kind of fun writing them from this angle and discovering each other in this setting.
1 This would be a time I wish I'd had the review screen up at the same time as I was reading it.
I absolutely adore this story. The conversations between the two of them are so sweet and you can tell they really care about one another. That last line about her mother being wrong made me laugh. I'm looking forward to see how Jim's family and maybe Katy react to Pam once they meet her.
The parts about Roy and her...he makes me so mad, but I love that Jim just cared about her and wasn't a hypocrite.
Amazing amazing!
Author's Response:
Haha I know! I think I'm going to try that strategy in the future.
Thank you so much, Beth. Philadelphia will be very interesting for many reasons. ;) Thanks for your review!
What a lovely chapter. There is so much to adore about their relationship that I can't pick anything specific as it's all perfect!
Question though, do you have any book recommendations that would be similar to this story/era? I'm always looking for new books and this story has brought me back to enjoying historical fiction.
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Every update you post for this increasing gets better. It's a story with a time period I never want to see ended. Your words are always beautifully written and this update was perfection!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, Beth!
I drop everything as soon as you post an update to this story. Your writing is beautiful and makes me feel like I'm in another era.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Aww, Beth, you are so sweet. Thank you!
Pam lets Roy take her home after Phyllis’ Wedding.
Sometimes you just listen to Tegan and Sara’s entire discography, get lost in your feels about early Grey’s (particularly that time Meredith slept with George) and write this…
1 I really loved this angst! Roy was just so...typical Roy.... and angry Jim turned soft was so pleasant. This was great!
Author's Response: Thanks Beth! I’m glad it was lovable angst!
Sequel for sure! I want to see how their relationship plays out now!
Awesome update and emotional. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Noted, I was leaning towards a sequel as well.
I'm so glad you liked the update, thanks for reviewing!
Awesome ending! I can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the ride, thanks for reviewing all the way through!
Awesome update! Nice cliff hanger too. My reaction was very close to, "NOOOOO!" So it worked.
I am intrigued to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked the chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Wonderful update as always!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear it.
Love the update! My best friend is a civil engineer, I'll be telling her about your story and I'm sure she'll love it!
Author's Response:
Uh oh! I cannot promise accurate descriptions of anything! I was in the faculty of engineering for a year, but that was for comp. Eng.
Still, glad you enjoyed the update, thanks for reviewing!
1 I was MAD mad until that last paragraph. I kept thinking Roy is so dumb and going back to that line in the series where Pam wishes she had just realized sooner that he wasn't right for her.
AND THEN YOU CAME IN WITH THAT LAST PARAGRAPH! Honestly, I am so excited to see this new take on what this looks like. Please don't let them get back together. I'll still read because I was really into this story, but I just love Jam.
Awesome awesome for first time writing drama.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm glad that I was able to evoke such an emotional response from you, whenever I read my writing myself it comes off flat.
Pam certainly has a bumpy road ahead... She may realize later that she still lives with the oaf.
1 I spent most of this chapter with a smile on my face and thinking, "awwww". I love how you're setting this story up. You can still go so many different directions, but I love it regardless!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I could make you smile!
'He thought that one day when things were finally right between them, he would tell her about this evening, and the painting, and the sun in her hair. But this day hadn’t come yet.'
Set before the seasons (and in AU).
1 This is so lovely and you did an amazing job of creating a vivid picture. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you like it.
1 Oh no Larissa! I laughed even though my heart was breaking for Jim! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad this story made you laugh and thank you for reviewing!
1 Ah very relatable in the IT world. I love Pam's way of showing how her life has changed by saying, "it's Halpert now". Just a very real life moment, this was. I enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll be honest I wasn't trying to be deep with Pam's line, I just saw it as purely clerical, so I'm glad you got something more out of it.
Thanks for reviewing!
An AU version of Season 3's "Beach Games." What if Karen wasn't there for beach day? What would that mean for Pam and Jim? A little romance with a touch of mild angst.
1 I love this premise! You did a great job of setting the plot up! I can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking this! Your wait is over--chapter 2 is up now :)
1 AW love this update! If only this had happened!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad fanfiction exists to right some wrongs. Chapter 4 is up now!
AU from “Negotiations”; Roy isn’t in the mood for closure. Pam suffers the consequences and rises from the ashes, while Jim tries to find his way back to her.
1 Woah. A lot of emotion in here. That last line is heart breaking. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.
1 Ugh this is painful to read. This plot is breaking my heart, but you're doing a great job at capturing both of their emotions.
1 You captured all their emotions so well! I'm a little mad at Jim myself right now too. Why should he be assuming the worst? I feel very strongly about this meaning you did a great job. Can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: I'm really glad--thank you! Jim I feel like doesn't mean to be cruel, but can be in self-defense. I hope I can redeem him properly :)
1 One, the opening line....almost had me spitting out my water. Two, this whole premise is just perfect for self destructive Pam. I am loving it. Three, I love drunk Pam so much (hence my current fic lol). Four, this is setting itself up to be the next live read on the chat. Anddd Five, calling out Aly. Lol funny.